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Soul Of Destiny
09-12-2007, 07:15 PM
Sitting, Waiting Agitated. Not one thing in this god forsaken place we call earth can be worse than being shunned by those few close to you. Nothing that you, nor I can do would be worse than being out casted from the place you call home. Or the ones closest to me in my life, not a thing. But I Guess that comes, with the territory, and ominous landscape of, never ending calamity.

Life; What is it? Is it a game? Or is it just a lame excuse to hurt someone? Nobody knows, and most likely; no one ever will. What you have to do, is remain strong, remain HEADSTRONG. No matter what.

Life is painful and short lived. And often taken for granted. But most people say, that life's not fair. It's never been fair, not since it's start. Not to any creature, or being in this life, the past life, or the next. So before you think life's not fair, remember one simple thing, it was NEVER MEANT TO BE.

People complain about how rough their life is, most of those people have it good. Think of poor people, they have no where to live, nothing to eat, so they have to bum money from bystanders. And most of the time, you shun them, call them weird and shoo them away from you. How do you think they feel? All they're trying to do is get some food, and survive. And what are you doing? Nothing, not ONE thing.

So, after reading this, re-think your strategy in life. Think about your plans, and goals in life, and think: Is it the right thing to do? How will it service man? Or, Are you just another pawn in whatever is running our lives?

Thanks for listening.

Trentt;

Wzrdto25
09-13-2007, 08:23 AM
i like it
as guy would say
"deep man........"

Helix: The True Hero
09-13-2007, 02:01 PM
Ownage, thy name is SOD......*Bows down*

Soul Of Destiny
09-13-2007, 02:51 PM
Lol. Thank you all. I've been re-thinking my life alot lately. And realizing that I cant do things I used to be able to do.

Or WANT to do. Most of my life now, is all school and work. And when you finally notice you have no life, it really hits you hard.

Helix: The True Hero
09-13-2007, 02:52 PM
*Cough* Tone it down, man...you're making yourself sound like an old person, lol. :rolleyes:

Soul Of Destiny
09-13-2007, 05:46 PM
I am quite and old person, in my ability to think. I'm very, as you could say, Wise when it comes down to life. So I thought I would share some with you all.

Wzrdto25
09-13-2007, 08:50 PM
eek it was still great
*claps for SoD*

Soul Of Destiny
09-13-2007, 09:01 PM
*Wishes more people would come read and comment*

X___X

Helix: The True Hero
09-14-2007, 04:33 AM
*Reads it again*

Hmm....this time, I found it to be on a bit of the subtle side, if I do say so myself. :cool:

Soul Of Destiny
09-14-2007, 03:53 PM
The reason I wrote this, is because something bad happened to me. And I wished to change my outlook on things. And it did work, If I may say so myself. :cool: