I'm Always there ~A poem by me~

[Roxas_Roxi]

I'm always here for you...
even when you don't know,
You can never see me...
for you never talk to me,
You never look at me...
you say your too shy,
You look for me...
even though I stand in front of your eyes.
I'm always with you,
even it you don't notice me,
I'm there,
for you.
Please rate. This is my first time poem and i don't know if it's good or not. Please rate 1-10 please and explain why you choose that number.

[4thkeybladeholder]

7/10. Why you ask? Cuz you say its your first and its really very good for a first time thing. I like the deepness of it, and the images I get from it.

[Roxas_Roxi]

Thank you 4th.

[4thkeybladeholder]

no no, thank you. lol
I enjoyed reading it.
I hope you'll let me read some more sometime.

[Roxas_Roxi]

I might. I 'll let you read my Lost Memories & Lost Life when it's done. lol

[4thkeybladeholder]

Sick! I can't wait.

[Roxas_Roxi]

:rolleyes: Wtf? lol

[4thkeybladeholder]

lol, is it wrong to enjoy a good writers poems?

[Roxas_Roxi]

IDK! *hugs* Thanks for enjoying it though. :p :D