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kaze_krazy
08-26-2007, 07:16 PM
Black Rose

A Black Rose, lying on the table
Whose memory did it hold?
None will know of the pain, the lives it held, only a fable. . .
The truth of death and memories; every word left untold

Who remembered them? Who still does?
Joys long lost, hopes long forgotten. . .
Everything left in shadows, in the eyes of lost loves,
And it seems the skies will darken.

A cross, standing beside the way.
I wonder who lied fitful there, dead among the rubble.
Who did they call 'love', only to find Hell to pay?
A lover's words, standing beside the grave, mumbled.

It comes to show what all will lead to,
In this game we call a life.
What will become of us, of you?
Heaven or Hell, what's left behind - a loved one's strife?

What will matter - in the end? . . .

K H P
08-26-2007, 08:14 PM
Plain and simple, it's badass.

The Real keyblade Master
08-26-2007, 08:23 PM
awesome........

leo
08-26-2007, 09:45 PM
a real good poem
like awesome
awe some
lol
the name fits perfect
i might ask u if i can borrow it
but i need to finish the story line for the character
can i base him/her on that

kaze_krazy
08-26-2007, 10:22 PM
thanks everyone

I made it a while ago originally, but remade it so the words actually rhymed and it wasn't one of those 'unrhymed' poems.

sure leo u can borrow it to base on ur character

leo
08-26-2007, 11:59 PM
lol
kool
thanxs
i got the idea bcz i made a sword called the black rose

i might make the story and post it here
i have a lot of ideas

Naminette
08-27-2007, 12:00 AM
OMG You PWN!!!!!!!!!!

kaze_krazy
08-27-2007, 07:26 PM
Haha, thanks Naminette

can't wait to hear ur ideas leo