it's a kinda short poem.

[Jess]

I didn't mean to leave dear
I simply thought I would arrive
But it seems here
I'm not quite alive
where you are
The room will not fill with light
But an absence
that makes its way into mine

I'll share your ghost tonight

I don't fall asleep til
dark divorces the sky
When I sit still
my thoughts crawl back to your side

I'll share your ghost tonight.




. . . so whadya think?

[cbchick]

i LOVE it Jess <333

[KHManiac]

Nice, short an sweet. Though I think you should have added four more lines to the second stanza so it balances out with the first stanza.

[CAP]

sounds nice

[Jess]

thanks ^^
i'm gunna start to write more aha

[SexySasukelover]

That's a nice poem Jess.

[H Leaf]

This is the first time i have commented in Fanfic, but yea i loved it - reminded me of Silent Hill.2

[Tyas]

I liked it,:D nice work Jess

[Katsuyalvr13]

awesome poem:)

[Kh3fan02]

Very nice Jess! I look forward to seeing some more from you! :)