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Riku, the darkness
10-02-2007, 10:13 PM
SAME~FATE

were here for nothing
just to live
just to be here
no one knows the meaning
cause there isnt one,
cause in the end we all have
the same fate
we all die

4thkeybladeholder
10-03-2007, 12:45 AM
hmm...
Do you want an opinion on it?
If so, I can give you one.
And if you dont want one, I will still give one. lol

Okay, I find it pretty good, do you write poems often?

What type of poem is this? I feel like you've used a certain type, but I cant think right now.

Anyways, its rather straight to the point, leaving no questions to be asked.
As far as I see, their isn't that much of a hidden meaning, but it could have some different meanings to different people. Understand?

So, I find it pretty good. I could point out things, but I dont want to.

Riku, the darkness
10-03-2007, 12:52 AM
ok, i used and emo style, kinda, but its true i dont think anything is hidden in it, thanx for the comment, yeah i write poem often but im no good at it