kingdom hearts:the seven

[master of nothingness]

hey this is just something im writeing. i dont know if this is in the right section so srry if it isnt,and no one can join it i would like some coments though.:)




The moon hung in the starless sky casting its sillver light apun the world that lay befour it. It staired down like the eye of god observing the set of ilaind. one was small with a feild of houses built apun its surrface. the second ilaind was twice as large though but was devoid of life. It was perfectaly circular with a snaking beach that ran arund it. beyond the beach there grew a thick forrest made mostly of palm trees that swayed in the gental night breez.
The eyes gaze shifted now, it traced the legth of the beach stoping to stair apun a gruop of three. A girl, and two boys.



This is just a ruogh draft thuogh so i need magor edvice. i have a version with better details but i cant fined it right now. srry if it sucks.

[Superstar]

That so totally rocks! You would be a good story writer. Where does that take place?:D I'm impressed.

[master of nothingness]

it on destiny ilaind befour kingdom hearts actully starts. so evrythings peacfull for now.;)

[Kingdomhearts 3]

whats the story about?

[Superstar]

Well didn't you read it? LOL J/K I want to help write some?:D

[Kingdomhearts 3]

i did, its very detailed about Destiny Islands, it doesnt sound much of a story

[Superstar]

Well that's mean.

[Riku]

No offence, but if you want to be a writer, can you learn how to spell and/or type? (I don't know whether they're all typos or spelling mistakes.)

[Kingdomhearts 3]

Well that's mean.

sorry, i didnt mean to be mean, i just was wondering what it was about...

[master of nothingness]

im a terrbole speller and i take no offens. and it takes place a week befoure the events of kingdom hearts 1 its an adaptaion of the game but with parts i add in my self but youll see that on my next post.

[Tidus]

If you fix the spelling problems then it will be ok:)

[Superstar]

Sorry Riku but you would think that a mod would be nice to those who at least give there ideas out. No one knows mine except a few people.

[Riku]

A Moderator generally helps other people, but sorry to say, I can't read something like that when it's misspelt so much. I'll try and decipher it:

The moon hung in the starless sky casting its silver light upon the world that lay before it. It stared down like the Eye of God observing the set of islands. One was small with a field of houses built upon its surface. The second island was twice as large though, but was devoid of life. It was perfectaly circular with a snaking beach that ran arund it. Beyond the beach there grew a thick forest made mostly of palm trees that swayed in the gental night breeze.

The Eye's gaze shifted now. It traced the length of the beach stopping to stare upon a group of three - A girl, and two boys.

So it's a good spiced up way of describing Destiny Islands. Well done.

[master of nothingness]

thanks a lot:D but i have a better version that im going to post

[sora in the dark]

hey this is just something im writeing. i dont know if this is in the right section so srry if it isnt,and no one can join it i would like some coments though.:)




The moon hung in the starless sky casting its sillver light apun the world that lay befour it. It staired down like the eye of god observing the set of ilaind. one was small with a feild of houses built apun its surrface. the second ilaind was twice as large though but was devoid of life. It was perfectaly circular with a snaking beach that ran arund it. beyond the beach there grew a thick forrest made mostly of palm trees that swayed in the gental night breez.
The eyes gaze shifted now, it traced the legth of the beach stoping to stair apun a gruop of three. A girl, and two boys.



This is just a ruogh draft thuogh so i need magor edvice. i have a version with better details but i cant fined it right now. srry if it sucks.


is that a poem and if it is cool i like it and i was wondering if i can post a poem up on this thread if its okay with you

[master of nothingness]

its not a poem and no i dont mined if you post a poem but the mods might

[sora in the dark]

its not a poem and no i dont mined if you post a poem but the mods might

hey riku do you mind or eney other mod do ya all mind

[Riku]

If it's to do with Kingdom Hearts, no problem.

I don't think this is a poem.