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LucreciaCresent
09-06-2007, 01:48 AM
This is a song that I made and sang when i was really mad. It's about dieing on your 12th to 14th birthday. You die and then you end up in hell. You come back and you relive that worst day in your life. Well, here is the 'hateful' song.

As my Light Fades within Me

I was only twelve to understand what s@# ment. My older friends talked about it, they told each other that they did it before. I was only twelve to hear it. I went home on my special day. My thriteenth birthday. I asked my parents what s@# was. They told me not to worry about it yet. I was only thriteen.

My light is fading with the lies you tell me! My light goes dim within my broken up heart. Tell me the truth so I don't die out.

i was off to school to the first year of the.....seventh grade. These two boys came up to me. They asked me one question. "Hey pretty baby. Want to learn what s@# is?" They asked to me. I said sure but they only showed me.

My light is fading within my broken up heart! Soemone save me before I go to hell! I don't want to die with all these lies!

The next day I died because of a car crash. I woke up to realize I was in hell! I knew what I did wrong and I sat there to think. The devil let me go the very next day.

It's a blast from the past! I'm realiving the worst thriteen years of my life! I didn't learn what s@# was until I was twenty-two. I never got married and didn't have kids. I'm glad my light is a little faded because of you. Oh......

You may rate this, comment, suggest things on it, and many other things. Thanxs!

The Real keyblade Master
09-06-2007, 01:51 AM
sweet.... actually pretty good Lucrecia...thats what im talking about.:)

LucreciaCresent
09-06-2007, 01:53 AM
Thank you. Is there a creten part in the song you like?

The Real keyblade Master
09-06-2007, 01:55 AM
''I was only twelve to understand what s@# ment. My older friends talked about it, they told each other that they did it before. I was only twelve to hear it. I went home on my special day. My thriteenth birthday. I asked my parents what s@# was. They told me not to worry about it yet. I was only thriteen.

My light is fading with the lies you tell me! My light goes dim within my broken up heart. Tell me the truth so I don't die out.

i was off to school to the first year of the.....seventh grade. These two boys came up to me. They asked me one question. "Hey pretty baby. Want to learn what s@# is?" They asked to me. I said sure but they only showed me.''

i liked this part because lots of young girls can relate.............but im not that young...and im not a girl...so i cant relate......but i liked it!!!! keep it up!

LucreciaCresent
09-06-2007, 02:01 AM
Hey thanks. Why did you like that part? How would you rate this song on a scale to 1 to 10?

The Real keyblade Master
09-06-2007, 02:15 AM
Hey thanks. Why did you like that part? How would you rate this song on a scale to 1 to 10?

hhmmm from 1 to 10.....i would give it an 8...and thats lyrics wise....if i could hear you sing it would be better........

LucreciaCresent
09-06-2007, 02:20 AM
Cool. That I like to hear. You know what the missing word is?

The Real keyblade Master
09-06-2007, 02:21 AM
sex quite simply............

LucreciaCresent
09-06-2007, 02:49 AM
Yup. I didn't put the word in there because the girl was only twelve then thirteen.

The Real keyblade Master
09-06-2007, 03:11 AM
Yup. I didn't put the word in there because the girl was only twelve then thirteen.

good thing you did.........good stuff

LucreciaCresent
09-07-2007, 01:43 AM
Thanks again. I really have an eye for song writing don't I?

Riku, the darkness
09-07-2007, 02:01 AM
*claps* yayz you write really good songs lucrecia

LucreciaCresent
09-07-2007, 02:03 AM
Thanks. I really love you guys! In a friend way. So, Riku, the darkness, what is your favorite part in the song?;)

The Real keyblade Master
09-07-2007, 02:09 AM
holaa peoples.........

LucreciaCresent
09-07-2007, 02:09 AM
Ello! It's Almost Saturday! Yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!