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Eman_est
04-30-2008, 02:02 AM
I wrote this poem in school. because we are taking like a class of it. And this really happened in my life so please don't make fun of it.. And when i wrote it i kinda was crying.


I miss that one girl. She was my whole world. When she broke my heart. I just fell apart. And that make's me sad. For all the good time's we could of had. Now we are apart. Which can never fix my broken-heart.

What do you guy's think?

NicoleChristine
04-30-2008, 02:04 AM
short, sweet and to the point. xP

cbchick
04-30-2008, 02:33 AM
its short but sweet lolz

The King of KH
04-30-2008, 02:59 AM
Damn.....that short lol

But its meaningful.