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FinalSora13
04-04-2008, 06:39 PM
Darkness is everywhere and nowhere
Light is everywhere and nowhere
When Light is everywhere Darkness is nowhere
When Darkness is everywhere Light is nowhere
Don't be hiding in your sanctuary
Fight your way through Darkness
Use the power of light
Use your Keyblade.............
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FinalSora13

Namine
04-04-2008, 06:40 PM
Pretty good ^^

NicoleChristine
04-04-2008, 07:29 PM
It's very simple.
Short and sweet.

FinalSora13
04-04-2008, 07:49 PM
Hear me......................................
A voice from darkness...
The life is a big Journey
A lot of paths to take
If you hear the voice...
Decide and take the right way
Its up to you to decide....
You can hear the voice...
You must decide what to do....
The light is not for good all the time
Sometimes you have to choose The wrong way
But the return to light is so sweet so warm......
Darkness makes you powerful and powerless at the same time
This two are eternal.Light and Darkness made this world for all
A destiny common for all.
The life on our world

FinalSora13
04-04-2008, 09:39 PM
Destiny moves everything
Destiny makes the earth turning
Destiny makes the universe go on
Destiny makes the time go on
Destiny turns the day to night
But one thing can't destiny affect.
Our next move.............................................. ................

FinalSora13
04-05-2008, 02:46 PM
I am walking in an empty road
Seeing thing that are wrong
Without memories at all.
Feeling tired with pains ahd aches
Walking right next to dark lakes
I want to leave this world
I don't feel lonely,
And there is nobody
I don't fell something
I fell nothing
I am just a nobody....

Tidus Shuyin
04-05-2008, 02:48 PM
Coool!!!! Great!!! Lovin' those poems!

Misuzu
04-05-2008, 07:10 PM
I am walking in an empty road
Seeing thing that are wrong
Without memories at all.
Feeling tired with pains ahd aches
Walking right next to dark lakes
I want to leave this world
I don't feel lonely,
And there is nobody
I don't fell something
I fell nothing
I am just a nobody....


i LOVE all of them! especially this one!!!!! ur greeaaaaatt :)

cbchick
04-05-2008, 07:19 PM
they're sweet ^^

jaschris01
04-06-2008, 03:18 AM
i love ur poems. ur great!

MASTERSORA17
04-07-2008, 04:09 PM
you are very good to poems .

FinalSora13
04-07-2008, 06:14 PM
Being Rude and Mean,
Being cruel and bad,
Just don't mess with your heart....
It is too pointless to resist...
Darkness makes you begging on your knees.
Showing no Mercy,
You are becoming hasty...
You are not thinking right,
And you are not willing to fight.
Darkness will corrupt you
How powerless now are you?
Becoming Heartless... indeed
Now you must feed...
A Soul Eater now are you...
How far from the light are you?
Stay behind creature of shadow...
The path to light is narrow !
Your home now is the realm of darkness
And from now you are powerless...

Tidus Shuyin
04-07-2008, 06:35 PM
Niice!!! 10/10... no wait... 50/10

FinalSora13
04-08-2008, 09:30 PM
Thanks to everybody..

Tidus Shuyin
04-08-2008, 09:46 PM
You're welcome!