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Xehanort
12-21-2007, 04:36 AM
We Exist Together Now, Two Corpses in One Grave
An Ode to Gravemind

Silence fills the empty grave, now that I have gone.
But my mind is not at rest, for questions linger on.
I will ask and you will answer for our fate remains the same;
We exist together now, two corpses in one grave.

Now the gate has been unlatched, headstones pushed aside,
Corpses shift and offer room; a fate you must abide!
Child of my enemy, why have you come?
I offer no forgiveness; father's sins pass to his son.

You will search one likely spot, and you will search another.
Fate had us meet as foes, but soon we will be brothers.
I am a timeless chorus. Join your voice with mine;
Sing victory everlasting, a victory for all time!

Silence fills the empty grave, now that I have gone.
But my mind is not at rest, for questions linger on.
I will ask and you will answer for our fate remains the same;
We exist together now, two corpses in one grave.


Well, what do you think? Questions... Comments...
Some of the verses I used were Gravemind quotes, but most of them I twisted in order to fit poem format.

Darkness Falls
12-21-2007, 09:19 PM
Thats tight. Heh, I salute you. You are the better poet. =)

Roxas 1994
12-21-2007, 10:23 PM
HALO!!!! It was awesome.

The King of KH
12-21-2007, 11:40 PM
nice...............