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Miko
11-14-2007, 02:37 AM
(horrible. >_>)


I sit there, in this room
Where i am, i see so much
The gossip, the bickering, the socialization.
Would i want to be apart of that?

My eyes close, Just for a blink
But thoughts, images BY THE MILLIONS FLOOD MY MIND!!
Imagine the possibilities?
I stop. I come to this...this one situation.

I see myself, am i one of them?
I'm gossiping? I'm Bickering? I'm socializing?
But yes, I'm smiling, The look of happiness!!
Do i really fit in now?!

But of course, i open my eyes..
Only to find bits and pieces of food thrown at me.
I have become the center of attention.
But for the wrong reasons.

Is this how I'm viewed?
The laughing stock?
For my pain,
Comes other people's pleasures?

If they actually get to know who i am.
If they actually knew me.

cbchick
11-14-2007, 02:45 AM
good Miko^^^

Sora
11-14-2007, 02:46 AM
Neat job.

Kh3fan02
11-14-2007, 02:57 AM
Comments like "Great job" or "I really like it" are not enough to describe how much emotion it contains, and how the hidden meaning is so powerful! Dude, I don't know how many times I'm going to tell you this (and if it's hundreds..let it be that then), you have quite the talent for writing! Though you may not think it personally, you must always know that there are people out there who care for your work, and will love to see more of it! ;)

_Roxas_
11-14-2007, 05:57 AM
(horrible. >_>)


I sit there, in this room
Where i am, i see so much
The gossip, the bickering, the socialization.
Would i want to be apart of that?

My eyes close, Just for a blink
But thoughts, images BY THE MILLIONS FLOOD MY MIND!!
Imagine the possibilities?
I stop. I come to this...this one situation.

I see myself, am i one of them?
I'm gossiping? I'm Bickering? I'm socializing?
But yes, I'm smiling, The look of happiness!!
Do i really fit in now?!

But of course, i open my eyes..
Only to find bits and pieces of food thrown at me.
I have become the center of attention.
But for the wrong reasons.

Is this how I'm viewed?
The laughing stock?
For my pain,
Comes other people's pleasures?

If they actually get to know who i am.
If they actually knew me.
^^
Nice actually is what I consider. Love to see more. Unfortunetly, you got lucky since this is a school night ;)
Nice. I couldn't think how better can it get.

Miko
11-15-2007, 02:49 AM
School?

lol no

but anyways thanks :]