master of nothingness
02-12-2007, 07:10 PM
iv allready posted this but in this virsion theres more discrpition and srry in advanced for the bad spelling. it takes a lot away from the story but bare with me.
a soft breez drifted through the chilled summer night.The tall trunks of palm trees bent slightly and a cloud of sand drifted into the air breifly befour falling back to the shour.
The sky was clear and incresed with stars and a brite full moon that hung still like the silver eye of god gazeing down onto his world. Or at least one of them.
It looked down apon two small ilainds neseld carelessly in the middel of an endless ocaen.One ilaind was larger than its bretheren and was blanketed with small one storie houses and the actonal two floored.The second was far smaller, merly a dot when compared to the other. It was perfetaly round with a snake like beach that curreld aruond its insegnifakant mass.
In its center like a bull's eye grew a lush forrest that still rocked( almost hypnoticly) with the night breez.
Siting on the ilaind's northern beach were three figures no more than smuges to the silver eye of god, and all though they were smuges they were still seen.
One was a midume size boy wereing blue shorts and a large red shirt that decended down to his thighs and stoped three inches above his nees.His skin was a crisp tan from the ilaind sun and the expression on his face was one of happyness and content.
His fetures were smuth and sujested that his life for the most part had bin peacfull and free of burden wile his blue eyes and spiky brow hair were sighns of his willingness to be the best at what it matterd not.
The second was a girl perferbly the same age as the boy. Fuorteen at the most.She sat calmly on the pale beach sand with her legs curld up to her chest.Her arms raoed aruond them in an imbracefull maner.
She wore a pink tank top with the symbole of a hearts stiched into its back.Her bare arms were taned like the boys but slightly lighter and the small lumps of goosebumps were the only sighn of the nights chill.The blue dennum pants she wore raped tightly aruond her lower self yet not enoph to reveal anything sexual.Her face was betifull almost angelic with soft flesh covering her stron cheek bones.Her nose was small and button like adding to her cutteness, her eyes weere a dark blue almost black , but all this was insignifacant compared to her firey crimson hair that fell to her shulders and no further.
Both of the chilldren's heads were turned and there ears were perked as the third spoke.This one was older, just by looking at him it was oveyes.He wore a large black jaket that was unzipped baring his chest( hard and riged with mucels) to the world.
thats all ill put for now. i hope you like it:D
a soft breez drifted through the chilled summer night.The tall trunks of palm trees bent slightly and a cloud of sand drifted into the air breifly befour falling back to the shour.
The sky was clear and incresed with stars and a brite full moon that hung still like the silver eye of god gazeing down onto his world. Or at least one of them.
It looked down apon two small ilainds neseld carelessly in the middel of an endless ocaen.One ilaind was larger than its bretheren and was blanketed with small one storie houses and the actonal two floored.The second was far smaller, merly a dot when compared to the other. It was perfetaly round with a snake like beach that curreld aruond its insegnifakant mass.
In its center like a bull's eye grew a lush forrest that still rocked( almost hypnoticly) with the night breez.
Siting on the ilaind's northern beach were three figures no more than smuges to the silver eye of god, and all though they were smuges they were still seen.
One was a midume size boy wereing blue shorts and a large red shirt that decended down to his thighs and stoped three inches above his nees.His skin was a crisp tan from the ilaind sun and the expression on his face was one of happyness and content.
His fetures were smuth and sujested that his life for the most part had bin peacfull and free of burden wile his blue eyes and spiky brow hair were sighns of his willingness to be the best at what it matterd not.
The second was a girl perferbly the same age as the boy. Fuorteen at the most.She sat calmly on the pale beach sand with her legs curld up to her chest.Her arms raoed aruond them in an imbracefull maner.
She wore a pink tank top with the symbole of a hearts stiched into its back.Her bare arms were taned like the boys but slightly lighter and the small lumps of goosebumps were the only sighn of the nights chill.The blue dennum pants she wore raped tightly aruond her lower self yet not enoph to reveal anything sexual.Her face was betifull almost angelic with soft flesh covering her stron cheek bones.Her nose was small and button like adding to her cutteness, her eyes weere a dark blue almost black , but all this was insignifacant compared to her firey crimson hair that fell to her shulders and no further.
Both of the chilldren's heads were turned and there ears were perked as the third spoke.This one was older, just by looking at him it was oveyes.He wore a large black jaket that was unzipped baring his chest( hard and riged with mucels) to the world.
thats all ill put for now. i hope you like it:D