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Wzrdto25
09-15-2007, 08:54 PM
Of all the friends i have and love,
The ones i hold so dear,
They make me want to thank God above,
Cause he sent them here,

There's this guy who is like my equal,
This girl who always cries,
Always getting back up after any fall,
My bestest friend until the day she dies,

Theres the girl that always worries,
And the guy that loves her so,
She always seems to call me,
He's always on the go,

Then we have the guy thats always random,
And the funny girl,
The subject always dumb,
She's always there to twirl,

To the girl thats too sweet,
And the youngest fellow,
She can conquer any feat,
He thinks his voice is low,

I would like to mention oh so many more,
A boy that always smiles,
Opening those closed doors,
Every once in awhile,

Theres many friends that i have,
And wish i could keep,
But sometimes act to bad,
And they think too deep,

These people are my best friends,
And them i'll never forget,
But for once i wish they'd see me and who i really am,
But never mind it's not worth it,

cbchick
09-15-2007, 08:57 PM
i like that Willie..XD

Wzrdto25
09-15-2007, 08:59 PM
i suck at ryming lolz

cbchick
09-15-2007, 09:00 PM
but its still good though..

Axizol
09-16-2007, 04:27 PM
nice, the rhyming is good, and the flow is a tad choppy, but I'd bet if you keep writing poetry, then that would go away. ;)

Jess
09-16-2007, 10:13 PM
it's beautiful T-T

<3333333

Sora
09-16-2007, 10:30 PM
That's nice, Willie. Good job. ;)

Helix: The True Hero
09-16-2007, 10:32 PM
That's nice, Willie. Good job. ;)

Suck up. >_>

XD

Good job, Wzrd...*Pats back*

Naminette
09-17-2007, 12:30 AM
I think it`s really good *tries to think of funny girl with stupid subjects* *Points at self* *leaves* :p

Wzrdto25
09-17-2007, 07:53 AM
thanks lolz

K H P
09-17-2007, 11:33 AM
Nice, makes me wanna write right now.

Ha, write....right now, crack myself up. :3

Sora-Keyblade
09-17-2007, 08:17 PM
Good work dude :0 I love it *Still thinks that his voice is low -_-*

Demon_Yuki_Roxas
09-17-2007, 09:02 PM
^_^ wz do good job(i think i'm the funny one)