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Rex
02-05-2008, 08:33 PM
ok I need help with this RPG....can you guys help me?

December 3 3010 a group of scientists digging in a remote part of the African safari discovers a portal that is believed to be connected to another demotion. The scientists set up camp near the portal they called Alpha Nine. For moths the team studies the portal by sending small items into it like keys, dollars, and jewelry tied in string. Soon they begin to send larger items into the portal like wood, small animals like goat and sheep. They soon find light green goop on the string and study the goop to see if it is just an effect of the portal or something else. What the scientists discover amazes them. In the goop they find small organisms. Soon the team starts to think of a way to get more information about the portal so they send a land rover with a digital video camera on it into the portal. What they find is another world filled with plants and small flying animals. The camera stays in the portal for three days collecting data on the animals it found and the world it had gone into. On the fourth day the camera was attacked by an unknown creature. As the scientists try and get the camera on line something came through the portal. The scientists figured it was just a small animal that wondered into the portal…they were wrong. The creature that came through the portal was a scorpionbee. The scientists where attacked by the massive monster. Soon more creatures appeared out of the portal and began to attack the world. The world was attacked and on December 25 3010 the world had entered world war III. The world fought back with the new robots called MECHS but the enemy forces where to great will one fell to the MECHS 20 more came out of Alpha Nine to take its place. Now the fate of the world rest on a group of army personnel who have survived the attacks and head have to head through the last five remaining cities to get to Africa and destroy Alpha Nine.
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Monster list:
http://s231.photobucket.com/albums/ee244/rexdarkheart/cretures%20Knights%20and%20robots/Monsters%20and%20creatures/?action=view&current=527b915a.pbw <-------- must read.
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MECH list:

http://s231.photobucket.com/albums/ee244/rexdarkheart/cretures%20Knights%20and%20robots/machines/?action=view&current=4a0a08a5.pbw<------- must read
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MECH Abilities:

MECH Armory
the MECH Armory is equipped with two shoulder rocket box's as well as two under arm rocket box's it's arms are contacted to a shot gun barrel's with a small machine attached to it. It runs at about 30 miles per hour and also has a built in shied to protect the driver.

MECH Speeder
The MECH Speeder is equipped with a small rocket box that can fire five rockets at once. It also is equipped with three laser guns on both its sides and one on top. It can reach speeds of 65 miles per hour. Its legs have built in propellers that help it swim under water.

MECH Rider
The MECH Rider is a smaller version of the MECH walker. It is smaller but faster. The MECH Rider has three plasma guns on each side and two in the front. It also has a Rocket Barrel under its cock pit so incase of close combat it can shoot enemies without them knowing. The MECH Rider can reach speeds up to 45 miles per hour. And with build in tracks it can easily change into a tank


MECH T-Rex
The MECH T-Rex is another mode from the MECH walker. The MECH T-Rex's cock pit his hidden so the driver is safe. It has two powerful plasma guns on its hands and has rocket boxes on its shoulders and can reach speeds of 25 miles per hour. Equipped with mine bombs the MECH T-Rex can kill and enemy without the enemy knowing.

MECH Falcon
The MECH Falcon is one of the MECH that can be used in close and long rang combat. Equipped with plasma guns and shoulder box rockets the falcon can use its homing missiles to not only kill the enemy but take down the enemy’s comrades. Reaching speeds of 40 miles per hour. The falcon is one MECH that will never say die.

MECH lightreconrunner
The MECH lightreconrunner is a smaller version of the MECH Linebacker. Equipped with plasma guns on each side and two under the cock pit also with the small box rocket launcher and it's capability to fly the MECH lightreconrunner will reach speeds of 45 miles per hour on the ground and 75 miles per hour in the air.

MECH Linebacker
The MECH Linebacker may look big and slow but actually it reaches speeds of 55 miles per hour and with box rocket launcher tow massive plasma canons and its digging capabilities the MECH Linebacker is known as the one MECH army.

MECH walker
The MECH walker is one of the deadliest MECH an enemy could be faced with. With its capabilities to open all its doors and shoot thousands of rockets at the enemy and its two giant plasma canons. Reaching speeds of 45 miles an hour. The MECH walker gets it done.

MECH turbo
The MECH turbo gets its name from its speed. With two box Rocket launcher on each shoulder and its two plasma cannons it is a force to reckon with. Without its turbo rockets it can reach speeds of 45 miles per hour but with the turbo it can reach speeds of 100 miles per hour.

MECH Mammoth
The MECH Mammoth may lack in speed only reaching 25 miles per hour it greatly makes up in fire power. Using any and all weapons imaginable the MECH Mammoth lives up to its name.

MECH Raptor
The MECH Raptor is the little brother of the MECH speeder only with one difference. It has two small box rocket launchers and can reach speeds of 110 mile per hour.

MECH runner
The MECH runner is a smaller version of the MECH Mammoth using only rocket launchers and plasma guns the MECH runner can reach speeds of 75 miles per hour and can control other MECH at the same time.

MECH Nova cat
The MECH Nova cat is an evil MECH when it comes to combat not only will it use its Ability to go invisible but with its left twin plasma gun and its triple Plasma gun Barrels and is 55 mile an hour speed limit. It may be the best choice in combat.

MECH Blood Assault
The MECH Blood Assault is hocked up with two plasma guns for hands two box Rocket launcher and if that was not enough it is also hocked with two lighting plasma guns on top of its shoulders. Reaching speeds of 65 miles per hour...ya it’s that damn good.

MECH Light runner
The MECH speeder and MECH Raptors brother it can reach speeds of 120 miles per hour with two plasma guns on each side.
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Assistance Robots:

http://s231.photobucket.com/albums/ee244/rexdarkheart/cretures%20Knights%20and%20robots/machines/?action=view&current=a2acac65.pbw<---------Must read
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Assistance Robots Abilities:

Metal Scorpion Version 1
The Metal Scorpion Version 1 is as big as a dump truck. It easily attaches to any MECH. the Metal Scorpion Version 1 is equipped with a right arm with plasma machine gun and a left arm with not only a plasma gun but a box Rocket launcher. It also has a tail with a built in camera. It can also dig under ground

Metal Scorpion Version 2
The Metal Scorpion Version 2 is like its older brother the Metal Scorpion Version 1 only with different weapons. It has no arms but machine guns on both sides and a poison plasma dart Rocket launcher.

Metal Scorpion Version 3
The Metal Scorpion Version 3 is like it’s it's two older brothers yet it has claws each with plasma rockets and machine guns.

Metal Bee
The Metal Bee it as big as a small baby hippo. It can attach to any MECH. with its ability to fly 55 miles per hour. With its two machine guns on both sides and its needle rockets the Metal Bee is like a Real bee...with its entire attitude.

Blue robo
The blue robo is as tall as its partner. So if your 5"11 then the blue robo is 5"11. It can attached to any MECH it comes equipped with two plasma sword and two plasma guns. The Blue Robo it a mini MECH.
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The five remaining cities:
http://s231.photobucket.com/albums/ee244/rexdarkheart/City/?action=view&current=aa8f6afe.pbw<-----must read
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Character sheet:
Username:
Name:
Gender:
Age (nothing over 30):
MECH type:
Assistance Robot: (only one)
Rank:
BIO:
Appearance:
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My character sheet:
Username: rex
Name: Rex Darkheart
Gender: male
Age (nothing over 30): 28
MECH type: Blood Assault
Assistance Robot: Metal scorpion Version 1
Rank: S
BIO: Rex joined the army to be closer to his father. Soon after the monsters where set lose his father died in battle and now Rex wants revenge on all the monsters.
Appetence:
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee244/rexdarkheart/cretures%20Knights%20and%20robots/Warriors/BlacksashKnightMariusbywredwrat.jpg

Username: rex
Name: Nails Darkheart
Gender: male
Age (nothing over 30): 30
MECH type: MECH Nova Cat
Assistance Robot: Metal Scorpion Version 3
Rank: S
BIO: Nails joined the army because he wanted to make sure his two little brothers Rex and Zack are safe.
Appearance:
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee244/rexdarkheart/cretures%20Knights%20and%20robots/Warriors/CowboyguybySC4V3NG3R.jpg



Username: rex
Name: Zack Darkheart
Gender: male
Age (nothing over 30): 18
MECH type: MECH Mammoth
Assistance Robot: Blue robo
Rank: S
BIO: Zack wanted to be with his two big brothers.
Appetence:
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee244/rexdarkheart/Anime%20Guys/085-1.jpg

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Rules:
- Let everyone have their moment.
- Your not allowed killing a character unless you’re permeated by the user of the character you want to kill.
- Respect other players.
- No spamming
- No god-modding
- have fun.
- You must read all the "must reads". After you do this put in your post "MECH's forever"

Rex
02-05-2008, 11:30 PM
would anyone like to help me???

TwilightPrince
02-06-2008, 02:02 PM
ill try maybe you should list some of the creatures and the cities that are still standing

Rex
02-06-2008, 04:47 PM
ill try maybe you should list some of the creatures and the cities that are still standing

thats a good idea...but where do I put it?

Tidus dude
02-06-2008, 04:52 PM
Urrmmm you could put that instead of the never ending supply of Robots. @_@

By that I mean, instead of showing the pics, just show the link to the image.

Rex
02-06-2008, 06:29 PM
Urrmmm you could put that instead of the never ending supply of Robots. @_@

By that I mean, instead of showing the pics, just show the link to the image.

or I could put it in a slide show like I didi with the monsters

TwilightPrince
02-06-2008, 07:46 PM
thats a good idea too also maybe what each robots special ability is

Rex
02-06-2008, 10:29 PM
thats a good idea too also maybe what each robots special ability is

I'm not really good with making special abilitys.

Tidus dude
02-06-2008, 10:42 PM
or I could put it in a slide show like I didi with the monsters

That could work. :)

Maybe have a list of Places..Abilities...the works. >.>

Rex
02-06-2008, 10:48 PM
That could work. :)

Maybe have a list of Places..Abilities...the works. >.>

well could you help me with the Abilities?

Rex
02-06-2008, 11:46 PM
ok so I put the MECH Abilities in...should I put the assistance Robots Abilities in too?

KH2_FinalSora
02-07-2008, 01:40 PM
This probably won't help much, but it helps some. I've noticed that your missing capitals in some places where they should be, and some words are...wrong.

For instance...
demotion - I think you mean dimension
and something on the lines of...
World War III.

There may be more, but I have short memory in the mornings...

VenFan
02-07-2008, 01:49 PM
Yeah. Grammar and capitalization is important, too. And you say you're 27, right?

Rex
02-07-2008, 02:40 PM
Yeah. Grammar and capitalization is important, too. And you say you're 27, right?

28 actualy...I'm getting older so I kind of rush things...god I wish I was 18 again

KH2_FinalSora
02-07-2008, 02:41 PM
*is 17*

Yeah...well...um....work on grammar and spelling. It helps a lot.

Frogs557
02-07-2008, 03:15 PM
hes 28 and hes married. the man has a lot on his mind, give him a break.

KH2_FinalSora
02-07-2008, 03:29 PM
......I realize this is off topic...but everybody has stuff to deal with. He may have a lot on his mind, but so do you, and I, and pretty much everyone else on this forum and in this world. Besides, my job is to help people, which is what I'm doing.

Rex
02-07-2008, 04:03 PM
Well I just fixed everything but a new question has come up....should I put in the description of the cites with the pictures?

Tidus dude
02-07-2008, 04:03 PM
Enough with the spam guys. ;) I don't want to close this on a count of spam. >.>

Anyway, maybe you should change the story, I mean you only added Mech abilities, and the Graders, don't like it still. Sorry bud.

Rex
02-07-2008, 05:12 PM
Enough with the spam guys. ;) I don't want to close this on a count of spam. >.>

Anyway, maybe you should change the story, I mean you only added Mech abilities, and the Graders, don't like it still. Sorry bud.

scrow the Graders man there not eveyone in this site so I'm just going to post it and see where it go's.

Tidus dude
02-07-2008, 05:15 PM
scrow the Graders man there not eveyone in this site so I'm just going to post it and see where it go's.

Now I am mad..."screw the graders". Wow, just because they don't like your RPG.
So you have to be a big baby and cry and whine over it, yikes. PLus your are a grader. >.>
Whatever man, good luck with the thread.

Rex
02-07-2008, 07:56 PM
Now I am mad..."screw the graders". Wow, just because they don't like your RPG.
So you have to be a big baby and cry and whine over it, yikes. PLus your are a grader. >.>
Whatever man, good luck with the thread.

again...I'm not I mad at you...and the only reason why I'm pissed is because no grader ever gives reason to why its bad. it's eather we don't like it or you have to many RPG's.