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Chaser's Apprentice
11-13-2007, 09:18 PM
I went to a party,
And remembered what you said.
You told me not to drink,
So I had a Sprite instead.

I felt proud of myself,
The way you said I would,
That I didn't drink and drive,
Though some friends said I should.

I made a healthy choice,
And your advice to me was right.
The party finally ended,
And the kids drove out of sight.

I got into my car,
To get home in one piece.
I never knew what was coming, Mom,
Something I expected least.

Now I'm lying on the pavement,
And I hear the policeman say,
"The kid that caused this wreck was drunk."
Mom, his voice seems far away.

My own blood's all around me,
As I try hard not to cry.
I can hear the paramedic say,
"This kid is going to die."

I'm sure the guy had no idea,
While he was flying high.
Because he chose to drink and drive,
Now I would have to die.

So why do people do it, Mom,
Knowing that it ruins lives?
And now the pain is cutting me,
Like a hundred stabbing knives.

Tell sister not to be afraid,
Tell daddy to be brave.
And when I go to heaven,
Put 'Mommy's Boy' on my grave.

Someone should have taught him,
That it's wrong to drink and drive.
Maybe if his parents had,
I would still be alive.

My breath is getting shorter,
Mom I'm getting really scared
These are my final moments,
And I'm completely unprepared.

I wish that you could hold me Mom,
As I lie here and die.
I wish that I could say, 'I love you, Mom!'
So I love you and goodbye.

^^, Hellooooo...!
'<GOEZ DEMYX, LUXORD, AND HAPPY FEETZ>'

TerraT3
11-13-2007, 10:22 PM
deep and nice i really liked the rhyms

CAP
11-13-2007, 10:24 PM
damn thats a crazy story.

Miko
11-14-2007, 12:32 AM
Dude. im hoping you show more of this serious poetic side.

CAP
11-14-2007, 12:33 AM
Dude. im hoping you show more of this serious poetic side.

im hoping you can make me a sig like that :p
(but with sora in it)

Miko
11-14-2007, 12:41 AM
please dont stray away from the topic.

you requested a sig 6 days ago

according to the rules, in to weeks request a new one

so 18 days


CA write more your peom is very moving

CAP
11-14-2007, 12:41 AM
k brah

Number13Roxas
11-14-2007, 01:41 AM
I like it.its touching,very sad.

Sora-Keyblade
11-14-2007, 08:31 PM
Nice poem, but I think I was reading that in one of the billions (Maybe trillions) Myspace chain letters, talking about Drunk Drivers causing death o.o

kyo
11-15-2007, 04:26 AM
I agree with the above. Nice story though. Although I think it would have made a nice touch to add the whole "send this to ten people and your crush will ......" at the end, but I would have laughed at the story then. I like sprite.