Poem

[Tidus Shuyin]

Heart

I'm feeling sad
But is that bad?
All of us can be sad
Am I right, lad?

My thoughts come from my heart
And I think it's great.
To tell you the truth....
I'm like Sora!

I follow my heart
'Cause I'm the bait
For my hard feelings
So strange things!

I'm feeling great!
Like someone of light...
Who is in enternal fight....
For hearts freedom.



Anyone who wants post coment, please do!

[cbchick]

it was nice.

[Tidus Shuyin]

Thanks.

[Namine]

nice^^ I like it.

[Tidus Shuyin]

Thanks!!!!

[The Real keyblade Master]

Awesome!

[Tidus Shuyin]

I just like writing poems... In fact, I'll soon try a book.

[jaschris01]

nice poem.. like it.

[FinalSora13]

It was great>Try writing more,using your feelings!!(It's a small secret)!!!

[Tidus Shuyin]

Ok... now check my story... link is in my signature

[Tidus Shuyin]

I'm seeing things...
The things that's meant to be...
My heart is opening my mind.
And drives me crazy..
I'm fighting
but in meantime loosing
I'm ready to spread my wings...
fly away...
away from these things...
but hear this:
I can't give up
'Cause it's the easiest thing to do
I like it hard way
something happen may
And I finally could be free
and no leave
staying here...
It's dream of future

[Tidus Shuyin]

feelings...
sometimes it hurts
it's not nuts, you know that
I wish to see pain in front of me
I could shake it's hand now
But if I could see hapiness
I'd pick a fight with it
'Cause I'm sad
But trying to not be mad...
But it's hard
'Cause you don't have a helping hand....

[Kairi & Namine]

all i can say is wow.

[Tidus Shuyin]

all i can say is wow.

*shocked* so good??

[FinalSora13]

They are very nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Kairi & Namine]

*shocked* so good??
yes

[Tidus Shuyin]

thank you guys... *hugs K&N* *waves to FinalSora13*

full of thoughts
friendship
that's magic
a magic which can't be destroyed
Only by evil madman
who wants to do pain
But if....
if you could stop madman?
Open your heart..
and free the light
shut the heart
for darkness...
but still, don't forget it...
cause if you do...
it will strike hard
and you'll fall apart.

[cbchick]

they're very good arthur :]

[Tidus Shuyin]

Thanks!!!

[Tidus Shuyin]

Life is just ordinary thing...
It starts, continues, ends
But realone life is then, when you don't thing about this
You just keep living and run around on rainbow
I like standing under rain
It feels like new breath
You just stand... and see
How sky is crying...
And sometimes... I cry along
When I'm feeling sad..
Living together with someone you really love..
It's dream, which comes true after time...
Just don't forget...
Life is everyone, everywhere
Life is in you too...

[Misuzu]

i love each and every one of them!!!!! *claps* beeeaaaauuuttttiiiiffffuuullll!!!!!!!!!

[Tidus Shuyin]

Thank you!

[Tidus Shuyin]

Spring...
It's full of magic
Everything is waking up.
Birds are returning, flowers are opening up
Heart is singing a song...
Song which want try to break out and be heard.
Mind is frozen in one big thought
Trying to remember...
And both of them are not calm
They are seeking something
Trying to find long lost...
And mouth wants to say
"I love you!"
And kiss the long seeked love...

[Kairi & Namine]

i agree!

[Tidus Shuyin]

*face is beet red*

[Namine]

Amazing poems, love all of them!^^ *Huggles Arthur*

[Tidus Shuyin]

Thankies!!! *Huggs back Felicia* *still face beet red*

[Juji Kabane]

Heart

I'm feeling sad
But is that bad?
All of us can be sad
Am I right, lad?

My thoughts come from my heart
And I think it's great.
To tell you the truth....
I'm like Sora!

I follow my heart
'Cause I'm the bait
For my hard feelings
So strange things!

I'm feeling great!
Like someone of light...
Who is in enternal fight....
For hearts freedom.



Anyone who wants post coment, please do!It sounds like a sing in my head. but i love it. :D

[Tidus Shuyin]

It sounds like a sing in my head. but i love it. :D

Like song?? OMG...

[Kairi & Namine]

*face is beet red*
what's up?

[Tidus Shuyin]

Umm... nothing anymore!

[Tidus Shuyin]

Flying with or without wings
It's my dream
Just charge ito sky and see everything
With eyes frm sky
Fly around... feel the breeze of wind
It's possibility..
But only by Plane or Helicopter
I've seen that... everything is small like ants
but that's not that...
smell the air, feel the breeze...
with all the body in air...
That'a possible only in dreams.
Dreams of your own or dreams of faith...

[Tidus Shuyin]

memories...
it hurts
I want to cry...
thosr really hurts
I want erise them, but I can't
They keep hunt me down, like dog a cat
I want forget...
Everything... and start all over.
My life
My things
But I'm in circle, which holds me in it's arms
Dying is the easiest way to escape...

[Tidus Shuyin]

Through Anger and fear
I go to happiness
For being happy again.
It's all I want.
I want my heart to cheer.
Be happy whenever I wake up, I'm school, or going sleep.
That's a dream, which is coming true.
And I believe it will be good
And that's thanks to one great person
Z.

[The Real keyblade Master]

Nice Poems Ts~!

[Tidus Shuyin]

Thanks! Don't forget to check my stories!

[The King of KH]

Good poems Arthur.....you're like me at rap.....The best!

[Tidus Shuyin]

Thanks, and don't forget about checkind stories! In one your name is inside.

[Kairi & Namine]

i like this thread the best.

[Tidus Shuyin]

Ok, thanks.

[Tidus Shuyin]

I slowly walk out of my home
I look straight ahead
and see fear
I turn to left
And I see Past linking together with Present
I turn again left
and I see...
The worst.
I see pain and anger
I see Story of past friendship
Which turned into world of nightmare
I see power of sorrow.
But my soul cries.
My eyes are crying
My body cries
I need help from deep inside
My heart opens and shows my past
I have only one exit
I look up in sky
And I feel calm.
No pain... nothing
But to get there...
There is only one way...

[NicoleChristine]

I liked all of it, but the end. It was deep, but too deep that it was really emo. rofl.

But it's a good poem, good job. :3

[Tidus Shuyin]

Thanks. I just have mood under 0.

[Tidus Shuyin]

When I wake up
I almost every day feel like empty
Sadness surounded me
And I want to cry.
The whole day is dark
But really...
I get sun in my heart
And fun in my head
When comes biggest
Hope ever.

P.S. Thank you all guys! You really are best friends. When need a help you are ready to help. Thanks, for everything. *cries*

[Tidus Shuyin]

Someone feels sad
Stuck between his emotions
stuck in the shadows of darkness.
Knowing not the way out.
His heart has been invaded by sadness
And looks he with dark eyes
to light, which, heart hides deep within.
He's been pushed together.
And his soul is dark
Lost in tears within
Fells nothing but crumbling from within
But tears are stuck
And has been binded by bounds of sadness

(i hope you'll like it, obito.)

[obito]

thx bro

[Tidus Shuyin]

you're welcome.

[Tidus Shuyin]

Just as you know of inner fear
sadness and smell of tears
Nothing is compared to lines
Of life pains and happiness
Just a block of bricks from within of mind
Can change a whole thing of life
A burst of strength may leave you alone
With a single sideline of calm.
Searching for answers may hurt you
With all its might and courage
Just a plain of green grass may suit for you
For renewing yourself for might
Cast away your fears and breezes of darkness
But don't forget...
The light of fury and friends
For it might be a chance for you to live.
Soul may return at its original state
And leave your plain of desert
with a single seed of happiness
You can do what can't do no one on world
leave it in desert, and you'll see...
the true face of light power.
Beginning is the hardest,
But you know,
That there is continue to your story.
All your faith and believes can turn you
on path of Sora
Don't forget this, whoever reads this:
Follow the path of light
And you'll see plain of green, warm grass...

[Tidus Shuyin]

No living can pass trough without sorrow.
No tear couldn't be stopped.
Look up in sky.
And look for light.

If there could be any feeling
If there could be any sight
without hater
I'd give my past for it
My present my future.

Just destroy the chains of sadness.
Feel free to look for key.
But not always it will be found.
for you see...
there are some greater power.

And if you can answer to question
And if you can forget everything
Just leave a hint
And I will follow in your footsteps

[Naminette]

Strange, I'm listening to Sorrow by Flyleaf too, lol It's deep, keep going bro

[Tidus Shuyin]

*falls down to knees, cries*

[Tidus Shuyin]

Soul is tired
And heart is calm for a life's start
A new life is wish for fallen one
In deepest dungeon

When light touches with a sound of music
Magic rises and absorbs everything
Leaving just light and peace
with nice green soft grass feeling

Charge your feelings
Jump the darkness tower
and dive into river of happiness
for a soul rises soft and clean

A scream of newly born faith
fills you with new memories
Leaving old ones behind
With all of it's connections with beasts, monsters
Which followed you trough shadows

No shadow, no dark place
Not even a dot
Just a white paint turning you
into a new human - Awaking

[Miss Lockheart]

Definitely the best I've seen. Well done dude, you deserve it :)

[Kairi & Namine]

that was comforting.

[Tidus Shuyin]

I'm sorry to say for myself
But heart is full and won't let it away.
Till my thoughts and feelings will burst out
And will leave me lifeless

Just a way closes
And backwards brings
out of roof words
Time to go

Tears in eyes
thoughts unsaid
life unloved.
Just a dream's pain

Eyes are sour
Tears are sweet
But heart will answer the call:
It's Time to go

Hands do it without permission
Leave you bursting out in tears
Just a dream, a glimpse of future
Fades away

One for all
All for one
I'd really hope that's true
But heart tells me something different, something wrong.
Just forget
And leave, no looking back.
It's gonna be hard for soul and life
But no stopping, no crossroads
just a straight road and words:
Goodbye, I hope you will understand,
But my heart is giving in
And I can't stay and share my pain
So, it has to be done...
It's Time To Go
and leave alone the thing you wish..
for a only happy moment in life...

Time To Go.

[Tidus Shuyin]

Bond

I was deep hidden
Within heart’s deepest chambers
I stared at hole of pain and suffer
But words finally revived me

Now to roam free
Without any doubt of grass
Peacful and calm look
An bond of friendship has rosen

Sorry that little Short.

[Miss Lockheart]

It's short but very poignant, awesome work ^^

[Tidus Shuyin]

Broken Mirror...

Not a life
But a abyss
Holding me in its hands.
Wanting to drag me down, forever.

I see my face in mirror
Mirror hurls - making me of glass
It breaks and shows my one eye
Filled with wet, salty water

I fall on my knees
Trying to put the Mirror together
But it's magically locked
Once and for all

But then I understand
It's not Mirror who needs to be together
It's my heart -
The Broken Mirror

[cbchick]

nice work!

[Tidus Shuyin]

Choice

Who would've thought
That paper would be a pain
Never ending suffer
Slipping through your fingers
Crying for opening.
But my fingers are afraid
Showing fear deep in skin
Letting paper get wet from tears of skin
Hope lets you believe the happening illusion
In your mind, wanting to be a Choice
And fingers are shacking while opening
But the word there is...
NO

[Tidus Shuyin]

Wind

Hands come and go
Thoughts come and stay
It gets bigger and bigger
Without any stopping

Everything moves with it
Nothing can stop moving
Until comes light and throws it away
Without saying anything good.

Pathetic it is
Trying to change itself
Being in a form again
But the truth is sour: disappear!

Cold icicle things drop from it
Like a frozen heart
Showing no mercy
Falling on heads.

Everyone runs
Curses it, by sending light
Cloud faints
And brightness destroys it
Me.

[Tidus Shuyin]

Sleep

First step
And everything feels funny
Blue trees fall down from sky
Instead of smiling faces.

Ground shakes
Reaching my legs
Opening abyss
To fall in

And I am
Flying not falling
It feels weird
Till Fire reaches the Sky

I close my eyes here
And open them there
Everything's back
The Frozen reality.

[Tidus Shuyin]

God d.... where is my soul?
Did it just disappeared?
Or left without words?
Maybe... swallowed?

Path is long and dark
Answers are long and hidden
Awful nightmare swallows me
throwing fire rocks at me

I'm sweating
Screaming, knocking
No one sees, hears
Only walls... staring and laughing

Question is:
Where are you?

[Kairi & Namine]

gee wizz

[Tidus Shuyin]

gee wizz

translation?

[Zacabi]

she's shocked

[Tidus Shuyin]

Yeah, lately pops things like this out in mind.

[Zacabi]

do not worry, I'll be here to translate for you

[Kairi & Namine]

they were lovely too, in a way.

[Tidus Shuyin]

Thanks, both of you :)

[Tidus Shuyin]

If only everything would be different... (http://www.face.lv/blogs.php?entry=29728)


So true are these words
But my heart silence
Makes me suffer and suffer
While time touches my body.

If only everything would be so different
That is my destiny
To say all the time again and again
While green grass meadow
Turns into desert without any water

So hard to stay in shadow
And watch you pass by covered in smile
For my future is not connected with yours
So sad

Maybe imagination
Or only sight
But I feel like abyss
With no end, just start
Filled with garbage

And the end...
Wouldn't it be so great?
But as it turns out:
I'm just a Dream of the Faith

[Tidus Shuyin]

Sunset

Sun rises
As my feelings against everything
Deep inside resides darkness
Wanting to get out forever

It would be nice
That something, someone
Would finally hear my cry for help
But words stuck in my abyss
By couldn't get out

Frozen Reality
And I'm within it.
Only Sunset can act on its own
As it's done by Mother of Nature

And so it comes:
Dark night, saying its own words
For trying to ambush my soul
In chains of iron
Eyes go empty
Just one picture in front of them:
Walls and me within them.

[Tidus Shuyin]

Hell In My Heart.

I'm trapped deep in your eyes
With my breath speed increasing
I want to say you the words
But I'm afraid of
"What if again..."

Hell in my heart
after seeing you so close
But to reach you
It's a dream of the faith.

You say obsession
I say love
A wall of thick glass in front of me
And I can't go around or through.

I see you disappear
In fog, slowly.
You look onto me
But in mean time, you don't see me

I can yell and kick
But wall doesn't have even a scratch
Not a glimpse of pure light
Trough it.

I fell on my knees.
And tears are like acid
Burning my eyes
For I don't want to loose you
Even if you don't see me...

[Tidus Shuyin]

Hold it tight
Don't let it run
This feeling... it's new
So keep it, within you and remember

Why?
It keeps you awake with a smile
It lets your chains away
Love follows it with heartbeats
as same as myself

Now to think off:
I'm here, am I not?
For how long, none of us know
So treasure this Unnamed and be with it.

[Kairi & Namine]

hey sorry i haven't read your poems in a while. they're still as beautiful as ever. that one in orange is also especially sad.

[Twilight Kill]

I liked it. I need to post some of my poems on here. Good job.


(By the way, if my pix are huge or somthing, im sorry... still fixin' bugs in my registry.)

[Tidus Shuyin]

Wallet Or Walled?

Heavy is my pocket
It is dragging me towards the ground -
Hard, destroyed, no color
Is this the truth or just a nightmare?

Wallet is name of the thing
Hard is to hold against it
But who really can blame me for that?
Who really can push me into the Darkness?

It takes just a step to change letter -
One tiny step towards nothingness
And what is the result?
Walled.

It goes around me, surrounding my body
Maybe it is going to struck through me
I am statue, which is alive
Antidote or Cure - does not exist.

Which of them is stronger, I do not know.
All is illusion - that is what was told
I can not look anymore towards the Thing
For no exit is marked in it.

So the question rises as sun in morning
Though I do not feel it in this cursed Darkness
For I am surrounded by walls
And on the ground by wallet

"Wallet or Walled?" Is what I ask
But there is no answer
No sound, no whisper
I am away in silence - Silence of Storm.

[Tidus Shuyin]

I found an old poem in my Biology notes...

False Choice

Walking around through desert without a purpose
Is suicide for you and your soul.
By putting sunglasses on your eyes -
It alone just will not help you!

Maybe, I did wrong by choosing her
By my side, there
Where legs can cross everything without a limit
And without any thorn in heart.

I may not understand the step I took
But reaching Oasis - is the ultimate goal
"False Choice!" My Heartbrain says
Heart's half is graceful and gives,
Warmth through body as a protection against Blue Fire.

[Tidus Shuyin]

Is there a true happiness?

Have you ever tasted it?
Although, I already know this answer -
Truth is nothing but a lie
Everything is a blur fog

May there be some reason for existing!
You only wish I ignore that
Sending me towards the Grey Path
Ending the misery of yours
Lure the bind of hope and love
Far from me, away in nothingness...