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Cristo
04-05-2008, 03:28 AM
All right, little rapper, should be better behaved
Before I have to go and attack you in SPADES
Went and built this rap game, now I've blown it apart
Went from stealin' the crown, now I've stolen their HEARTS
And let's not get started on my marvelous rhymin'
The crowd see my posts, their eyes sparkle like DIAMONDS
You see, they see me and instantly they fall in love
They wish I was famous so my rhymes would play in their CLUBS
But when it comes to you, your rhymes are just mediocre
Thought you could beat me? Ha! Well, you must be the JOKER
I'm winnin' this race, you're runnin' out of breath, a disgrace
This card came hard, but all we saw was the death of the ACE

Postin' some more soon. :cool:

Chaser's Apprentice
04-05-2008, 02:26 PM
O-O; Uhh. Okayy. =PP, I dun dew rap. Yesh? ;OO, Bu' I guess thar okayy. Lol.
'<LUV DANNY NORIEGA AND THE HOUSE TEAM>'

Tidus Shuyin
04-05-2008, 02:41 PM
Good job

Cristo
04-05-2008, 04:56 PM
DUMB IT DOWN

Your flow is, below this, I know this
So I'ma show this, now you revere this
You've really blown it
Your appearance implies that you own this
But you can't steer it
But I adhere so I'ma get to row this
But I'll go slow so I don't get too close
Like I'm riding in a boat
But I remember I'm not fighting anymore so this bout's a bore
It's a chore, but I don't really even fear this, surely 'cause I'm peerless
And you're out with no doubt, don't shout and don't pout, don't spout and don't you roar, just go out that door
You won't feel what I wrote if you just go when I ask you so as if it's quid pro quo
Made you fear when I quote 'cause I'm spitin' all you wrote in my posts
It's fire for the biter of the roast for tha liars with the most insincere
Livin' with their due, I'm givin' it to you, livid with another rapid release, mistaken for more, I'm the best in this piece

Misuzu
04-06-2008, 05:33 PM
kewl.

cbchick
04-06-2008, 06:07 PM
interesting.

Cristo
04-06-2008, 06:13 PM
Can't be put out, they shout "Enter the Dragon"
I start from the heart so I murder the bandwagon
I rap crazy, you rap lazy, so I'm hurtin' the slaggin'
I'm sick, the Dickens of rap, but deserted the Fagin

I'm revealing that when you're stealing my flow
It don't matter, just chatter...'cause I'm still stealin' the show
And I've got a few feeling my flow, I'm willing to know
If you willin', I'll kill it like I ain't killed it before
I'm like a serial killer how I'm killing these flows
You're like a cereal...just a meal in a bowl

Your rhymes are mindless crappin' in excess
Taste the defeat, I eat worthless rappers for breakfast

The King of KH
04-06-2008, 06:20 PM
they're alright.........................

Cristo
04-08-2008, 08:35 PM
Class surprised at fast philosophizing, speedy Socrates
I'd start the love but I'm far above this needy mediocrity
Keep on, cling to bein' king, on your PC mockin' me
I might slow down to laugh at you, but you don't see me stoppin', G

And you cam rap as long as you want, but I'll be profiting
It's all just crap and weak stunts that prove you're not the king

I should treat ya like you're feeble and not even a threat
But you brag and the fact is you not even a vet

Cristo
04-14-2008, 06:19 PM
I'm not affected, rejected all those detected stalled flows
Rather I flush to gather my hushed enthralled foes
In the sewer of a newer gov, naimly one ruled by me
Complaining's fun, all those fooled agree
We under the plunder of a monarchy
We not stoppin' this opposite, spawn starts me
Therefore declare war, he's not punctual
Blathering and staggering, drunk, wool
Over your eyes so with your closing goodbyes
You deny you're why these posers could lie
Meanwhile, you face a cold fate
While haters got the clean smile, yeah, Colgate
Kill with no heart or complicity
Freezin' so hard you almost can't feel the electricity
And it all connects, like the fallen wreck
And the stain that remains
Consists of a halo and some wings
Resistin' the Play-Doh of a king
But it's never fun and games
I'm done with lames
But they finished me before
Diminishin' the things I've replenished without score
Or instrument...Don't be wary of the primary increment
Deny slander, high standards: what I represent

Misuzu
04-14-2008, 06:20 PM
. . .

Cristo
04-14-2008, 07:04 PM
. . .

Yes? :)

Misuzu
04-14-2008, 07:06 PM
...nothing...
lol ur avatar is funny....hunchback of notre dame...

The Real keyblade Master
04-14-2008, 08:48 PM
Very nice...

Cristo
04-19-2008, 03:53 AM
It's the feeling that courses through your veins
Forces itself into your brain, drives you insane
Feeling dead inside, yet alive you remain
Stay your course and deny that the pain
Is increasing because you want to stay without ceasing
Wrapped in an addiction, conviction decreasing
Causing you to lose your purpose and feel worthless
Thoughts of suicide inside, but what's worse is
It's not done yet, the fun hasn't even started
You're left brokenhearted, your common sense departed
You start doing things that you never even dreamed of
Energy's a memory, you've never even seen love
The pain gets worse, preferring the hearse
Becomes incurring the worst fate you can contemplate
The complicated measures forever consummate
In a contradiction causing blindness, loss of kindness
And a conceited view concerned that mankind is
Lost without your guidance, you wish to confine it
And make it stop, the thoughts in your head get stronger
Sickened by the ignorance, can't take it much longer
Thoughts become aggressive, obsessive
Afraid that you've decayed, progressively regressive
Next it's lack of understanding by your peers
Even if you knew the truth, that's not how it appears
Instead of enlightening them, pacify them
It doesn't make a difference when you're passin' by them
Never stop except to play with your addiction
That gave you this restriction in the first place
Causing you disgrace, now you've got the worst pace
'Cause knowing too much can kill you
Truth can change...even if it's real true
Others don't know this so ignorance is bliss
Before I betray them, I'm giving them a kiss
Should I be guiding or riding in my chariot?
Change my mindstate or face the fate of Iscariot?
I've decided and sided with the path of most resistance
I'll give my assistance for existence means nothing if you're scared to go the distance
I'm prepared to forego subsistence
My acts devise the tact precise to weigh the dice
I'll sacrifice the facts of life and pay the price
For fighting vice is twice as nice as giving in
And I'll forgive those who live their dividends
The only question is will life forgive us both
Forgive me for giving us hope, just wishing for growth
I want to be efficient or omniscient although
Sadly I'm deficient or sufficient at most
Gladly I'd escape from this prison, but the warden owns my soul
Forces beyond my control keep me from reaching my goal
Obedience in the expedience of seeking parole
But I wish to be at peace until I'm released
Yet the chill makes me feel like I'm deceased
Christen my flow and listen to Poe, that's just a piece
This isn't a show, if you wishing to know, I am a beast
Savagery soothed by the truth I abandoned
Intelligence with relevance, but my youth they demanded
I can't stand it, but I must continue to perfect my venue
I just smile and cook my own styles, reject the menu
It's true, no one wants to lose, that's why we persist so
VenFans and Omars flow hard, but there's only one Cristo

UltimaxWeapon
04-19-2008, 04:22 AM
Woah, these might be better then Omar's.

The King of KH
04-19-2008, 06:21 AM
It was alright.....

and dont ever mention my name in this thread cuz i never mentioned yours.....

UltimaxWeapon
04-20-2008, 01:01 AM
It was alright.....

and dont ever mention my name in this thread cuz i never mentioned yours.....

So? Its an opinion.

The King of KH
04-20-2008, 01:15 AM
So? Its an opinion.

lol...tryin to start something huh?


lol *leaves*

Misuzu
04-20-2008, 10:27 PM
lol that one was ummkay. :3

Cristo
04-21-2008, 01:30 PM
Hey, man, it's all just a part of my raps
Must be because I put my heart in this crap
The beast is unleashed from his lyrical prison
While others miracle wishin', I'm on empirical missions
Designed to refine the mind and freshen the essence
Of everything said to be unpleasant 'bout my presence
They said I was boasting, they were debating my tact
But what they call boasting, I call stating the facts
Instead of roasting, they should be appreciating my acts
Is there a better rap? I'm waiting for that :D
But, no, they choose to refuse my blessing
It's depressing how they keep from confessing
That I'm the best in this site possessing the might
To stop stressin' on the suppression of right
I'm the best and that's what they cannot accept
My flows are on fire, theirs are Antarctic wet
I got a C on my chest so all these pawns repent
'Cause I'm the king across e-ver-y continent
And I could rap about board games, bored lames
Abhorred shame, restored blame, ignored names
Explored flames, adored dames, or sword aim
And everything that I rap makes sense
You ached since you break hence I break dense
By will and skill, the acclaim is dealt
And don't accuse others, blame yourself
I'm not understandable, in part I'm a cannibal
With expandable mandibles, the heart of an animal
I inspire in people dire survival traits
Sick jaw like Jigsaw, I'll start chargin' revival rates
I'm vicious, ambitious, some call me malicious
But I'm also auspicious and somewhat delicious :p
He thinks he can beat me? Ha...that's fictitious
It's not even a conflict, I'm beyond sick
I'm smarter than you so I find your response thick
Entering an inter ring of greatness unknown
In the zones of drones totally socially alone
It's not a fantasy, but you should fall on your sword
Make your ears ring causin' you to call on the Lord
I'm always implored to ease up on these retards
But I leave them scarred without any regard
I'm the best, demented and unprecedented
I reinvented exactly what I represented
The only thing that hasn't changed is my style and flow
Even though they try to estrange my versatile plateau
I'm like the Energizer Bunny, I keep going and going
I'm like an advisor, sonny, start throwin' some flow in
And if you can find a weak bar, point it out
It's probably somethin' you can't understand, coin it now
'Cause my raps contain some necessary phrases
You being sick contradicts like estuary blazes
Sing praises 'cause me being sick rings true
Only time you sick is when you have the flu (Ah-Choo!)
Just sit over "thurr" or my wrath incur
Your response to my raps should just be "Yes, sir."
Yes sir, I got superpowers so I could rap for hours
You rappin' about a girl over there pickin' flowers
You can write your love songs, but real rap is my teritorry
And my deliverance will have you shivering like a scary story
It's like Kanye said... "I inspire me."
Amazed by this blaze, just admire me
The only direction to go from here is down
But I never follow directions, I don't fear the clouds
I'ma be the first rapper on the lyrical moon
And have you fake rappers beggin' for a miracle soon
I might come down from the skies to mingle
But this is already better than most rappers' singles
I should be praised since I've raised the bar so high
Planes even claim it's too far to fly, only the scarred deny
'Cause they're coming back to life from their first murder
Until I took to the sky and pushed the bar even further
Now they want to give up, killed their self-esteem
Shouldn't have challenged me, I coulda helped ya dream
I woulda taught you hotter flows, things you gotta know
You coulda been a friend...certainly not a foe
But you kept on lying and just kept on denying
That I'm a veteran and you're just barely trying
When you meet defeat, you always try to deny
But it's no feat to beat you, so don't try to reply
I'm not saying your name, it don't need to be said
But I'm not playin' your game, man, I'm leavin' you dead

Misuzu
04-21-2008, 02:31 PM
hmm i guess there pretty good ^^

Cristo
04-21-2008, 03:32 PM
:rolleyes:

Cristo
04-22-2008, 07:09 PM
I'm tired, but right before the king departs
I'm gonna rap you a story called Kingdom Hearts
It's about a young kid Sora and the choices he made
With his two friends and his powerful keyblade
Riku and Kairi were his two best friends
And that's where the story begins
They worked on coconut recipe findin'
On this little place called Destiny Islands
They were gonna build a raft chasin' other worlds
Riku and Sora up there racin' for the girl
Kairi, they both liked her, found her cute
And they both wanted to share the paupu fruit
She was like their soul mate undefined
And whoever shared the fruit had their fates intertwined
Sora went to find a mushroom in a cave
And what he saw would make anyone else afraid
A hooded guy Goofy later mistook for handsome
But the name of this suspicious fellow was....

TO BE CONTINUED

Cristo
04-23-2008, 02:34 PM
That was just to see how fun it would be to rap Kingdom Hearts. :D

Now, back to business.

Yeah! Cristo's back in the house!
Rappin' award like plaque in the mouth
My raps on fire, the whack try to douse
But I turn off the "hose" like I'm smackin' the spouse

A little discouraged by the limited feedback
But no blaze and all praise, only the primitive need that
I've still more skills than a chief
While others steal what they will like a thief

I ain't feelin' it when I've heard your lines in CDs
And you ain't the one speakin' it, findin' CPs
For ya'll that don't know, that's copy and paste
Corrupted data, needs his floppy replaced

Hater or not, they all sing and clap
Still great, still hot, still the King of Rap

Cristo
04-24-2008, 03:49 AM
"I find this lack of feedback disturbing." :(

The Real keyblade Master
04-24-2008, 10:12 PM
Nice Shiz

Cristo
04-25-2008, 04:30 AM
For some reason, I can't feel the reign
I realize that this is his ideal domain
But he's not real so I still complain
It's in my heart to reveal his feign
I do not tolerate unreality
I know you say I boast but appreciate the duality
I have good and evil like all people
And this slug, he bugs me like a tall beetle
Since the day I overpowered this
He's shown a display of cowardice
I've given you chances to display flow
But every time I want a battle, that's when you say "No"
So, no wonder that there's a part of me that condescends
'Cause when it comes to real artistry, you can't comprehend
You can only depend on the con of friends
And it's up to me to attempt to stay calm again
I know to you, this seems like an attack verse
But it's the truth, you were makin' the cracks first
So this is my only reply
I'd rather stay lonely than have homies imply
That I'm something I'm not 'cause all those frontin' get caught
Even though I'm not your favorite, I'm a composer careless in this fight
And I know I'm not the greatest, but I'm the closest there is on this site

cbchick
04-25-2008, 04:46 AM
For some reason, I can't feel the reign
I realize that this is his ideal domain
But he's not real so I still complain
It's in my heart to reveal his feign
I do not tolerate unreality
I know you say I boast but appreciate the duality
I have good and evil like all people
And this slug, he bugs me like a tall beetle
Since the day I overpowered this
He's shown a display of cowardice
I've given you chances to display flow
But every time I want a battle, that's when you say "No"
So, no wonder that there's a part of me that condescends
'Cause when it comes to real artistry, you can't comprehend
You can only depend on the con of friends
And it's up to me to attempt to stay calm again
I know to you, this seems like an attack verse
But it's the truth, you were makin' the cracks first
So this is my only reply
I'd rather stay lonely than have homies imply
That I'm something I'm not 'cause all those frontin' get caught
Even though I'm not your favorite, I'm a composer careless in this fight
And I know I'm not the greatest, but I'm the closest there is on this site

whoa. thats pretty tight.

Misuzu
04-25-2008, 02:04 PM
there pretty kewl! ^^ there getting better! :)

cbchick
04-25-2008, 08:19 PM
the last one is beast.

Cristo
04-26-2008, 05:40 AM
First off, have you ever been in an explosion?
Survive, come out alive and within begins the notion
That there's nothin' on this earth that'll affect you
Hearse is destined from birth, but you choose to reject truth
And instead you move ahead without the fear of death
Sincere but the appearance gives you the veneer of breath
When instead you've contemplated unlike most beings
Consecrated in the hatred of your life post-seeing
I guess that why it's stated that ignorance is bliss
Same things you tolerated are now makin' you pissed...

Wait a minute...why am I even concerned about this?
I should return when you have learned a stout diss

I've inhaled skill, exhaled will, and bled art
Get ya treaty, you couldn't beat me with a head start
I'm rapacious, pugnacious...which means I'm a beast
You're erased which basically means you're deceased

cbchick
04-26-2008, 06:02 AM
nice.

Cristo
05-04-2008, 07:37 AM
Lay bare the fact that humanity's afraid
Most scared of the spirit's profanity obeyed
It's just there, the fact that sanity's insane
Forget fair, most stuck on the vanity parade
I try to be optimistic but I'm part realistic
And people are narcissistic, part sadistic
Bar artistic, dying tryin' to mar logistics
I'm sighin' lying for the afar stylistics
Do you understand what I'm rappin' to you?
Or are you mostly bland grossly nappin' on truth?
If you're at a lack, it's time for a wake-up call
I'm back and you fakes can't partake at all

dahomieak
05-04-2008, 05:05 PM
ummmmmmmmmm
i didnt understand half of those words (too big 4 me)

Cristo
05-05-2008, 07:52 PM
ummmmmmmmmm
i didnt understand half of those words (too big 4 me)

:rolleyes:

If you don't know the words, look them up.

cbchick
05-05-2008, 08:06 PM
ummmmmmmmmm
i didnt understand half of those words (too big 4 me)

omg lmao

Cristo
05-06-2008, 12:04 AM
Cristo's Rap Translations:

"Lay bare the fact that humanity's afraid
Most scared of the spirit's profanity obeyed"

This basically means that the intent of my raps is to expose the stifling fear that humanity is under. This fear isn't towards God or animals...but other humans. People are afraid of serial killers, terrorists, gangsters, and the like. By saying that it's the spirit's profanity obeyed, it shows that we are afraid of people who lack self-control and obey their impulses...or their base murderous instincts brought on by the weaknesses in their spirit. Of course we are also afraid that we may lose self-control and obey our own vicious impulses due to provocation.

"It's just there, the fact that sanity's insane
Forget fair, most stuck on the vanity parade"

We all realize that what's considered normal or sane (jingoism, bigotry, casualties of war, unforeseen occurrences) are in actuality destructive and/or ignorant. However these have become such integral parts of our society that we ignore it and say that "Life's not fair." We're to forget about any chance of complete fairness in our lives. Most people are not only participating in self-absorption, but they support it and "parade" selfishness. Also it's a play on words because of "Vanity Fair" and whatnot...

"I try to be optimistic but I'm part realistic
And people are narcissistic, part sadistic"

I attempt to look at things with a positive outlook, but I also have to look at things realistically. I am only "part realistic" however because I still have ideals. People are very narcissistic (which reflects the ideals of our insane society) and part sadistic, for in order for one to be narcissistic, they can't be sadistic all the time. They have to put the appearance of goodness on some of their actions.

"Bar artistic, dying tryin' to mar logistics
I'm sighin' lying for the afar stylistics"

People have always tried to ban that which is artistic, especially the aforementioned narcissists. They try to distort logic to fit their purpose. They inspire in me shock and disbelief. Therefore I'm sighing because I have to keep up the lie in order to prolong and preserve my livelihood and ideals. My ideals express degrees of true sanity and a style that is afar and separate from the society that we live in. Also I have to engage in deception to hide my own obedience to impulse in order for my ideals to not lose weight in the face of those who would seek to invalidate them.

"Do you understand what I'm rappin' to you?
Or are you mostly bland grossly nappin' on truth?"

This is a question to the reader and the answer is obviously that you don't understand and, since you don't understand, you can't grasp the meaning (which is the reason for writing this). For those who don't read the raps, they are bland individuals who don't try to understand or "nap" when it comes to truthful matters.

"If you're at a lack, it's time for a wake-up call
I'm back and you fakes can't partake at all"

Of course this means, if you don't understand, I'll gladly help you to grasp the meaning of what I'm saying and wake you up to the conditions that everyone lives in. It also announces my return and it shows that those sadistic narcissistic "fakes" who seek to stifle my ideals cannot partake of the truth that I am prepared to continue rapping.

:)

Helix: The True Hero
05-06-2008, 12:05 AM
Hmm...I like how you've infused such intricate meaning into the lines.

cbchick
05-06-2008, 12:20 AM
Cristo's Rap Translations:

"Lay bare the fact that humanity's afraid
Most scared of the spirit's profanity obeyed"

This basically means that the intent of my raps is to expose the stifling fear that humanity is under. This fear isn't towards God or animals...but other humans. People are afraid of serial killers, terrorists, gangsters, and the like. By saying that it's the spirit's profanity obeyed, it shows that we are afraid of people who lack self-control and obey their impulses...or their base murderous instincts brought on by the weaknesses in their spirit. Of course we are also afraid that we may lose self-control and obey our own vicious impulses due to provocation.

"It's just there, the fact that sanity's insane
Forget fair, most stuck on the vanity parade"

We all realize that what's considered normal or sane (jingoism, bigotry, casualties of war, unforeseen occurrences) are in actuality destructive and/or ignorant. However these have become such integral parts of our society that we ignore it and say that "Life's not fair." We're to forget about any chance of complete fairness in our lives. Most people are not only participating in self-absorption, but they support it and "parade" selfishness. Also it's a play on words because of "Vanity Fair" and whatnot...

"I try to be optimistic but I'm part realistic
And people are narcissistic, part sadistic"

I attempt to look at things with a positive outlook, but I also have to look at things realistically. I am only "part realistic" however because I still have ideals. People are very narcissistic (which reflects the ideals of our insane society) and part sadistic, for in order for one to be narcissistic, they can't be sadistic all the time. They have to put the appearance of goodness on some of their actions.

"Bar artistic, dying tryin' to mar logistics
I'm sighin' lying for the afar stylistics"

People have always tried to ban that which is artistic, especially the aforementioned narcissists. They try to distort logic to fit their purpose. They inspire in me shock and disbelief. Therefore I'm sighing because I have to keep up the lie in order to prolong and preserve my livelihood and ideals. My ideals express degrees of true sanity and a style that is afar and separate from the society that we live in. Also I have to engage in deception to hide my own obedience to impulse in order for my ideals to not lose weight in the face of those who would seek to invalidate them.

"Do you understand what I'm rappin' to you?
Or are you mostly bland grossly nappin' on truth?"

This is a question to the reader and the answer is obviously that you don't understand and, since you don't understand, you can't grasp the meaning (which is the reason for writing this). For those who don't read the raps, they are bland individuals who don't try to understand or "nap" when it comes to truthful matters.

"If you're at a lack, it's time for a wake-up call
I'm back and you fakes can't partake at all"

Of course this means, if you don't understand, I'll gladly help you to grasp the meaning of what I'm saying and wake you up to the conditions that everyone lives in. It also announces my return and it shows that those sadistic narcissistic "fakes" who seek to stifle my ideals cannot partake of the truth that I am prepared to continue rapping.

:)

@_@ thats a lot to read, but u be beastin fool XD

nice meaning and everything. great job!

Misuzu
05-06-2008, 12:21 AM
ive gota admit....ur pretty sick nasty awesome ^^ got-r-did!

cbchick
05-06-2008, 12:53 AM
he's very awesome.

YAY! 10,000 posts!

k back on topic now *leaves*

The King of KH
05-06-2008, 01:51 AM
Nice stuff Cristo..............

Cristo
05-06-2008, 05:16 PM
I come from the belly of honesty
Wrapped in honoring the hell we live in
I'm givin' consideration' but honestly
That's just not the way I'm livin'
I'm livid on the track, deliverin' it back
To every man who's looking for the answer
But not too pure, too bad the cure
Can't be applied separate from the cancer
If we find out how to split the two
We will have conquered evil
So forgive me for the things I do
May the blood rest upon the people

That's more some poetry than rap, but whatever. :D

cbchick
05-06-2008, 08:58 PM
nice.

Cristo
05-07-2008, 08:20 AM
The world is handicapped, most mournin' on deformities
Or either blandly rap about conformin' to non-conformites
I rebel against rebellion, I will remove the voice
Of lames who blindly claim that what you do, you have a choice
No matter what you do, well your idea is just denied
'Cause when what you choose is through, it is left unjustified
Your whole basis is shoddy, you can at best suggest
That you're not harmin' anybody...but you're helpin' less and less
I browse while stressed from bullet wounds and horrid screams
To arouse interest like lyrics that are strewn with torrid dreams
So I face with dedication this blatantly apparent attitude
To change this generation's hatefully inherent aptitude
But I could reach dozens at best and still expect nothin' but strife
Nas said "Sleep is the cousin of death" but I say dreams are the brothers of life

Cristo
05-09-2008, 04:49 AM
Life is pain, it's said, and strife's mundane
So bread's the only gain instead of rights sustained
Got literate maturity, a regular word reader
And I've read "those who give freedom for security deserve neither"
Your flaws are flawless, living with no touch
And you support the lawless since it's given you so much
I beseech the vehement while emergin' as scholar
So we can reach an agreement, no converging on "Holla"
I'm a pendragon writin' flows like a beast
While you're depressing stressin' prose in the least
So many people stuck on exchangin' false information
No matter how many schmucks, it ain't changin' the situation
Headin' to the casket in a basket, fully cursed
Or head-first on our way to a hearse in a Gucci purse
It seems that the flashing lights are there to blind
And dreams cause crashin' heights, prepare the mind
Or else be torn between blinding contradictions
The scorn's obscene in line with crucifixions
They all said tomorrow the sun would rise
Now they want yesterday 'cause they shunned the skies

Cristo
05-17-2008, 01:42 AM
You're agin', full of crap, an old pathetic disgrace
I take the lines out my raps and put them dead on your face
You're a dummy if you think that you can tip the scale
It ain't funny how I'm crashing you "beyond the pale"
Beyond the pale is where you'll see my red horse
It's a revelation related to changin' the bred course
Like you were taught to have no abilities
You ought to stop with all the slow hostilities
Like your insults ain't catchin this king
If rap was an object, you ain't matchin' this thing
But hip-hop comes straight from the soul
Instead of posting lyrics you know that you stole

:p

Cristo
05-28-2008, 12:26 AM
I took a break for a while, now I'm back
There's no excuses or ruses for how I act
He hates how I smile, induces a power lack
But this coward is powerless, so how is that? :D

My raps feed on his link to ambition
I think he needs to rethink his position

He's in the wrong place at the wrong time
With the wrong pace and the wrong lines
With a long face and a long whine
And a strong base without a strong spine

Needless to say he's missin' his backbone
Backs down from challenges but still is attack-prone

Royal blood through my veins like capillary sprintin'
Yet you still holdin' on like Hillary Clinton :eek:

How'd he do so little and yet get so far?
Must be his groupies, yeah, his name is...

;)

Cristo
06-01-2008, 03:44 PM
If I rap eleven words in a line and twenty sentences
I don't even have to make sense, just plenty ignorance
This course you're runnin' down steadily is a path of denial
Of course it's fun to me, you better believe I laugh and I smile
You can't really rap, it's all silly crap so you need everybody's help
But real skill speaks for itself, it doesn't need anybody else
Ya runnin' off popularity, I'm runnin' off sincerity, ex-king
Familiarity with real ideals is what the clarity next brings
I wish you'd give up the ghost so I forgive all the boasts
But you cry 'cause a lie is what you livin' the most
I'm the KING, you're in a trance, just not seein' the switch
I'm givin' you one last chance to stop being a .....

Wzrdto25
06-01-2008, 09:47 PM
I know you're allowed to double post. But boy you pushed it with 5. Please don't let me catch you doing it again.

Cristo
07-01-2008, 08:33 PM
Slanted in whose favor? That's a name of the past
I supplanted the new flavors and degraded the last
If you had to pursue paper, it was fated to crash
It's too bad for these true haters, they are hated and brash

No sharing, true power is about the control
I take chances, but I don't give them out to a soul

cbchick
07-01-2008, 08:34 PM
dood that was awesome lol

short but very good XD

Cristo
07-01-2008, 11:09 PM
Brave...and I work hard to guard the afraid
A young knave who couldn't win as hard as he played
Yet I stayed, it's a fact that the bar I raised
Never looked back, no sorries to the stars I grazed
No tomorrows for the scars I gave
And no sorrow for the charred remains
No eulogy for the buffoonery
No funeral for the puny fool
No sadness, just gladness
No tears, just cheers

No diluting numerals in badness for peers
Or polluting the dutiful with wackness to fear

No unoriginal lames who applaud repetition
No changing the game to fit your flawed definitions

No betraying just because you got offended
No delaying and being a friend-vote dependent

No adolescent limited ignorance of rap
No omnipresent sticked threads with pages of crap

So you should thank me for besting this beast
And I should thank you for resting in peace ;)

Cristo
07-05-2008, 12:34 AM
I take risks and I'm sick like a man with a cold
Collect like a prospector, I'm demandin' the gold
And even though I don't fit, understandin' the mold
And I never will quit, withstandin' the toll
I'm expanding the bold and disbanding the old
And if you don't wanna help, you can stand and behold
If you don't wanna help, you can talk to yourself
As the plan will unfold and I shock with my wealth
As I rock with my stealth, as I play your games
They pray for fame, but I delay these lames
And their comebacks, scumbags, come back
If you ain't a virus, then why you run, hack?
If you ain't a pirate, then why the rum lack?
If I'm not the sky, well, then where's the sun at?
If I'm not here, then the atmosphere is gun-black
And, all the time, my lyrics could've won plaques
You can't win, you're gingivitis, you're not hard, you're arthritis
Rappin' like you got laryngitis, that's what we call scared-of-my-hits,
No, that's what we call scared-of-Midas...cause everything that I touch
Turn to gold, and everything that you touch turns to mold
And the text connects as my words unfold
And that's why I don't fit in, 'cause what you've written is not
On the level of my thoughts
And this preview will leave you disheveled and distraught
It's the Devil that you fought when you came up against me
Don't envy a god when you're mincemeat
Just stay in your place, before what I have to says's in your face
This war's not delaying my pace, I stay in the race
With so much skill that it kills you
I hope you love the thrill 'cause I still do

Cristo
07-07-2008, 09:07 PM
I put my best in every single word that I write
Every little verb that I type, every verse that I like
I make it and I am so good I leave others forsaken
And I am so hood that I don't need a jake-et
Whoops, I meant jacket, looks like I'm back in
The game, sendin' pleasure to your brain
And forever I'll remain like I am insane
Whoops, I meant immortal, but yes I am crazy
You say I've been beat, but you ain't talkin' bout lately
You say you are street, but you rappin' 'bout daises
And I even when I lose, I still win, I cruise and still spin
Flows beyond the edge of your nose, chil-dren
That's what we call eye-popping,
And you can't knock me down, you'll only die knocking

Cristo
07-14-2008, 08:26 PM
Automatic suspension fought the addict's retention
Bought a bag of ascension, caught the static dimension
He's a tad ticked with tension so he's flying above
He feels okay on the silver-gray lining of love
Can't feel the pain so he still remains high as a dove
And, in his brain, he transcends the strained hiatus of
The people that stress him, test, and depress him
Unpleasant, yes, but he's the best, they're just peasants
He shone on his throne with a crown of gold
With no cost, he was lost but now he found his soul
With a resounding goal he swears to never rise
Above the limits of his fantasy, never cries, forever skies
But in a minute he'll come back to the dust from whence he came
And he'll swear to not do what's accustomed since ashamed
But, as soon as tragedy strikes, he's back to the pipe
To end the tears, he spends his years laughing at life
And he won't cry when the high takes an ugly turn
It's fire THEN expire....though it's a lovely burn
First-timer can't see clearly like Cyclops
Sure, the body may go on...but life stops

Cristo
08-23-2008, 12:08 AM
A Trillionaire
I'm a Young Money Trillionaire
My cycle can pop wheelies in air
My fights really impare, instill fear and kill bears
I'm a million degrees
With a mental steam
Infuential, I peak tho it's bleak
I can have it anytime
Cause I don't fight it
'Cause I can't stop mine
'Cause I'm reckless, any tower
Below my almighty powers
And the all righty showers
Of my eye d-d-d-dropper
Missed my other one starter
Got to love the sucky waters
To be fair, I'm hardly askin
How to live...you just talkin
Smell the flowers...la la la la la
But I ain't laughin
I ain't droppin'
It's way too soon, fools
If I can't leave them
Then I lost them
I can't brand them
So I bought them
I can't land them
So I locked them
I walked him 'cause we mocked him like
"you're still on a walker"