Love poem by RTD

[Riku, the darkness]

You are my friend, you are my heart, you are my love. You shine for me, even in dark, and “until the day I die I’ll spill my heart for you” that light that shines through day and though night helps me find my way to you. When I’m feeling down all’s I have to do is think about you, I need a way to tell you and I think that this is it, I like you a lot, and I hope to be happy, I’ve learned that love is like a tree, it can grow, but it can be chopped down, or die, and I don’t want that to happen, wanting to know what love is I searched, and I’ve found dead ends, but you seem different, there is just a happiness that shines from you that makes all my worries wash away, so when Darkness surrounds me, it wont for long, cause that warm, and bright radiant light of yours will banish it forever.

comments and questions, and dont be afraid to criticize im ok with it

[LucreciaCresent]

May I?

10/10!

I had to. It's beautiful, lovely, sweet, and well, romantic. Nice one RTD!:D :o

[cbchick]

i like it a lot RTD..

[Riku, the darkness]

Thank you

[The Real keyblade Master]

good stuff.............maybe you might get her RTD...........

[Riku, the darkness]

OMG *cries* this like my first love poem

[Wzrdto25]

Is really good

[Riku, the darkness]

Thx

[LucreciaCresent]

Your like...the best I have ever known!

[Riku, the darkness]

THNX some of you already know who this is going to so, yahe

[The Real keyblade Master]

i liked the simile about the tree...........its the truth..........

FNF Up!!!!

[Riku, the darkness]

lol yeah it is

[cbchick]

it made me even more sad..lolz..but i still loved it RTD..

[The Real keyblade Master]

THNX some of you already know who this is going to so, yahe

its for me i kno.........thanks man......

[Riku, the darkness]

lol yeah, man its for you (sarcasm)

[The Real keyblade Master]

lol yeah, man its for you (sarcasm)

lol............well over all its great

[Riku, the darkness]

yeah now waits for the "person" to get on

[The Real keyblade Master]

yeah now waits for the "person" to get on

does the ''person'' know it is for em?

and RTD i think in the last sentence you forgot the word ''light''

[Riku, the darkness]

thank you man

[Demon_Yuki_Roxas]

*cries*so beautiful

[Riku, the darkness]

yeah thats what i said when i made it

[K H P]

Hope she likes it? ;]

[Riku, the darkness]

yeah me too

[Sora-Keyblade]

Nice poem, I like it =D

[Riku, the darkness]

Thnx

[DragoonKain]

Good work, hope she likes it.

[Riku, the darkness]

mee tooo

[kaze_krazy]

omg!!
RTD love the poem its so beautiful

[Riku, the darkness]

well its for you

[kaze_krazy]

well its for you

awww thanks its really beautiful *hugs*

[Riku, the darkness]

thnx it means alot comming from you, Hurry up and pm me have's to tell you something

[Jess]

I've heard this before somewhere, I think. It's beautiful.

[The Real keyblade Master]

I've heard this before somewhere, I think. It's beautiful.

did you?........

[Jess]

I'm not sure lol. It may have just been one of the lines ^^;;;;;;;;

[Courtney]

You are my friend, you are my heart, you are my love. You shine for me, even in dark, and “until the day I die I’ll spill my heart for you” that light that shines through day and though night helps me find my way to you. When I’m feeling down all’s I have to do is think about you, I need a way to tell you and I think that this is it, I like you a lot, and I hope to be happy, I’ve learned that love is like a tree, it can grow, but it can be chopped down, or die, and I don’t want that to happen, wanting to know what love is I searched, and I’ve found dead ends, but you seem different, there is just a happiness that shines from you that makes all my worries wash away, so when Darkness surrounds me, it wont for long, cause that warm, and bright radiant light of yours will banish it forever.

comments and questions, and dont be afraid to criticize im ok with it

aww thats was really cute!your good at writing poems.10/10=]]

[Riku, the darkness]

Thnx And Jess I Know Why You Think That, One Of The Lines Is A Line From A Song Called Until The Day I Die From Story Of The Year

[Riku, the darkness]

idk if this counts as double posting since its been like forever since i even looked at this.....but when in the heck did this get sticky'd....like...was it that good

[Riku, the darkness]

NECROPOSTING lol umm yeah Who stickied this...lol was it that good??

[Helix: The True Hero]

NECROPOSTING lol umm yeah Who stickied this...lol was it that good??

It's just that it has a lot of views.

[Riku, the darkness]

yeah i noticed that...i used this poem for a app. on the writing team so i hope it works out

[Eman_est]

You are my friend, you are my heart, you are my love. You shine for me, even in dark, and “until the day I die I’ll spill my heart for you” that light that shines through day and though night helps me find my way to you. When I’m feeling down all’s I have to do is think about you, I need a way to tell you and I think that this is it, I like you a lot, and I hope to be happy, I’ve learned that love is like a tree, it can grow, but it can be chopped down, or die, and I don’t want that to happen, wanting to know what love is I searched, and I’ve found dead ends, but you seem different, there is just a happiness that shines from you that makes all my worries wash away, so when Darkness surrounds me, it wont for long, cause that warm, and bright radiant light of yours will banish it forever.

comments and questions, and dont be afraid to criticize im ok with it

dude awesome poem i jealous of u rite now

[Riku, the darkness]

Thanks even though its like a GILLION years old. That and i dont even talk to the person that it was too anymore.