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Wzrdto25
02-11-2008, 08:47 AM
Well the Newspaper Team is always willing to accept new members!

We need

Writers: (3 or 4)
Interviewers: (3 or 4)
Poem/Quote Director: (1 or 2)

Template:
Username:
Age:
Grade Level:
Skills in English:
Why do you think you should be on the team?:
Position applying for:
Rate of Activity on the forums:
(not for editors) example of article/poem/quote/interview:
note: must be your own work

Post them here, do not Private Message Me

Positions:

Writers: Foundation of the team, they provide articles based upon different aspects of the forums and other entertainment. These people are responsible for maintaining the regulations of the articles. As a requirement you must be willing to work as hard as you can, and always meet deadlines, providing enough time for your editor to double check your work and hand it in.

Editors: Are expected to make sure grammar and spelling is correct in all senses this means double and even triple checking your work. As a requirement you must have extensive knowledge of the English language and know how to conduct a flowing article. If something is out of place or not needed make sure to remove it without any remorse. It is your job to support the foundation by providing a smooth surface for the writers to work.

Poem/Quote Director: Significantly brings literature and culture of writing to the Newspaper, including quotes about seasons and poems about eye-catching subjects. It is you job to submit one of either to the paper before the demanded deadline.

Interviewers: Yours is a job unlike any other, you must go to various people and get their opinions on a topic of your selection. You get to express the ideas of the people, into quotes via the ways of a Q&A (or question and answer) method. You are a very big asset to the team.

Deadlines:
Are always the most important date on the team, never forget this date, if missed there will be severe consequences.



Thanks
Wzrd
Acting NT Leader

UltimaxWeapon
02-12-2008, 09:17 PM
Username: ultima weapon 7731
Age: 14
Grade Level: 9th
Skills in English: very good
Why do you think you should be on the team?: because i think it would be a cool job and im good at writing reports
Position applying for: writer
Rate of Activity on the forums: everyday

RXS
02-12-2008, 09:27 PM
im already ON the NT, but can i apply to be an editor, will?

Username: Raging Xtreme Spiders
Age: 15 1/2 =]
Grade Level: 9th
Skills in English: well i have a B in english 1 honors. only cause the teachers hates me...
Why do you think you should be on the team?: already am ;) i wanna be an editor cause i like correcting stuff
Position applying for: Editor
Rate of Activity on the forums: EVERY. SINGLE. DAY.

Roxas[Nobody]
02-12-2008, 09:35 PM
Username: ultima weapon 7731
Age: 14
Grade Level: 9th
Skills in English: very good
Why do you think you should be on the team?: because i think it would be a cool job and im good at writing reports
Position applying for: writer
Rate of Activity on the forums: everyday

you have no example of u work.
*thumbs up 2 pete*
u do like correting stuff

UltimaxWeapon
02-12-2008, 09:37 PM
you have no example of u work.
*thumbs up 2 pete*
u do like correting stuff

what are u talking about?

Axizol
02-12-2008, 09:41 PM
he didn't make a requirement to hand in work for writers, although he should have.

I'll talk to him about this.

RXS
02-12-2008, 09:45 PM
yeah he did, in the application

Username:
Age:
Grade Level:
Skills in English:
Why do you think you should be on the team?:
Position applying for:
Rate of Activity on the forums:
(not for editors) example of article/poem/quote/interview:
note: must be your own work

UltimaxWeapon
02-12-2008, 09:47 PM
yaa thats only for editor, im goin for the writer.

RXS
02-12-2008, 09:51 PM
no, it says NOT for editors

Roxas[Nobody]
02-12-2008, 10:08 PM
Username: Roxas{Nobody}
Age: 14
Grade Level: 8th/9th didnt want to skip.
Skills in English: I've been cursed with them. I have a A- in L.A.
Why do you think you should be on the team?: Because I am a good worker and you this.
Postition applying for: Interviewer
Rate of Activity: Everyday
Example: you seen two of my Interviews

_Roxas_
02-12-2008, 10:23 PM
Well heres my application....

Username: _Roxas_
Age: 13
Grade Level: 8
Skills in English: I have a straight-A in my English class. Never gotten below a B in it.
Why do you think you should be on the team?: I am willing to help out whenever possible, I always work well with others, and I like to read Newspapers. XD
Position applying for: Editor
Rate of Activity on the forums: Almost always on. Sometimes weekends and mostly weekdays.

Chaser's Apprentice
02-12-2008, 10:27 PM
...^//^; YAYAZZ! xDD; More people on the team! =PP, This'll be funn! *Is Writer and Editor*
'<GOEZ DEMYX, LUXORD, AND THE HOUSE TEAM>'

Wzrdto25
02-13-2008, 02:08 AM
Post the applications and leave people off-topic discussion will hurt your chances

VenFan
02-13-2008, 02:19 AM
Username: VenFan
Age: 13
Grade Level: 8th
Skills in English: Good, somewhat.
Why do you think you should be on the team?: I think I should be on the team because I'm good when it comes to grammar and spelling, because I think that very crucial, and probably the most important thing when it comes to being on this team.
Position applying for: Editor
Rate of Activity on the forums: 6-7 days a week, ranging from about 30-45 minutes. Sometimes more.

NeoRoxas
02-13-2008, 07:56 PM
OMG so late.. i hope its still not too late

User:NeoRoxas
Age:16
Grade level:11th
Skills:...umm i got a B- on my Junior Research Project. came out of the class with an 93 which is a A- in my school.
Why should I be on this team: i already am i just want to be more involved in the newspaper team and editing is one of my stronger suits.
Position:Editor
Activity Rate: everyday. if im not on assume something horrible happened.

Wzrdto25
02-13-2008, 09:01 PM
Okay editors have too many applicants, we need less editors more writers, so as of now, editors cannot be chosen

Roxas_Roxi
02-15-2008, 01:07 AM
Username: Roxas_Roxi
Age: 17
Grade Level: College
Skills in English: A+
Why do you think you should be on the team?: I'm very good with talking to people and I'm very good at asking Q's and giving many answers. Also, I'm a very good story writing and many other things.
Position applying for: Interviewer
Rate of Activity on the forums: Almost every day

Zeth AngelWing
02-29-2008, 01:07 AM
Username: Zeth AngelWing
Age: 17
Grade Level: Senior in highschool
Skills in English: a
Why do you think you should be on the team?: I think i should be on it because i know i will do my best to do what needs to be done
Position applying for: Writer
Rate of Activity on the forums:Active every day

Wzrdto25
02-29-2008, 09:13 AM
Writers and Interviewers need to have a sample...
Read the Template

VenFan
02-29-2008, 08:28 PM
So, what about everyone else? Are we in?

UltimaxWeapon
03-01-2008, 12:54 AM
ill try this again, but this time its for editor.

Username: Ultima Weapon 7731.
Age: 14.
Grade Level: 9.
Skills in English: B average.
Why do you think you should be on the team?: I'm good with grammer and correcting spelling really quick.
Position applying for: editor.
Rate of Activity on the forums: everyday.

Chaser's Apprentice
03-01-2008, 12:56 AM
ill try this again, but this time its for editor.

Username: Ultima Weapon 7731.
Age: 14.
Grade Level: 9.
Skills in English: B average.
Why do you think you should be on the team?: I'm good with grammer and correcting spelling really quick.
Position applying for: editor.
Rate of Activity on the forums: everyday.

Whoa. O-O; We don't need anymore! Soo...D; I dunno. =PP, *Shruug*
'<GOEZ DEMYX, LUXORD, AND THE HOUSE TEAM>'

Axizol
03-01-2008, 02:31 AM
No more editors, we have too many as it is. I should just go edit that out, but i won't.

And if you weren't already accepted from before, you're not accepted.

UltimaxWeapon
03-01-2008, 02:33 AM
i need a little help with interveiwer.
like what do u have to do?
like how do u make a example of it.

Roxas[Nobody]
03-01-2008, 02:38 AM
i need a little help with interveiwer.
like what do u have to do?
like how do u make a example of it.

interview!
ask questions

Axizol
03-01-2008, 02:38 AM
make an interview?

UltimaxWeapon
03-01-2008, 02:38 AM
make an interview?

but how?
like as an example i mean.
wouldn't u need 2 people for that?

Roxas[Nobody]
03-01-2008, 03:44 AM
anybody on the forum
interview them about what they think about the forum and how they found it.
theres ur topic.

UltimaxWeapon
03-01-2008, 03:47 AM
anybody on the forum
interview them about what they think about the forum and how they found it.
theres ur topic.

oh thats easy enough.

UltimaxWeapon
03-01-2008, 11:40 PM
Username: Ultima Weapon 7731.
Age: 14.
Grade Level: 9.
Skills in English: B average.
Why do you think you should be on the team?: I enjoy interveiwing people and am good with grammer.
Position applying for: Interveiwer.
Rate of Activity on the forums: Everyday.
example: R{n} interveiw on kh2fm
+ and re:com.

Kingdom Hearts 2 Final Mix+

When did you first purchase kh2fm+?: I actually got it for christmas online at playasia.

Is it as good as people say it is?: Without a doubt, even better.

Favorite data battle?: I'd say Axel he has cool moves.

Have you done critical mode?: No, not yet. but someday I will.

If not what mode? Proud.

was the Roxas fight as hard as people said it was?: Its hard but you just have to have skills.

Favorite new keyblade?: Probably Acrossing Two, the keyblade you get from Roxas.

Have you fought the deadly Terra?: Yes.

If so have you successfully defeated him?: No i am to weak.

How long did it take you to adapt to the japennesse text writing?: just a few day i had to use the pictures and icons.

What was your favorite attack from the new Limit form?: Probably Sonic Blade or Strike Raid.

Bronze crown?: No.

Silver crown?: No.

Gold crown?: No.

Have you become an overall better player at the game and the Kingdom Hearts series?: Umm not physically but mentally.

Was it worth buying Flip-top and Swap Magic 3 and rearangeing your ps2?: Yes, even though i had to take apart my ps2.

Overall Ranking of the game from 1-10?: 9.5/10.


Re: Chain of memories


Your opinion on the difficulty with jappeneese?: It was hard at first, but then i got the translations from kh-vids.net so it was easier.

Do you think it was better then the original CoM?: Yes, all around better gameplay.

Was the card system easier to understand?: At first it was cus of the jappenese.

What was your favorite battle?: I really enjoyed the Zexion fight from Reverse/Rebirth.

What was your favorite Sleight?: Dark Aura from Reverse/Rebirth.

What difficulty did you do? Proud Mode on both games.

Was this the hardest Kingdom Hearts game to you?: Yes, it was like kh1 but alot harder.

Your overall opinion of the game?: Worth buying if you have never played the original.

Overall Ranking of the game? 9/10

Thank you Roxas{nobody} for taking the time to fill this out.

Number13Roxas
03-02-2008, 12:53 AM
Username: Number13Roxas
Age: 13
Grade Level: 7th
Skills in English: An average 7th grade level although I am pretty good.
Why do you think you should be on the team?: I am a good active member hoping to help the forums,and i homeschool giving me a very flexible schedule letting me be on more.
Position applying for: Editor
Rate of Activity on the forums: Several times every day.


Note: If i get this job i quit being a writer.

UltimaxWeapon
03-02-2008, 12:54 AM
Username: Number13Roxas
Age: 13
Grade Level: 7th
Skills in English: An average 7th grade level although I am pretty good.
Why do you think you should be on the team?: I am a good active member hoping to help the forums,and i homeschool giving me a very flexible schedule letting me be on more.
Position applying for: Editor
Rate of Activity on the forums: Several times every day.


Note: If i get this job i quit being a writer.

they cant have anymore editors they said.

Wzrdto25
03-02-2008, 12:54 AM
yeah no more editors

Wzrdto25
03-02-2008, 12:58 AM
the team decides not me

Wzrdto25
03-02-2008, 08:52 PM
Don't double post anywhere. And Patience is a virtue, so chillax and wait.

VenFan
03-02-2008, 08:55 PM
...Or you could delete it yourself. It's nothing too complicated...

And yeah, I posted my app. about a month ago, and got no reply. Does that mean that it wasn't accepted?

Tidus dude
03-02-2008, 08:58 PM
...Or you could delete it yourself. It's nothing too complicated...

And yeah, I posted my app. about a month ago, and got no reply. Does that mean that it wasn't accepted?

You applied for Editor, and we don't need anymore so, unfortunately you are not in. =\

Ultima, I don't think you made it in either.

dragonlord562
03-02-2008, 09:02 PM
I'd like to apply for writer, but I need some info on how often would we have to write some works, what would the works be(poems, articles(what would articles be examples please, or a format)), how many works at a time would need to be written and I think that that is about it.

VenFan
03-02-2008, 09:05 PM
Wait a minute... according to the first post, it said that the Newspaper Team needed 3 or 4 Editors. If I counted correctly, I was the third one to apply for Editor. >.>

Wzrdto25
03-02-2008, 09:08 PM
In order:

Ultima- Because of the staff thinking of your constant spamming... pressuring the staff over and over and other reasons
Dragonlord- and article for the newspaper
VenFan- there was a change in plans.

VenFan
03-02-2008, 09:31 PM
You're basically spamming now...

So, the remaining Editors positions are officially closed?

UltimaxWeapon
03-02-2008, 09:35 PM
You're basically spamming now...

So, the remaining Editors positions are officially closed?

for right now,
yes they are.

dragonlord562
03-02-2008, 09:41 PM
Is it ok if I apply tomorrow, my works in poems and stuff are on my school computer.

Wzrdto25
03-04-2008, 04:09 AM
Yeah that's perfectly fine.

UltimaxWeapon
03-04-2008, 07:38 PM
you know since i wont be online much,
did i make this?
im not trying to spam but id like to know.

Axel of Orginazation xiii
03-05-2008, 01:47 AM
Heck I'll do it I have nothing to do all day anyway

UltimaxWeapon
03-05-2008, 02:12 AM
Heck I'll do it I have nothing to do all day anyway

fill out the application first,
then they will decide.

Wzrdto25
03-05-2008, 04:11 AM
Ultima one of the reasons you aren't making the team are your
A) Spamming Track-record
B) Your persistance in asking us if you made it

Misuzu
03-05-2008, 07:40 PM
Username: angel_misuzu
Age: 14
Grade Level: 9th
Skills in English: im in honors
Why do you think you should be on the team?: I'm really good at writing poems and I love it!
Position applying for: Poems person
Rate of Activity on the forums: every day!
(not for editors) example of article/poem/quote/interview: One of my poems are on my signature.

Wzrdto25
03-05-2008, 08:42 PM
You may be just what we are looking for ;)

Roxas[Nobody]
03-05-2008, 11:58 PM
are there still fanfic positions on the team? because i recommand venfan.

UltimaxWeapon
03-06-2008, 12:23 AM
Ultima one of the reasons you aren't making the team are your
A) Spamming Track-record
B) Your persistance in asking us if you made it

so i didnt make the team because i spam and im anxious to know?
did u even read the interview i posted?

Axizol
03-06-2008, 12:24 AM
Yes, we did read the post. You were declined because the team chose so. Please stop spamming our thread because you didn't get what you wanted.

dragonlord562
03-06-2008, 03:51 AM
Wait, so there are different writing positions besides articles? Like poems as angel misuzu went for, and fanfics?

Wzrdto25
03-06-2008, 04:19 AM
Read the first post people.
No fanfictions offered anymore.

Misuzu
03-07-2008, 12:59 AM
....wait....so i cant get in because of my poem...?
gosh...i thought it was good....i tried so hard..

Axizol
03-07-2008, 01:01 AM
a poem's not a fanfic. We'll have to discuss your application longer to decide if you officially made it. chances are good that you will.

Wzrdto25
03-07-2008, 03:39 AM
I said specifically you may be just what we are looking for. I remember the day when people read *wonders what happened*

Riku, the darkness
03-07-2008, 04:16 AM
*sigh* i guess i could try this again.....

Username: Riku, the darkness
Age: 16
Grade Level:10th
Skills in English: B's, some times A's
Why do you think you should be on the team?: well i was really good at interviewing until i got GRounded then i was kicked off the team, srry..oh but im really good at giving questions.
Position applying for: Interviewer
Rate of Activity on the forums: well now my activity will go up scince im ungrounded so mostly on 4 times a week
this is one of the interviews i did when i had the job

interview with sora

1. What do you think about the forums so far?

Brad: Well, I've been in the forums since pretty much last year's December, and I must admit I never thought it would grow this much. I'm pretty pleased with them at the moment and enjoy working hard for them to grow better and better along my other Staff partners. And I bet they will keep on growing, we're not even half-through the way yet, he, he

2. When you first came to the forums, what were your first thoughts

Brad: Well, honestly I thought it wasn't really a big deal, I mean, just one more from the pile, if you get me. I thought I wouldn't stick much to them. There weren't much members, I was number 276 or so, so yeah, my first thoughts basically were "not so special", lol.

3. Did you ever think that you would be a Co-Admin for the forums, and why

Brad: At all, lol. Not even imagined I would become a Trainee Moderator at first. My first plan and task I proposed to myself when I joined was "Alright, it's enough, I'm joining this, I'm having fun, that's it". Didn't even plan accepting a job like Moderating and stuff. So I was pretty shocked when it happened, as that kinda things were pretty uncommon by then. But making it to Co-Admin was just the most unnexpected at all. I believed that I wasn't even doing a good job myself, I dunno, had not much confindence in being good at it, had a lot through my mind, ya know, that stuff. So no, never thought I'd make it into the Staff actually.

4.When moving up the ranks, what kind of privliage were gaven to you? was they good or useless?

Brad: Well, I was given some pretty nice extras such as an incredible ammount of PM Inbox space, which I gotta say it rocks, 'cause now I don't have to be deleting every PM in my Inbox every 5 minutes, lol. Then there is the moderative and administrative command, everything that it includes, ye know, closing, opening topics, creating new forum sections, and etcetera, which I don't really take as priviledges as they're more of a job or role, so they don't really count.

5.Do you think that you'll ever be promoted to an Administrator sometime in the near future? Why or Why not?

Brad: To be honest, I am not sure, lol. There are two other people who have the same exact chance than me to become Administrators, and they are both very hard working, they have my full-respect. So, unless there's this dropkick idea and we three get promoted, I say I'm not sure if I'll make it. I always tell myself: Stick to the current roll, don't rush and be hoping for the next step before manifesting the current one. So for now, I'm trying to concentrate in my current job, not wanting to make a huge step forward. So, if it happens, it happens, lol. And if not, it's okay.

6.What do you think of the Administrator now?

Brad :Alex did an amazing job creating the forums and site, and mantaining them. Though, the one who enforces pretty much the Administrative part, is DragoonKain, who does an excellent job, in my opinion. He is pretty fair, and does changes for good. So, in combination, I think the administrative part of these Forums is pretty awesome, hehe.

7. what did you do to move up in the ranks as you did?

Brad: I guess sticking to my current roles by that time and doing my best. That's pretty much the key to rank up.

8. could you recommend anything to our other users about moving up in the ranks?

Brad: I'll just say, it's not a game. Just get into this stuff if you're completely sure about it. But, as I said, show yourself worthy for the jobs and make an effort, and you most likely gain some success, lol.

9. Is it fun being a Co-Admin? why or why not?

Brad: I get asked these kinda questions everytime, lol. Everyone thinks it is something to have fun with. But, it's a responsability, a role, not something to be entertained with honestly. To have fun, you've got the forums, the Clans, the Games, discussing, debating, etcetera. Believe me, it's not like you're gonna have more fun or be better by turning into a Moderator or Administrator or stuff. If you wanna live the real fun, just enjoy the forums, lol. Not saying that we don't enjoy it ourselves as staff, it's just that we have more business to deal with around, that's all.

10. who promoted you? why do you think he/she did it?

Brad: It was DragoonKain. He was telling us three (KH3fan02, Riku-Sora, and I), that he had to leave for a while because of moving from his house and stuff. So he left us three in charge, promoting us to Co-Admins, which ended up by being permanently. I guess he trusts us, which is good. :P

Misuzu
03-07-2008, 01:24 PM
yaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! im so happy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

DragoonKain
03-08-2008, 02:21 AM
I read this, and I just have to get this out of my system...

*sigh* i guess i could try this again.....

Username: Riku, the darkness
Age: 16
Grade Level:10th

interview with sora

2. When you first came to the forums, what were your first thoughts

Redundant. "When you were two what did you do at the age of two years old?" "Yesterday I went to the store yesterday." The correct way to word this question would be: "What were your first thoughts when you came to the forums?" -or- "When you first arrived at the forums, what were your first thoughts?"

4.When moving up the ranks, what kind of privliage were gaven to you? was they good or useless?

Holy moly. Um... first of all, privilege. I'm not always a very good speller either, but I regularly take the 3.5 seconds it takes to look things up on an online dictionary. "Were gaven"? Where are your teachers so that I can pound them in the face? "Was they good or useless?" I thought you said you got A's and B's. This would get a failing grade for a 2nd grader! Allow me to rewrite this for you (in english): "When moving up the ranks, what kind of privileges were given to you? Were they good or useless?"

RXS
03-08-2008, 02:25 AM
ahahaa
thatsfunnyy

Axizol
03-08-2008, 02:27 AM
...

Kainmonster, you fail at making the newspaper. I know you wanted the job for awhile, but you be fail at English too bad, sorry.

UltimaxWeapon
03-08-2008, 02:27 AM
umm ok?

Edit: is there any other way i can apply again? for interveiwer.

Wzrdto25
03-08-2008, 03:44 AM
Go ahead. But your track record is still hindering you

UltimaxWeapon
03-08-2008, 03:45 AM
Go ahead. But your track record is still hindering you

does that really matter, what if its good this time?

Wzrdto25
03-08-2008, 03:57 AM
It wasnt that it wasnt good. It was the fact we dont need someone spamming all over the newspaper section. In addition to good writing you have to be able to work well with others and be professional.

Riku, the darkness
03-09-2008, 04:41 PM
mmmm, thats not what my Report card said, plus if that was the case then you would of already kicked me off scince that interveiw was on the newspaper when i was one of the interviewers, so either any of you didnt care or all of you were pretty stupid.

Sora the Explorer
03-09-2008, 05:10 PM
i dont know

UltimaxWeapon
03-10-2008, 01:55 AM
Username: Ultima Weapon 7731
Age: 14
Grade Level: 9th
Skills in English: B average
Why do you think you should be on the team?: I will work just as hard and be just as dedicated to the team like am with GT, if not more.
Position applying for: Writer
Rate of Activity on the forums: Everyday
(not for editors) example of article/poem/quote/interview: Kingdom Hearts.


Kingdom Hearts

Kingdom Hearts was originally thought of when employee of Square Enix and an Employee of Disney first met in an elevator. After talking a little bit they thought up of "Kingdom Hearts". The first ideas of this game was to bring together the gaming style and look of Final Fantasy, and some of the greatest Disney movies and characters ever made. The making of Kingdom Hearts began in early 2000 and was released in 2002. The first thoughts of this game from fans was this was a terrible idea bringing together Square and Disney together, until they actually played the game. Kingdom Hearts became one of the greatest selling games of all-time for the PS2.


The story of this game can be both easy to follow and confusing at the same time. It starts out the main character "Sora" going through all these weird scenes and is eventually wound up in this strange world. At the end he incounters "Darkside" which is thought to be Sora's shadow, but for some reason there is a big heart shape in the middle of his chest. Once you defeat this creature Sora is surrounded in darkness and some strange texts show up on the screen. Such as "You will be the one who will open the door" and "You hold the mightiest weapon of all".

After the events of the intro, Sora wakes up on shore of his island where we first encounter Kairi. Kairi mysteriously turned up on Sora's island a few years ago and has no memory of where she came from or what her old home was like. Kairi tells Sora that he was dreaming and he had just woken up. But Sora says that it wasn't a dream and gets confused. Next, Riku shows up into the scene holding a log telling Sora and Kairi to get back to work on the raft. Sora, Riku, and Kairi have been best friends their whole lives and are building a raft to take them to other worlds. On "Destiny Island" which is Sora's home, you encounter a few past Final Fantasy characters, such as Tidus (FFX), Wakka (FFX), and Selphie (FF8), and you can go around and challenge them to fights and eventually take them all on in 3 on 1. You can also talk and challenge Riku, but he is not that easy. After gathering all of the items for the raft Sora, Riku, and Kairi go home and rest up for the day they leave. But before they leave Kairi says some odd things to Sora. Kairi suggests that her and Sora take the raft and leave together without Riku but Sora says no. Next Kairi says to him "don't ever change". That night, there was a storm on the island and Sora goes to check on the raft, this is where the story really begins.

Sora rushes out to check on the raft when he sees this huge ball of Darkness of a small island where you could fight Riku. Then he notices these bug like creatures coming out of the ground. Sora rushes over to Riku and trys to grab his hand when Riku dissapears, Sora is then given the "Keyblade". Sora rushes over to the cave on the island and sees Kairi, but a big gust of wind takes Sora back to where Riku was. Once he wakes up the island is gone and Darkside is back again. After you beat Darkside you are sucked up into the Darkness and enter a different world called Traverse Town. In an opening scene you see "Donald Duck" and "Goofy" who are some of Disneys biggest characters walking in Traverse Town. They were sent by their king to find a "Key" which of course is the Keyblade. "Pluto" wonders off where he finds Sora laying up against a wall. Sora is a little weary and thinks that its a dream, Pluto gives him a push and Sora finds out that its not a dream. He walks around and doesn't know where he is, until he says "I'm in another world".

Sora goes into a shop where he meets Cid (FF7), Sora talks to Cid and asks where he is and tells him about what happened. Cid tells Sora to walk around the 3 Districts and to see whats going on. Sora goes into the Second District and he sees the shadow like creatures come up again. Next he goes into the 3rd District and finds more of the creatures and eventually goes back to Cid. Cid tells him that he'll look out for him for a while until he finds out whats going on. Sora walks out of the shop and is stopped by Leon (FF8), he says " They'll keep coming after you, as long as you wield the keyblade", sora gets confused and refuses to give it to him. Leon then challenges Sora to a fight. Whether or not you win this fight, you fall down un-concious. Sora wakes up in a hotel where he is with Leon and Yuffie (FF7). Leon and Yuffie tell Sora about the Keyblade and the "Heartless" which are the creatures that chase after Sora. A Heartless is something without a heart, they also seek out to find other hearts and turn people into heartless. But Leon tells sora that the Heartless have a great fear for the Keyblade. As long as he has the keyblade the more the heartless will come after Sora. Yuffie then brings up a man named "Ansem". The scene turns over to the room next to them with Areith (FF7), Donald , and Goofy. Areith tells donald and goofy about Ansem, saying that he studied the heartless and wrote a report about them but it is scattered all over the different worlds. The scene goes back to Leon, Yuffie, and Sora where Sora asks about his island, riku, and kairi. A leon can say is "You know what i really don't know". A heartless appears in the room and Leon tells yuffie to go with Areith. Leon tells Sora to ignore these small fry and look for the leader. Sora heads over to the 3rd District where he is met by Donald and Goofy, well actually they kinda fall on him. Barriers come out of the ground as heartless appear, the 3 heros have no other choice but to fight. After defeating the heartless and Guard Armor, Donald and Goofy introduce themselves to Sora and ask him to come along with them to find their king. Leon comes in and tells Sora to go with them especially if he wants to find his friends. On that note Sora, Donald, and Goofy set out to other worlds. A scene comes up showing a few people surrounding an orb. They are Captain Hook, Oogie Boogie, Ursala, Jafar, Hades, and their leader Malificent. They talk about Sora and a "Keyhole", Malificent has no worry of Sora cause she thinks he will never find all of them and the scene fades out.

Sora, Donald and Goofy set out on the Gummi Ship which takes them to other worlds. But most of the time heartless ships try to stop them from going to their desired destination, so this is no easy bout. Along the way Sora, Donald and Goofy travel to different worlds like "Wonderland", "Olympus Collisiem", and "Deep Jungle", meeting characters like Hercules, Hades, Tarzan, Jane, Clayton, Alice etc...... In deep Jungle is where the 3 heros find one of the "Keyholes" Malificent was talking about, but Sora doesn't know what it is so he goes back to Traverse Town to talk to Leon. Leon tells Sora that the Keyhole is where all of the heartless come from to destroy the worlds. Sora needs to use the keyblade to seal the Keyhole to stop more heartless from coming into the world and causing more harm. Sora goes back to Cid and Cid tells them to take a book to a wizards house.
Sora takes the book to the house where he meets Merlin the Wizard. Merlin tells Sora about the book and says that some pages are missing from it, meaning that he would pick up the pages in other worlds. When Sora walks out of the house he is reunited with Riku. Sora tells Riku about him searching other worlds with Donald and Goofy. Riku is also surprised when he sees Sora with the Keyblade, Sora asks Riku to come with them but Donald interupts saying that he cant come. The next they know Riku has dissapeared. Sora goes to an old house where he meets up with Cid, Leon, Yuffie, and Areith and they tell Sora about Malificent. A scene then comes up and we see Malificent and Riku outside the house Sora is in. Malificent tells Riku that Sora has abanded him with Donald and Goofy. Malificent tells Riku to help her, the scene then goes back to Sora inside the house. Cid tells Sora, Donald, and Goofy that he fixed up their gummi ship and put in warp-g that helps them get around to worlds they've already been to. Cid tells them to go check out the big bell that keeps ringing and to pull the rope 3 times. When they get there Sora rings the bell 3 times and another Guard Armor appears, you take out Guard armor a lot easier this time but its not Guard armor that is the threat. The big heartless switches itself around and turns into opposite armor. Once you take out Opposite Armor you obtain the "Areo" magic and then seal the keyhole to Traverse Town for good. Sora, Donald, and Goofy then head out to other worlds to stop Malificent and seal the keyholes.



End of Part 1

UltimaxWeapon
03-10-2008, 02:45 AM
Part 2

Sora, Donald, Goofy hop aboard the Gummi Ship and head to the next destination called "Agrabah". In the opening scene Jafar and Malificent are walking down an alleyway looking for Princess Jasmine and the Keyhole to the world. Like Alice, Jasmine is one of the "Princes of Heart" which open Kingdom Hearts and the heart of all worlds. Sora starts in the alleyway where Jafar and Malificent were found and heartless appear. Sora goes to "Alladins House" and finds a carpetstuck under a box. The carpet takes you to Alladin and he goes with Sora to stop Jafar from capturing her. Jafar is found in "The Cave of Wonders" by Sora and the gang where Sora defeats jafar and sucks back into the lamp. Jasmine was captured by someone after Jafar is defeated. When they come back up from the hole where Jafar was defeated Alladin notices that Jasmine is gone, Sora quickly seals the Keyhole and escapes the Cave of Wonders before it closes in on them. They meet back up at alladins house where alladins offers to go with Sora to find Jasmine. Sora tells him that he cant come with them but Alladin then offers Genie to go with them. As the the gang leaves Agrabah a scene goes back to Malificent in the room they were looking at the orb in. They say that Jafar was beyond help but wasn't strong enough to take care of Sora and finding the keyhole.

The gang gets back on the gummi ship when they go to 3 more worlds "Monstro", "Atlantica", and "Holloween Town". In Monstro Sora finds ponocio and gepetto cause they are stuck in the whale that swallows him. Pinnoccio runs off and Sora goes off to look for him. Riku comes in and says that hes playing with Pinoccio but Sora doesn't know whats going on. When Soras find Riku again Riku offers Sora to come with him and to save Kairi. But Sora refuses because he knows that Riku is on the Wrong side, suddenly a heartless named Parasite Cage falls in front of them. Riku disapears and Sora has no choice but to defeat the Parasite Cage. Once it is defeated Sora, Donald, Goofy fleed from the world before it is destroyed.
A scene goes to a room where Kairi is laying down un-concious. Riku and Malificent are talking and Riku asks if Kairi is just a lifeless puppet, Malificent says that her heart has been captured by the heartless. Riku asks what he has to do to save her, Malificent gives Riku the power to control the heartless and the scene fades out.

Sora, Donald, and Goofy get back on the gummi ship and head to the next 2 worlds, where they meet Ariel, Flounder, King Triton, Ursala, Jack Skellington, Dr. Finklstein etc... and face enemys like Ursala and Oggie Boogie. The next world Sora and the gang goes to is Neverland where they are actually interfeared and captured by a piarate ship. When Sora gets on the ship he walks around and then incounters Riku yet again, this time Riku can now control Heartless. Sora asks where Donald and Goofy are and Riku asks "are they really that important to you?". Sora is quick to respond saying that they are his friends and Riku shows Sora Kairi. sora is shocked to see her but Riku then drops the hatch and Sora falls into another room where he finds Donald and Goofy. Sora tells them about finding Kairi and they said that they need to go find her. When they get off the floor they meet Peter Pan who is looking for his friend Wendy. When Peter first met Sora he wasn't to thrilled to meet him and he said " were in this together but only until i find wendy". Sora walks out of the room and works his way around the ship, until he finds a room where Riku is carrying Kairi. Sora trys to stop Riku but all of a sudden a heartless form of Sora appears out of the ground called "Anti-Sora". Once Sora defeats Anti-Sora, they find a hatch in the floor which takes them to another room where Peter finds Wendy. Peter said he would like to help but he needs to take care of Wendy first. Sora, Donald, and Goofy walk out onto the main deck where they meet "Captain Hook". Sora demands to know where Riku took Kairi because he has run off. "Captian Hook" tells him that he went to "Hollow Bastion" where Malificent resides. He then tells them that he wont be going there unless Sora hands over the keyblade. If Sora refuses he has to walk the plank. Sora walks to the edge of the plank and remembers that Peter said to believe and you can do anything. Sora jumps off the plank but then flys up and glides around. Peter comes back saying that he couldn't leave Sora and tink behind. Sora and the gang fight some heartless and then fight Captain Hook. Once you defeat Captain Hook tinkerbell comes in and tells Peter that something is wrong at the clock tower. They fly over to the clock tower where Sora fixed the arrows on the it and then Sora seals the keyhole. A little scene comes up back to when Sora and Riku were little kids exploring the cave where the door was. When they were walking out Riku notices that there was a keyhole on the door and then the scene fades out. Sora talks to Peter saying that he has to go, before leaving Peter asks Sora to take Tinkerbell with him, he also gives him a guumi-block so the gang runs back to Traverse Town to talk to Cid. A scene comes in with Riku and Malificent in what we now know is Hollow Bastion, and Malificent tells Riku he shouldn't abuse the power of darkness cause Riku is very tired. All of a sudden they here a loud rawr and Malificent tells Riku to go see who it is and take care of him.

Sora hops back on the ship and goes back to Traverse Town, once they talk to Cid a scene comes in and Sora is sad because Kairi has lost her heart. Donald and Goofy remind him what they told him to keep a happy face and always smile. A scene comes in again where Sora is flying around and ends up in this Library where he sees Kairi as a little a girl and her grandmother. The grandmother tells a story about warriors who once saved other worlds using the power of light. The scene fades back into Traverse Town where Sora is ready to go to Hollow Bastion and save Riku and Kairi. Cid comes back and says that the gummi-ship is ready, and they off to Hollow Bastion.


End of Part 2

UltimaxWeapon
03-10-2008, 03:23 AM
Part 3

Sora, Donald, and Goofy hop on the gummi ship and head to Hollow Bastion to find Riku and Kairi and to defeat Malificent once and for all. When they get there they find Riku and the beast fighting, when the beast gets hurt Sora rushes over to help him. Riku then tells Sora that his work is done and they don't need him anymore. Sora is confused until the keyblade gets taken away from Sora. The keyblade then comes in Riku's hands saying that he is the keyblade master. He says that there is only one who save Kairi and change the world. Sora then says that he was the one who fought here with the keyblade, but then finds out that he was just the delivery boy. As Riku walks away Donald reminds Goofy that they have to remember their mission by following the key, Donald turns around to Sora saying hes sorry. Beast then tells Sora that he needs to find Belle and hes not leaving without her. Sora says that hes not leaving either until he saves Kairi.

Beast and Sora make their way up into the gates to enter the castle, Sora can't fight any heartless because he is left with the wooden sword he started out with on his island. So they make their way up to the gate and then eneterd the castle. Sora walks into the room and Beast gets distracted by a heartless and gets locked in a closet. Sora turns around and sees Riku and his old companions. Riku says you need to turn around but Sora refuses to leave without Kairi, Riku trys to take out Sora by casting magic at him. Goofy then jumps in front of Sora blocking it with his shield. He told riku that he wasn't going anywhere, Riku told goofy "that he would betray his king?", Goofy says "not on your life but i wont betray Sora either because hes become one of my best buddies after everything we've gone through together". Goofy says goodbye to Donald and asks him to tell the king that he was sorry. Donald changes his mind and joins Sora again. Now the keyblade chooses its weilder by whoever has the strongest heart. He told Riku that he didn't need a weapon to fight becuase his friends are his power. The keyblade disapeared from Riku's hands and reappeared in Sora's hands because at that moment Sora's heart was stronger then Riku's. After you fight Riku he runs off and Beast comes out saying " so your heart won this battle". A scene shows Riku running down the hall when hes asking himself why did the keyblade go back to him? Then a voice appears saying that Sora's heart was stronger then Riku's. Riku asks what can he do? The man takes off his hood and reveals himself to have on a white robe and the heartless symbol on his chest. He morphs into Riku making him stronger then the scene fades out. Sora makes his way up the castle until he makes it into the Castle Chapel where he confronts Malificent and fights her. Once you defeat her she goes into a warp hole of darkness. When you enter the hole you see Malificent out of breath and hurt. Riku walks in and asks if she needed some help. Sora and the gang walk in, Donald notices that Riku has a keyblade, but this keyblade can unlock peoples hearts. He then stabs Malificent turning her into a dragon that you will have to fight. Once you defeat her for good it seems that the heartless were using her all along. When you walk out of the hole another door opens for Sora and his friends.

Walk through the door where you encounter Riku's different form and Kairi laying on the ground. Riku tells Sora that Kairi's heart is inside of Sora and she has been with her all along. Riku walks over to Sora and trys to release Kairi's heart from Sora, but quickly Sora blocks Riku's attack. Then this is the final showdown between these two former best friends. After you defeat Riku he starts to fade away when Donald and Goofy are standing at the top of the keyhole telling Sora to hurry up and seal it. Sora remembers that the final keyhole cannot be complete without all of the princesses of hearts. Kairi's heart is inside of Sora meaning he couldn't seal the keyhole. Sora then notices the keyblade Riku was using and then stabs himself to release Kairi's heart. When Kairi wakes up she trys to stop him but its to late. Sora disapeared into darkness. Suddenly the man who morphed into Riku appeared and said that he was Ansem. Donald and Goofy tried to fight him but then Ansem was stopped by Riku. Riku told them to leave because the heartless were coming. As you see Kairi, Donald, and Goofy run out of the room, you see a heartless standing there that was actually Sora. Sora hurrys down to the room and sees the gang trying to get Kairi to leave. Sora comes down and Kairi can feel that the heartless was indeed Sora so Kairi tried to protect him until Sora turns back into his normal self. Beast comes back in and tells them they need to get out of hear. Sora goes back to Traverse Town to talk to Leon and to leave Kairi there with them as they go back to seal the keyhole and save Riku. Sora heads back to Hollow Bastion where Beast is reunited with Belle. Sora makes his way back to the keyhole and walks inside it. There was a creature called "Behomath" guarding the keyhole. When you defeat Behomath Sora seals the final keyhole and walks back out to find Leon and the gang outside waiting. They tell Sora that once you defeat Ansem that the gateways to other worlds will be cut off and you will never be able to go back. Sora then suggests the gummi-ship but there were walls blocking it off. Leon then says "we may never meet again, but we'll never forget eachother." Sora walks back down to the library to get the ansem reports from Areith. Next Sora leaves Hollow Bastion and goes to defeat Ansem and settle this once and for all.

End of Part 3

i have one more part to do tommorow so im not done yet.

Wzrdto25
03-10-2008, 03:30 AM
Dude. One part you have to remember is to make it interesting. Just becuase its long doesnt make it good. And it sounds like something you would get from wikipedia.

DragoonKain
03-10-2008, 05:00 PM
Dude. One part you have to remember is to make it interesting. Just becuase its long doesnt make it good. And it sounds like something you would get from wikipedia.

You make a good point. I spent about 12 seconds reading it. However, I will say that structurally and grammatically, my quick scan revealed no major flaws, which is more than I can say about most people on these forums.

UltimaxWeapon
03-10-2008, 06:56 PM
umm this is deffinitley not from wikipedia,
i speant like 2 hours last night typing this up and am still not done.
why dont you guys actually take the time to read it and not 12 seconds like kain said.

Kaito
03-10-2008, 07:09 PM
umm this is deffinitley not from wikipedia,
i speant like 2 hours last night typing this up and am still not done.
why dont you guys actually take the time to read it and not 12 seconds like kain said.

If the newspaper doesn't accept you, you're welcome to come to TKH you seem like a good writer.

UltimaxWeapon
03-10-2008, 07:12 PM
If the newspaper doesn't accept you, you're welcome to come to TKH you seem like a good writer.

that actually doesn't seem like a bad idea.
let finish it first though.

Kairi
03-10-2008, 08:48 PM
umm this is deffinitley not from wikipedia,
i speant like 2 hours last night typing this up and am still not done.
why dont you guys actually take the time to read it and not 12 seconds like kain said.
Ultima Weapon 7731, I read it, and I have to say that it was very impressive. Especially if that was all from your memory. I'm jealous! Very helpful information there...Great job! :D Good luck getting in.

UltimaxWeapon
03-10-2008, 09:11 PM
um ill just go ahead and do this now.

Part 4

Sora, Donald, and Goofy hop on the gummi-ship for the last time and make their way to defeat Ansem once and for all. When they reach their destination "End Of The World", they start off in a cave and walk out of it to see whats left of the worlds taken over my the heartless. Some questions go around from Sora asking whats gonna happen we defeat Ansem? and what will happen to us and this world? Donald tries to answer but doesn't have a reply for it. Then Goofy comes in and says that this is a heartless world, it will just disapear. Goofy also tells them that they will reach home safe and be with their friends again. Sora knows they will make it and pulls out the lucky charm Kairi gave him in Traverse Town. He says " ill return this, i promise".

When you walk around at first, it seems like theres trails and you have to keep walking to the treasure chests to make it around. whenever you open a chest it would usually start a battle or make a giant ball of darkness come down on you and you would have to fight some heartless, which at this point of the game are more or less minor bosses. Whenever you would defeat a group of heartless you would obtain the item that was in the chest to start with. After they make their way through the paths they come across another "Behomath". This shouldn't be much of a challenge now. Sora, Donald, and Goofy make their through the next door and are in a valley full of gummi peices. Goofy asks where Ansem was and then Sora says that we have to keep moving to find out. Glide around until you come across a portal that will take you onto mountains with telapoters on them. The teleporters take them through every world they went to except Hollow Bastion. They have to fight a certain amount of heartless and then colloect some rare accesories from that world where they first obtained it. While going through this they come across all sorts of heartless depending on the world you were in. Once you make it to the second to last portal you end up in an allyway where you have to fight some more heartless, once they are defeated go into the room thats in the allyway and try to activate the machine. It saya your time has come, more heartless appear and the door shuts on you. Defeat the heartless to get out of the room to make your way back to Ansem. The last portal takes you to "The 100 Acre Wood" where there aren't any heartless but there is a save point. Make your way out of the world and you will see a hole in the ground. Go through the hole to fight the guardian of the bald mountain. Sora, Donald, and Goofy float down and see a mountain and some kind of creature sleeping. With your unwelcoming visit the creature known as "Chernabog" wakes up and it looks like he challenges you to a fight, the only way to make it to Ansem is to defeat the huge creature. After you defeat Chernabog he dissapears and you obtain the shared ability "Superglide". With chernabog gone you may now make your way through the mountain and inch closer and closer to Ansem.

Sora, Donald, and Goofy glide around to the bottom of the mountain and walk through a few more portals. At the end of them you fall into a mysterious room, but you need to act fast because there is another Behomath waiting for you. He quickly tries to jump on you but thats probabally the only real threat in this fight. After you take care of Behomath You see a heartless symbol at the end of the room, with Behomath gone a piece of that symbol fell off. More and more heartless appear, and Sora now knows that the only way to get through is to destroy the symbol. The only way to do that is to destroy the remaining heartless. This might be the hardest part of the game though when it comes to long story mode battles. You need to defeat the strongest heartless in the game, once you do the heartless symbol is gone and the gate has opened. Sora, Donald, and Goofy walk through the door that was opened and Sora notices another door, but this one seems a little more familier. If you noticed way back on Destiny Islands after Riku disapears and you go to find kairi, the secret place's entry changes when a huge door appears. When you walk into the room after Sora notices the door again. Donald asks if there was anything wrong and Sora says that this looks familier. Some texts come above the screen saying " Remember this is the last stand, what lies beyond this door is where it ends", but for some reason Sora was the only one who heard. Donald asks Sora what was wrong again because it seems like he spaced out. Sora says hes okay and says "lets go", they walk through the door and into the final confrontation.

When they reach the destination it looks like your back on Destiny Islands where it all started. Sora is confused and asks if it was his Island. They walk over to the secret place and try to see what was in there. But all of a sudden you start to hear phrases that have been said throught the whole game. Such as "This world has been connected, tied to the darkness", as parts of the island start to dissapear more words keep coming up. "Soon to be completely eclipsed", "A meaningless effort, "One who knows nothing can understand nothing". After the man stops talking s scene comes in and shows Riku standing on the shore of the island. Sora and the gang run up to him but with caution because last time they saw Riku he was working for the heartless.

When you reach Riku the final battle begins, but first theres a cutscene. Riku starts to talk but turns into Ansem, the one they have really been looking for all along. Ansem says "Take a look at this tiny place, with a heart seeking freedom, this island is a prison surrounded by water, and so this boy saught out to escapse his prison, he found a way go into other worlds and he opened his heart to darkness", Riku then turns into Ansem. Sora was worried for Riku but ansem says that your voice can no longer reach him where he is, and says that his heart again belongs to darkness. Ansem starts to talk about how darkness is the true power and the heart of all worlds. Sora says thats not true. Sora then says " The heart may be weak but it never gives in, and ive learned that deep down theres a light that never goes out!". Ansem raises above the ground and says "So you have come this far and still you understand nothing, every light must fade every heart return to darkness!" the battle with ansem starts but its not that difficult, once you beat him he falls back and more of the island gets destroyed. sora, Donald and Goofy go to fight Ansem again but once reaches him Donald and Goofy get blocked off, meaning that Sora was on his own. The battle doesn't immeadietly start with the fight with Ansem, but first an old enemy has come back for revenge. Darkside comes back to challenge you for the last time. Hes not any different then how he was in the start but this he has more HP and draws heartless more often, he should be an easy opponent to take care of. After Darkside is gone Ansem reappears and you have to fight him one on one. This fight can a little more harder and he has a few more attacks now. But he is still pretty easy to defeat.

A scene comes in and you see sora, Donald, and Goofy confused about where they are. Then you hear Ansem's voice. He says, "Look as hard as you are able you will not find the smallest glimmer of light, " Within darkness are all hearts born, even yours". Sora looks down and sees a huge ship of heartless surrounding him. " Darkness conquers all worlds!" says Ansem, all of a sudden Donald and Goofy are pulled into portals and dissapear. Sora falls and then he hears Riku say " Giving up already? come one Sora i thought you were stronger then that." Sora then floats back up and pulls out his keyblade to fight this more bigger version of Ansem. If you do good on Ursala and Chernabog then this should be a pretty easy fight. Just dodge the lasers he summons and then attck him like crazy. After ansem is defeated he lays down and rests, Sora then goes into the first portal to destroy the core. When you get inside there you to fight some shadows by yourself and destroy the core. Once you do that you are sent out again and must destroy some tentacles to open the next portal. After you destroy them go through the opened portal and you will find Goofy. Sora and Goofy have to fight some Darkball enemys to get to the core, after they are defeated they destroy the core and head out of the portal. Sora and Goofy glide out of the portal and see that the face on the front of the ship has woken up. Sora and Goofy fight the face and must defeat it to reach the final portal and save Donald. After it is defeated Sora and Goofy enter the final portal to destroy the last core and save Donald. When they get in there Donald is back with you and you must destroy Invisable enemys. After they are gone destroy the core and get out of the portal. Once they leave the portal the face gets destroyed and blows up. With Donald and Goofy back with you a gate opens up to the main core. Once you defeat that then you can finally take care of Ansem forever. With the Main Core destroyed Ansem wakes back up and it is time to finish him off for good. Sora, Donald, and Goofy use all they got to take care of him for good, once they do you have succesfully defeated Kingdom Hearts.

The final scene shows Ansem hurt and says " The keyblade alone cannot defeat the darkness", Ansem turns around and says " Kingdom Hearts! fill me with the power of darkness!" Sora comes in and says " Your wrong!, i know now without a doubt Kingdom Hearts is light!". The door to Kingdom Hearts opens and light shoots out of the door. Ansem is covered in light and says " L-light?" " b-but why?". Ansem is destroyed and the only thing left to do is close the door to Kingdom Hearts. Sora, Donald, and Goofy run over to the door and try to close it but its to heavy. Donald looks inside and sees 1000's of heartless, they try to hurry as fast as they can but it seems to be no use. Riku then comes in on the other side of the door and says " Come on Sora, together we can do it", Sora nods and tries to close the door. Two darkside appear on the other side and more and more heartless as well. Donald then says "It's hopeless!". But out of no where the darkside's are destroyed, Donald and goofy are confused as they see their king hop above, they both say "The King!" as they finally found the king. King Mickey then says to Sora " Now Sora lets close this thing for good", Sora is confused and Goofy says " Sora you can trust king mickey", "Don't worry, there will always be a door to the light". The king turns around and says "Donald, Goofy, thank you". Sora, Donald, Goofy and Riku push and pull as hard as they can to close the door, but before it closes Riku says "Take care of her", Sora looks at Riku and nods as the door is shut closed. Sora jumps back and pulls out his keyblade preparing to seal it for good and King Mickey pulls out his keyblade. They both cast their magic and the door to Kingdom Hearts is gone. With the door gone Sora looks back and sees Kairi, he runs over to her. Donald tries to follow him but Goofy stops him. Sora reaches Kairi just before the platform breaks off to take her back home. Sora says " Kairi no matter what ill always be with you, Ill come bac to you i promise!", Kairi says "I know you will" their hands break appart and Kairi goes back into the Island. Thats the end of Kingdom Hearts 1.

The ending music and credits come in showing Kairi back on the Island and all the worlds that are now safe from the darkness and the heartless. After the credits we see Sora, Donald, and Goofy walking down a road. Goofy asks "what do we do now?", Sora says "we gotta look for Riku and the king. Goofy asks " But where do we start looking for that door to the light?". Pluto then comes back out holding a letter in his mouth, Goofy notices that its the king's seal. Sora asks do you know where the king is? Pluto runs off and Sora, Donald, and Goofy follow him running and smillieng down the road. This is the end of Kingdom Hearts 1.

Kingdom Hearts went on to make to sequals called "Chain of Memories", "Kingdom Hearts 2" which also went on to be great games. There are also 2 final mixs which is basically the directors cut of the original games, but these are only for Japan and will not be coming to the U.S. There are also 3 upcoming titles for the Kingdom Hearts series called "Birth By Sleep" which is a prequal to the first game, 358/2 Days which describes the story of when Roxas (who is sora's nobody) was in the Organization XIII before he betrayed them, and Coded, and a game for Mobile Phone that is said to take place after Kingdom Hearts 2. Kingdom Hearts went on to become the most succesfull series to come out of Square Enix and Director Tetsuya Nomura still plans on making a Kingdom Hearts 3 in the future for the Playstation 3. This is my favorite game of all-time, and you can now see why.

well ok it's done with, read if u want lol.
This WAS NOT COPIED AND PASTED FROM OTHER WEBSITES. This is allmy work and i hope this is enough to make the team. But if i dont then i am seriously done with applying because if this doesn't work then i dont know what will.

Wzrdto25
03-11-2008, 03:42 AM
Hahaha. I read the entire thing last night. It just seems boring. Kairi is the writer leader though, so if shes on your side thats a good ally to have. The team is split over the application though. Until we decide you will have to wait.

DragoonKain
03-11-2008, 02:37 PM
Hahaha. I read the entire thing last night. It just seems boring. Kairi is the writer leader though, so if shes on your side thats a good ally to have. The team is split over the application though. Until we decide you will have to wait.

I don't really know if the fact that it's boring is relevant to that piece. It seems to be a documentary piece, which should... well... BE boring. (Except in the case of those strange History Channel documentaries where they reenact the stuff...)

I would actually give him my vote. His writing quality is good, but I think we definitely need to see more come out of him on the creativity/entertainment department.

Misuzu
03-11-2008, 02:39 PM
did i make it...?

UltimaxWeapon
03-11-2008, 07:59 PM
I don't really know if the fact that it's boring is relevant to that piece. It seems to be a documentary piece, which should... well... BE boring. (Except in the case of those strange History Channel documentaries where they reenact the stuff...)

I would actually give him my vote. His writing quality is good, but I think we definitely need to see more come out of him on the creativity/entertainment department.
thank you kain :D your opinion matters and i was going for more of a documentery for people who probably haven't played kh1.

Wil: seriously dude, anything i give you is trash.
i worked my ass off on that and to be honest your the only who DOESN'T like it.
everyone else thinks i did a really good job.

Wzrdto25
03-12-2008, 06:00 AM
Did you read my post at all?
You've actualy made the team but you need to pick a position. And yes you too angel =) congrats you two

Misuzu
03-12-2008, 06:08 PM
yaaay! :) :) :) :) :) i want to be a poem writer person please! my specialty...;)
and i love ur sig with the random guy making funny faces! :) sooo...what do i do now...?

UltimaxWeapon
03-12-2008, 07:01 PM
Did you read my post at all?
You've actualy made the team but you need to pick a position. And yes you too angel =) congrats you two

ok well im not gonna argue but you did say that it was just really long and boring,
and i can pick any position i want.

Roxas[Nobody]
03-12-2008, 07:06 PM
be an interviewer theres only 3

UltimaxWeapon
03-12-2008, 07:09 PM
be an interviewer theres only 3

ok well apparently to the Axi and Will im not good at writing so ill be an interviewer.

Misuzu
03-16-2008, 11:01 PM
umm what do i do now....?
. . .

Kairi1
03-22-2008, 04:45 AM
Username: Kairi101
Age:13
Grade:8th
Skills In English: Good i got an A- on my poems.
Why should i be on the team?: Because i love writing poems and i work really hard.
Position im applying for: Poem Writer.
How often am i on here: Everyday or every second day

My poem!


The sea Sparkles like your blue eyes.
As the sun beams down from the skies.
You hold the mighty wepon.
Your the one that saves the day.
Sora you are you are sora.
Sora The mighty Keyblade master!

Wzrdto25
03-22-2008, 04:48 AM
Ill add you

Kairi1
03-22-2008, 04:50 AM
O.O What does that mean!!??

Wzrdto25
03-22-2008, 04:55 AM
You made it? lolz

Kairi1
03-22-2008, 04:56 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wow i made that poem in like 3 minutes lolz :O

Wzrdto25
03-22-2008, 04:57 AM
That's not something to admit XD

Kairi1
03-22-2008, 04:58 AM
I no but im happy i do things like that when im happy >.<

Wzrdto25
03-22-2008, 04:59 AM
PM Kh3fan02 hes the poem leader.

Kairi1
03-22-2008, 05:01 AM
Kk with my application or poem?

Wzrdto25
03-22-2008, 05:02 AM
Haha your final poem

Kairi1
03-22-2008, 05:03 AM
Im going to make a fool of my self but ?final poem?

Wzrdto25
03-22-2008, 05:04 AM
The one that you want to go into the paper. Just pm it to him and he'll give you feedback

Kairi1
03-22-2008, 05:10 AM
Now i Wait! Omg i so happy *Hugs*

Roxas[Nobody]
03-28-2008, 12:17 AM
can ppl still apply? i have a friend that wants to join.

Wzrdto25
03-28-2008, 12:21 AM
yes

war0706
03-28-2008, 01:49 AM
ill do it


username:war0706
age:10
grade level:5th
skils in english:freakishly good
position aplying for:writing
rate of activity on the forums:every second:D

Wzrdto25
03-28-2008, 01:53 AM
You have to show and example. I didn't put that part in for fun.

war0706
03-28-2008, 02:06 AM
o sorry i thought u did put it for fun

Wzrdto25
03-28-2008, 02:46 AM
You aint getting in without it. And that's final. So post one or no thanks. (Warning to ALL not you war)

war0706
03-28-2008, 03:54 AM
okay

Wzrdto25
03-28-2008, 03:55 AM
You still have to put one though.

NicoleChristine
04-02-2008, 03:34 PM
Username: NicoleChristine
Age: 16 (17 in June)
Grade Level: 11th.
Skills in English: As all year this year. Usually a high 98%.
Why do you think you should be on the team?: I love writing, and I would like to be a good cause for the newspaper. I like my work being seen, and I would help anywhere I am needed. I could bring alot of culture to this paper with poems. I have been writing my own poems since 8th grade.
Position applying for: Poem or Interviewer. Whichever you think would be best. Rather be a poet. :]
Rate of Activity on the forums: I'm on just about everyday, other than most weekends, and so far I have about 15 posts per day.
(not for editors) example of article/poem/quote/interview:
Never and Ever
I never felt this way,
Never in a million years.
And even for today,
I never shed a tear.

I never stop to think,
Of memories I put behind.
Even when I blink,
You're always on my mind.

Never in a trillion years,
Would I ever leave your side.
Never with a billion tears,
Would i ever have to hide.

I would never say I hate you,
I would never make you cry.
No matter what I'd ever do,
I could never ever say good-bye.

Interview:
http://www.freewebs.com/emohairnewspaper/cultreviewsinterviews.htm
note: must be your own work Understood.

AnsemDiz
04-04-2008, 07:49 PM
Username: AnsemDiz
Age: 13
Grade Level: 8th
Skills in English: very good
Why do you think you should be on the team?: I love writing, and I'm a good reporter, and I always search for the facts.
Position applying for: writer
Rate of Activity on the forums: when ever I can.

Awesome Roxas
04-04-2008, 10:41 PM
well i would like another job to help out the forums so heres my application

Username:awesome roxas
Age:13
Grade Level:7th
Skills in English:Well im good at looking through everything and i always like to find out as much as i can about the subject and im a good speller
Why do you think you should be on the team?:well im good at thinking things through i always get things in on time and im a very active member and i would like to help out the team
Position applying for:Interviewer
Rate of Activity on the forums:everyday for 1 to 2 hours

Example:
awesome roxas:So what did you think of the ending in kh2?
The King of KH: I thought the kh2 ending was admirable.
awesome roxas:And why do you think that?
The King of KH: It left me questioned and surprised.
awesome roxas: And do you think it helpd you answer any questions you had from the first kingdom hearts game?
The King Of KH:All the questions that were left unanswered were basically answered in the ending of kingdom hearts2.

Well thats my interview with omar and i hoped it was good i hope i get the job

Wzrdto25
04-05-2008, 06:29 AM
Good applications.

Tidus Shuyin
04-05-2008, 07:44 AM
I want to post for job, but.... I don't have any EXP

UltimaxWeapon
04-05-2008, 07:11 PM
Username: AnsemDiz
Age: 13
Grade Level: 8th
Skills in English: very good
Why do you think you should be on the team?: I love writing, and I'm a good reporter, and I always search for the facts.
Position applying for: writer
Rate of Activity on the forums: when ever I can.

Example?

Juji Kabane
04-05-2008, 07:26 PM
User name: Juji Kabane

Age: 17

Grade level: 12

Skills in English: the best

Why do you think you should be on the team: I work hard and i love my work and helping others.

Position applying for: Writer

Rate of Activity on the forum: I am on every day for a few hours everyday.

EXP: check the thread My Deepest darkest secrets

-RikuKH3
04-05-2008, 07:49 PM
Skills in English: the best




You serious? Hate to be blunt, but your grammar skills are very bad man.

Juji Kabane
04-05-2008, 07:54 PM
There the best, if i try they can be.

-RikuKH3
04-05-2008, 07:56 PM
There the best, if i try they can be.

You just proved my point with this post :X

OK, im done lol

UltimaxWeapon
04-05-2008, 08:01 PM
There the best, if i try they can be.

*They're

Wzrdto25
04-05-2008, 08:17 PM
Spammaholics anonymous is that'a'way.

NicoleChristine
04-07-2008, 02:56 PM
how will we know if we made it?

Also- I believe it was Will that mentioned he would want me to be an interviewer. I'll edit my post with the most recent example I have for an interview I've done for another website.

Interview:
http://www.freewebs.com/emohairnewspaper/cultreviewsinterviews.htm

Wzrdto25
04-07-2008, 04:25 PM
Very Good and I think Nicole has gotten in.

NicoleChristine
04-07-2008, 05:37 PM
;O
Really?!?
YAY! Thanks Will!
you're amazing. :]
This like completly made my day. ^__^

Awesome Roxas
04-07-2008, 10:52 PM
was my application any good?

Juji Kabane
04-07-2008, 11:59 PM
You will know when you hear back or not, still waiting to hear back myself. :)

Wzrdto25
04-08-2008, 07:56 AM
Yup. Currently processing.

Jess
04-08-2008, 02:53 PM
still spaces for Editors? (sorry if this was already asked, didn't look through the thread hah)

Awesome Roxas
04-13-2008, 12:37 AM
Yup. Currently processing.

and that means what?

AnsemDiz
04-13-2008, 12:39 AM
and that means what?

That they're currently thinking of who to choose.

Awesome Roxas
04-13-2008, 12:44 AM
That they're currently thinking of who to choose.

oh thanks for telling me

Spike212
04-13-2008, 01:08 AM
Well the Newspaper Team is always willing to accept new members!

We need

Writers: (3 or 4)
Interviewers: (3 or 4)
Poem/Quote Director: (1 or 2)

Template:
Username:
Age:
Grade Level:
Skills in English:
Why do you think you should be on the team?:
Position applying for:
Rate of Activity on the forums:
(not for editors) example of article/poem/quote/interview:
note: must be your own work

Post them here, do not Private Message Me

Positions:

Writers: Foundation of the team, they provide articles based upon different aspects of the forums and other entertainment. These people are responsible for maintaining the regulations of the articles. As a requirement you must be willing to work as hard as you can, and always meet deadlines, providing enough time for your editor to double check your work and hand it in.

Editors: Are expected to make sure grammar and spelling is correct in all senses this means double and even triple checking your work. As a requirement you must have extensive knowledge of the English language and know how to conduct a flowing article. If something is out of place or not needed make sure to remove it without any remorse. It is your job to support the foundation by providing a smooth surface for the writers to work.

Poem/Quote Director: Significantly brings literature and culture of writing to the Newspaper, including quotes about seasons and poems about eye-catching subjects. It is you job to submit one of either to the paper before the demanded deadline.

Interviewers: Yours is a job unlike any other, you must go to various people and get their opinions on a topic of your selection. You get to express the ideas of the people, into quotes via the ways of a Q&A (or question and answer) method. You are a very big asset to the team.

Deadlines:
Are always the most important date on the team, never forget this date, if missed there will be severe consequences.



Thanks
Wzrd
Acting NT Leader


Pick me. I want 2 b a writer. I will need an apprentice cuz i get grounded so he can take over. Ill b whatever goor position available.:)

Kryptik
04-13-2008, 05:24 AM
Pick me. I want 2 b a writer. I will need an apprentice cuz i get grounded so he can take over. Ill b whatever goor position available.:)

Spike Please follow the application and the rules. Thank you.

Awesome Roxas
04-17-2008, 11:39 PM
i supose since its been 13 days i didnt make it?

rzgrz
04-18-2008, 06:50 PM
Username:rzgrz
Age:16
Grade Level: 11th-12th
Skills in English: umm... great... grades are 99%+
Why do you think you should be on the team?:cause im realy good at editing and English
Position applying for:editor
Rate of Activity on the forums: mostly every day..weekends well they're my days off :P