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Door To Light
12-22-2007, 05:11 AM
This is something i wrote a long time ago when i was depressed alot and before my angel came, and saved me, i just stumbled acrossed it earlier, so tell me what you think



it comes unexpectedly....
at first its nothing...
then it starts to consume your soul..
eats and tears into your flesh...
makes you worthless...so worthless...
its agonizing...unbearable pain...
first comes the pain....
Then the suffering...
Eventually you go numb...
then you slowly start dying inside....

cbchick
12-22-2007, 05:21 AM
its good Rudy.

The King of KH
12-22-2007, 04:21 PM
nice rudy.................

Door To Light
12-23-2007, 01:31 AM
thanks guys