my sick raps

[dahomieak]

i remember those days
those cold winter mornins
lookin in the fogs haze
on my way to school
i was in the third grade
life was so simple
on another long day
now the times have changed
im sittin in my room
missin those days
so much else on my mind
cause my moms on my case
soon as i get out
thers no time to waste
man i love those days

[The King of KH]

I like you (no homo) man.....You're a good rapper.

Prob the 2nd best here.....seriously.

[cbchick]

that was good ashkan lol

[dahomieak]

I like you (no homo) man.....You're a good rapper.

Prob the 2nd best here.....seriously.

we shud make a group
jk (unless....)

[The King of KH]

we shud make a group
jk (unless....)

i would like to...ur a cool dude and me and u in a group would work.

[dahomieak]

i would like to...ur a cool dude and me and u in a group would work.

ha, wat shuld we b called, living legends is taken

[The King of KH]

ha, wat shuld we b called, living legends is taken

Hmmm.....thats kinda tough but i would like to do something wiht you (no homo)

[dahomieak]

I love L.A.
If u doubt u gotta be gay
im down to chill at the beach
the homies you gotta meet
sit and spend the time
just watchin the tide
if youve never been
then your in for a ride
and a hell of a time
so hear this like a wind chime
just like my rhyme
all i wanna say
is ill never go away
ima stay and play
in the city of L.A.

[The King of KH]

Good stuff man..................

[dahomieak]

i made this one in class today after my friend left me when i needed him

if i got your back
u better have mine
every time i look back
i look for a homie at my side
if you aint gonna be there
dont waste my time
im tired of expectin
all of the best of
my friends but they dont deliver
and i gotta deal with the rest of
them but they slither
away any chance they get
i know i must admit
that ive thought of doin it
but i wouldnt do it to you
so i expect the best from you

[The King of KH]

Inspiring.....................

[dahomieak]

some say i run this place
without showing my face
i know i can disgrace
anyone who fakes
their flo and their style
actin like they wild
but in lifes real trials
they aint nothin but a child
i dont wanna burst their bubble
but they front like they hard
but when they in trouble
they burst into shards
ya you act tough now
but in a little bit
youll fall straight down
like a little piece of s**t
so just stop lyin
pretendin ur someone else
or if you keep tryin
ill see you in hell

[The Real keyblade Master]

Damn thats good

[cbchick]

go Ashkan! XD

[The King of KH]

Ur talented homeboy...................

[dahomieak]

my words will last eternity
my rhymes are so refined
and ill stay until infinity
this flow is one of a kind
u cant see that? are you blind?
dont you mess, just go and mind
your own business and ill mind mine
cause i wont hesitate to find
any excuse to beat your ass
u better go to mass
and pray for yourself
and hope to get some help
dont try to fight
cause i aint that lite
so you best not annoy
cause you'll get played like a toy
you're messin with the big boys
cant you hear my fans makin that noise?

[The King of KH]

Amazing. Ur sick.......

[cbchick]

ur so beast ash XDD

[The King of KH]

Ur the best rapper here........

After me :)

[dahomieak]

o and a are a ok
even though he's in florida and im in l.a.
just listen to the rhymes we say
the words we spray
more than enough to fill a page
we aint nothin magic
i aint no sage
he aint no mage
but we're still all the rage
no matter what you say
our rhymes aint gay
this aint just a game
for anyone to play
so while we dominate
you just sit and wait
to be shocked, amazed
by the king omar and dahomieak

[The King of KH]

Good stuff man.......Damn ur sick!

[dahomieak]

i aint no cholo
im just sittin here in my black polo
ya ill wear a triple a
but i aint gonna shed no blood today
i aint no cholo
i aint gonna steal a little rollo
homie, i told you i dont bang
i aint gonna roll with your gang
i aint no cholo
man, i'd rather fly solo
than with your crew
this sh*t aint nothin new
i aint no cholo
i mean i aint the next bono
but im a man of peace
i dont kill the police
i aint no cholo
stop askin me, ill just say no no
no matter what you say
your sign ill never spray
cause i aint no cholo

[Cristo]

Your raps are all right. I like them. :)

[Keybladewarrior69]

Not bad.

[FlurryOfDancingFlames~]

Awesome :3

[dahomieak]

went to a party last night
me and my homies by my side
every girl that was there looked tight
the feeling was just right
one girl from another school
she looked like no other fool
i didnt act like a tool
but i approached her calm and cool
i said if you dig me i dig you
i could tell she had a plan
she said i can go if you can
i found out soon, so i ran
i found out she already had a man
damn

[The King of KH]

Your raps arent alright. They're great. Best rapper, right here.

This is the best rapper. Ashkan!

The new king is Ashkan!

[cbchick]

went to a party last night
me and my homies by my side
every girl that was there looked tight
the feeling was just right
one girl from another school
she looked like no other fool
i didnt act like a tool
but i approached her calm and cool
i said if you dig me i dig you
i could tell she had a plan
she said i can go if you can
i found out soon, so i ran
i found out she already had a man
damn

haha Ashkan tried to get sum lovin huh :awww:

[dahomieak]

my raps have a certain quality
like nothing else in reality
something that makes you wanna clap
and wake the people from their naps
and make them wanna shout "o snap"
"i never heard anything like this in a rap"
they expect to hear cars, girls, and money
rap's situation right now is nothing funny
they rap about superficial things
all these rappers in the mainstream
we don't care about all of their bling
we're tired of hearing the same things
imagine a world of raps like mine
wouldn't you listen all the time?

[Tidus Shuyin]

Wow! Cool! Great job!

[Cristo]

Hey, dahomieak, did you get my PM? :)

[The King of KH]

You're the best rapper now man. You surpassed Cristo (which is really easy) and now you surpassed me. Good job homie..............

[dahomieak]

You're the best rapper now man. You surpassed Cristo (which is really easy) and now you surpassed me. Good job homie..............

lol, i dont kno bout surpassin you

[The King of KH]

Naah you did. Congrats on your accomplishment homeboy.........

[dahomieak]

ya, but u wrote so many and hav been here for a while and got a big followin, no one even reads my thread other than u britt and jihad

[The King of KH]

So? I still think u surpassed me..............

[dahomieak]

u better not stop rappin!!!!!!!!!!!

[Cristo]

You're the best rapper now man. You surpassed Cristo (which is really easy) and now you surpassed me. Good job homie..............

Keep my name out your mouth. :)

[The King of KH]

So i know you surpassed Cristo.:)............

who else?

[dahomieak]

lol

[Cristo]

So i know you surpassed Cristo.:)............

who else?

Well, he certainly surpassed Omar 'cause he didn't take lyrics from other rappers. He's not quite up there with me, but he's gettin' there. :)

[The King of KH]

Well, he certainly surpassed Omar 'cause he didn't take lyrics from other rappers. He's not quite up there with me, but he's gettin' there. :)

lolol wow....

All you know how to do is copy other peoples stuff

For example: When did you start making a thread with your own raps in it?

[dahomieak]

and it was after talkin bout how makin ur own thread was whack too

[Cristo]

lolol wow....

All you know how to do is copy other peoples stuff

For example: When did you start making a thread with your own raps in it?

Hey, I'm not the one who always runs away when it comes to healthy competition. If you make your thread with raps, I just wanted to make one better. And I did.

And, d, you're one to talk. You're the last person to jump on the "Rap Thread" bandwagon.

[The King of KH]

Hey, I'm not the one who always runs away when it comes to healthy competition. If you make your thread with raps, I just wanted to make one better. And I did.

And, d, you're one to talk. You're the last person to jump on the "Rap Thread" bandwagon.

If i were to continue battling, there was prob gonna be fights so i stepped away.....

[dahomieak]

cause im the newest person, i never even heard of you until a month ago.
and i never talked sh*t to make someone mad

[Cristo]

If i were to continue battling, there was prob gonna be fights so i stepped away.....

I honestly don't want fights. I want you to stop being a poser and prove that you deserve to be called the Rap King.

Now we can have it out with NO talking, just lyrics...or is that too much for you?

[dahomieak]

I honestly don't want fights. I want you to stop being a poser and prove that you deserve to be called the Rap King.

Now we can have it out with NO talking, just lyrics...or is that too much for you?

how is he a poser, ur the one who came in talkin sh*t

[The King of KH]

You need to chill out with the disses man. I know ur mad that im the king and all....

and hell yeah, ill battle you. Just not now. I gotta go. But when ur back its on!.

And dude, clean fight. Ok?

[dahomieak]

You need to chill out with the disses man. I know ur mad that im the king and all....

and hell yeah, ill battle you. Just not now. I gotta go. But when ur back its on!.

And dude, clean fight. Ok?

i got winner

[Cristo]

how is he a poser, ur the one who came in talkin sh*t

You must have a bad memory. I originally said nothing about KOKH...he's the one who said that you "surpassed Cristo".

And, yeah Omar, I agree. Clean fight. :)

[dahomieak]

You must have a bad memory. I originally said nothing about KOKH...he's the one who said that you "surpassed Cristo".

And, yeah Omar, I agree. Clean fight. :)

im talkin bout all ur raps

[The King of KH]

Cristo, when you gonna be back?

[Cristo]

im talkin bout all ur raps

The rap thing goes back before you were here.

And, Omar, I'll be back either really late tonight or Monday morning. :)

[The King of KH]

I cant be here late or in the morning..............

[dahomieak]

whatever i go against winner

[dahomieak]

that was a lot of spam,
here's my last rap again, since it was buried under all of that

my raps have a certain quality
like nothing else in reality
something that makes you wanna clap
and wake the people from their naps
and make them wanna shout "o snap"
"i never heard anything like this in a rap"
they expect to hear cars, girls, and money
rap's situation right now is nothing funny
they rap about superficial things
all these rappers in the mainstream
we don't care about all of their bling
we're tired of hearing the same things
imagine a world of raps like mine
wouldn't you listen all the time?

[cbchick]

haha. i like that one

[The King of KH]

I miss you Ashkan (no homo).............

Come man lol.

[dahomieak]

i wanna travel the world
and broaden my horizons
my intellect will build
i want to see many surprises
i can go to mexico
one of the places i will og
i can go to the middle east
and eat a great feast (im hungry)
i can go to africa
and have a great time with ya
i can go to stockholm
even though i dont know wat country it's from
i can go to canada
anywhere on the planet ya
i can go with asians
and find out who they praisin
i can go to australia
this trip cannot be a failya
or i can just stay here
my home ill be near
and the ones i hold dear
their words i will hear
their voices full of cheer
there would be nothin to fear
no reason to shed a tear
for now ill stay right here
the world can wait
being here is my fate

[cbchick]

thats sexy.

[The King of KH]

i wanna travel the world
and broaden my horizons
my intellect will build
i want to see many surprises
i can go to mexico
one of the places i will og
i can go to the middle east
and eat a great feast (im hungry)
i can go to africa
and have a great time with ya
i can go to stockholm
even though i dont know wat country it's from
i can go to canada
anywhere on the planet ya
i can go with asians
and find out who they praisin
i can go to australia
this trip cannot be a failya
or i can just stay here
my home ill be near
and the ones i hold dear
their words i will hear
their voices full of cheer
there would be nothin to fear
no reason to shed a tear
for now ill stay right here
the world can wait
being here is my fate

Middle East!! Whoo!!!

Good stuff man.....

[dahomieak]

im young but still strong
i know ill keep rappin for long
i came onto the scene
at the age of fourteen
i didnt have no bling
i didnt have a team
i did it on my own
but soon i was shown
wat i wanna be
wat would be thought of me
so i got down on a knee
and listened to the music
soon learned how to use it
living legends taught me all i know
now i rap in the rain or snow
but when i first started
all my rhymes were retarded
my raps lacked flow
wat to do i didnt know
i just practiced, learned from the best
spit my raps from the heart in my chest
then i met a homie
that didnt really know me
wat he did was show me
another form of rap
better than that mainstream crap
it was longer than mine
but he could write it on a dime
and he wrote them all the the time
almost every single day
he would always find a way
when i heard his rhymes
i showed him some of mine
and i didnt stop, i still do
even if others dont give a hoot
i know he will still root
even though i just do it for fun
and now he's done
but his words wont go away
i know he'll always stay
cause he helped me a lot
without giving it a thought

[cbchick]

thats sexy ashkan. ily dood XD

[The King of KH]

Man......you're sick homie. Rawness..................

[dahomieak]

i grew up in L.A.
south pas. to be exact
i've lived here every day
my whole life as a matter of fact
and ill never leave for no contract
cause its here i got all my contacts
everyone i know is here
i got em all close and near
and i know if i get a bad leer
i should never fear
cause my homies are here
so i know i can cheer
cause its here i'll stay
in the city of L.A.

[The King of KH]

i grew up in L.A.
south pas. to be exact
i've lived here every day
my whole life as a matter of fact
and ill never leave for no contract
cause its here i got all my contacts
everyone i know is here
i got em all close and near
and i know if i get a bad leer
i should never fear
cause my homies are here
so i know i can cheer
cause its here i'll stay
in the city of L.A.

"my whole life as a matter of fact
and ill never leave for no contract
cause its here i got all my contacts"

Sick!!! Man, i missed ur raps man....

[dahomieak]

ya those were my favorite lines too,
this raps kinda short though, i shoulda added more

[cbchick]

beast dood.

[The King of KH]

More!!! *Begs*...............

[dahomieak]

dont play hard to get
cause you got me distressed
i can't even get dressed
cause im tryin to impress
why do you keep your feelings compressed
cause you'll soon find you regret
the chance will pass you by
you'll just wanna cry
and you still wonder why
why it didnt work
and you think im the jerk
girl you way off
you need to lay off
you missed your chance
i mean i coulda been your man
i still wanna ask you out but i wonder if i can
cause one day youre my biggest fan
but the next youre avoidin me
if you keep this up then we'll never be
but if you stop now then certainly
i'll stick with you
you got nothin to lose
but still you choose
to play hard to get
since the day we met
all your thoughts you kept
now its been a long time
longer than any of my rhymes
but i guess you'll just wait
till you realize that its too late

[cbchick]

dont play hard to get
cause you got me distressed
i can't even get dressed
cause im tryin to impress
why do you keep your feelings compressed
cause you'll soon find you regret
the chance will pass you by
you'll just wanna cry
and you still wonder why
why it didnt work
and you think im the jerk
girl you way off
you need to lay off
you missed your chance
i mean i coulda been your man
i still wanna ask you out but i wonder if i can
cause one day youre my biggest fan
but the next youre avoidin me
if you keep this up then we'll never be
but if you stop now then certainly
i'll stick with you
you got nothin to lose
but still you choose
to play hard to get
since the day we met
all your thoughts you kept
now its been a long time
longer than any of my rhymes
but i guess you'll just wait
till you realize that its too late

i really like this one lol

[dahomieak]

i did it cause omar was missin me, wat a baby :p
nah, but there was some chick thats been giving me mixed signals at school, so i got mad and wrote this

[cbchick]

i did it cause omar was missin me, wat a baby :p
nah, but there was some chick thats been giving me mixed signals at school, so i got mad and wrote this

lmao

[The King of KH]

i did it cause omar was missin me, wat a baby :p
nah, but there was some chick thats been giving me mixed signals at school, so i got mad and wrote this

Im more manly than you lol. I teach right from wrong, son :p .....

[dahomieak]

my brothers now gone but i dont really mind
but i see other people and a lot of them crying
now i got no one to help me pass the time
but if you think like that, that should be a crime
cause i got lots of friends and family too
but none of them were close like me and you
i guess it's true that im blue and missin you
you cant be replaced by someone in my crew
i dont wanna talk much cause i wont make sense
thats why when we talk its quiet and tense
this feeling that i feel isn't really much intense
it's a subtle feeling that we're seperated friends

[The King of KH]

Good shiz!!

You're raw. Always been............

[4thkeybladeholder]

Very nice, dude. You got some skill.

[dahomieak]

I'm tired of hearing all these lies
Every time I hear someone deny
I know it's nothing but a dirty lie
Enough to make a grown man cry
I'm talking about these stupid lies
I was once with a girl
On the top of the world
But soon things turned sour
Just like a dead flower
My heart she continued to devour
She took all my power
With her lies
I hate it when they don't tell the truth
Even when you already knew
It feels like they pulled out a tooth
The pain you go through
When they lie
When you can't trust so called friends
When all they do is put you at the end
No matter how much you help
They treat you like nothing but a whelp
It seems they always have a plan
They try to turn you into a puppet man
They twist and turn every word they say
They keep lying till on their graves they lay
They'll always lie till their very last day
They have you think it's all okay
But it's all the little game they play
When they lie

[The King of KH]

Sickness man............

[dahomieak]

im probably not gonna do any new ones for a while, since im almost never online anymore

[The King of KH]

This sucks.......

Gonna miss em brother *wipes tear*

lol...

[dahomieak]

f**k it i'm feelin another rap

I rap with apathy not empathy
I rap against all your blasphemies
I rap with sincerity and curiosity
You rap to piss others off you see
My raps true, go ahead ask my crew
Wait, I don't see yours?
Are they out doing chores?
Wait, you don't have a crew, do you
Don't worry it, ain't nothing new
Maybe you should stop wasting time
Sitting, writing your hate rhymes
Stop calling people out
Without a doubt
You can't handle a bout
With me, we're at war
Can't you see I got so far
Without talking any sh*t
In any of the rhymes that I spit
So what, you gonna through a fit
Why don't you just get it
We all think you're pathetic
You got nothing but gay rhymes
And they're all full of lies
So just stop, it's over
Don't come back until October

[cbchick]

awesomeeeeeee!

Ashkan is beast!

[The King of KH]

King right here......

F Cristo
F 4th lol.....

You're the best. Too bad u gone....

Whos gonna save rap on the forums? Cristo? pshhh....

Good rap tho man. Very excellent.

[Cristo]

King right here......

F Cristo
F 4th lol.....

You're the best. Too bad u gone....

Whos gonna save rap on the forums? Cristo? pshhh....

Good rap tho man. Very excellent.

Pssh...:rolleyes:

[dahomieak]

thanks

too bad you guys are the only ones who care though

[dahomieak]

I see so many other guys
And with one look into their eyes
I see nothing but a life of lies
And it's weird in their world
Cause they still got some girls
And i'm sitting here alone
With no girl on the phone
And my feelings have been honed
Though it's a girl a want to hold
The feeling is never shown
They're friends to talk to everyday
But never anymore, no way Jose
Cause somethings in the way
There is one I really want
I sware she's so hot
But I know she's got a man
He's two years older
I guess thats why he holds her
And I'm in the shadows
Or down on the gallows

[The King of KH]

Thats sick........

Good job Ashkan.......

[roxas #13]

yo mamma yo daddy
yo greasy greasy granny
in miami pajamies
with holes up in her panties
and she nindynine
she think she fine
goin out wid a frainkenstien
with her broken spine
and she goin tweet tweet
down sesime street
and she got a
steank fleat
comming straight from her feat
man i mean a steank army
oh my lordy
she is scrony
and stinky...man eat a twinky

[dahomieak]

uhh, dont post your own raps in my thread, make your own if you want, but dont spam mine up

[roxas #13]

uhh, dont post your own raps in my thread, make your own if you want, but dont spam mine up

lol...sorry just had to see how good it was

[The King of KH]

Dont screw this thread up lol.....

Ashkan is a work of art
A ghetto version of Mozart.......

Nice work Ashkan

[dahomieak]

Dont screw this thread up lol.....

Ashkan is a work of art
A ghetto version of Mozart.......

Nice work Ashkan

are we talkin about my raps or my body?

[dahomieak]

Grouch told me that rap is senseless
But I see that rap is in pieces
And apparently rap is just needless
I hear people who pick up the pieces
Put them together like adhesive
But some don't know how to rap
And everything they say is just crap
What? You got money, thats great
I got a real life that I live day to day
I listen to the music that I play
Cause it's the only real way
To block out these phony people
To me they're nothing but pure evil
They ruin this great music
They try to embrace it but they lose it
But I listen for the real, and I choose it
So i get taken away by this music
I hear these beats and these rhymes
I keep them fresh in my mind
I love this sweet sweet music
And get mad when people abuse it

[The King of KH]

Thats sick...........

[musicmc]

i remember those days
those cold winter mornins
lookin in the fogs haze
on my way to school
i was in the third grade
life was so simple
on another long day
now the times have changed
im sittin in my room
missin those days
so much else on my mind
cause my moms on my case
soon as i get out
thers no time to waste
man i love those days

thats chill. I try to write rhymes like that too. It also sounds a lot like mike shinoda with personification nd shyt.

[dahomieak]

ha, looks like i got a new fan

girl you got me sittin frozen wonderin wat should i do
im busy thinkin ways for me to get with you
my mind is goin blank cause girl you got me shook
i dont know wat to say cause i dont even know your name
but i gotta act fast, before you walk away
girl id like to get to know you cause you just that fly
but i cant just go and conversate, im not that kind of guy
girl if i had you know i would never ever lie
cause your the type of girl to really make me try
you look like the girl to lift my spirits when im down
thats why when im with you i would never clown
yo girl i wanna see you every single day
without you girl theres really no point to stay
cause ever since i saw you, you've been in my brain
and these thoughts aint never going away

[Miss Lockheart]

That's sweet, keep up the good work ^^

~@LOVE CODY'S FAN CLUB@~

[cbchick]

lol yea i love that one <333

[Crysis]

you rap real good

i like it.:D

[Sor@-Keyblade]

awsome

[dahomieak]

thanks for the comments


well ive been here for so many years
ive dealt with the fear with so little tears
just switch those gears and keep on going
thats what they say when they act like they know me
keep pushin it pushin it, and save it for later
they act so passionate, but their all traitors
do it enough to save up for school
as long as you keep working thats the number one rule
but life goes slow when the moneys all gone
dont even have enough to buy the next song

so you want out of this situation
all you really want is gratification
but you gotta wait til you get that break
til then every chance you have to take

[dahomieak]

its finally going down and he feels no remorse
not as bad as when his parents went and got a divorce
all his feelings are gone, that means theres nothing of course
hes says his goodbyes, coldless without any force
dont get him wrong, he knows she needs to grow
he knows he still loves her, and hates to see her go
but when shes coming home is a fact he doesnt know
but he's not gonna cry just to put on a show
he keeps his feelings low and thats known for sure
but he's still not a man, and that we all know

[GSWarriors]

Damn where are these guys... these are my people!

[Misuzu]

I think left the forums...

[GSWarriors]

I think left the forums...
That sucks...

[dahomieak]

haha, the first day i come on in half a year, and someones asking for me


So there ain't no need to lie,
girl you got me hypnotized,
your the apple of my eye,
baby girl you get me high,
even when you go away,
you stay stuck in my brain.
i'm talking every single day,
and you ain't going away,
so listen why can't you see,
i've thought a lot lately,
that girl maybe you and me,
we were meant to be,
but its a fruitless chase,
to wrap my hands around your waist
i should get off your case,
cause i see you have a date

[cbchick]

uh-oh! ashkan is back at it again! =o

lol

[AnotherX]

I like that one...

[GSWarriors]

That's tight bro... nowhere near me though.

[AnotherX]

You actually calling him out? lol, good luck.

[GSWarriors]

pshhh, he ain't got shyte on me. Although I ain't too good on the fly, lol.

[dahomieak]

oookkkaaayy mr. coolguy

whenever u wanna go, im down

[cbchick]

oh noes! D:

[Cristo]

That's tight bro... nowhere near me though.

Yo, GS, you should post a thread for your raps.

[GSWarriors]

Yo, GS, you should post a thread for your raps.
Gimme some time...

[dahomieak]

ya, i wanna hear what u got.
i actually havent rapped in a long time. i dont take anything i did on here seriously at all. i was just really bored in summer.

[GSWarriors]

lol I really don't write down my rhymes, I like doing freestyle. I wanna go one on one with someone but I don't think they'll let us.

[dahomieak]

ya me too. i just think things up. sometimes tho, when its really dope i just type it up.

i think u can battle as long as no one gets mad, but really theres no need to get mad, its just rapping on a forum about a videogame. no one should take it serious

[GSWarriors]

ya me too. i just think things up. sometimes tho, when its really dope i just type it up.

i think u can battle as long as no one gets mad, but really theres no need to get mad, its just rapping on a forum about a videogame. no one should take it serious
Yeah man I like yo style.


I'll make a rap thread sometime soon, I'll be down to battle anybody. We just don't cuss and no hard feelings will be cuaght.

[dahomieak]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zjIki7tNPKU

this beat goes with it perfect


Girl i've been thinking bout you
ever since the day i left without you
I mustve been insane, yo out of my mind
to even think about leaving you behind
now it hurts my heart that you're not by my side
every day and night, yo it hurts inside
girl i can't even lie
im willing to give up my daily grind
just to get another try
no doubt, i dont wanna be without
you in my world as my one and only girl
this feeling that i get, even when im upset
can you please just let, me approach
it'll be a safe bet, we can take it slow
you can keep me in check, yo i wont oppose
trust i dont wanna just get you out of your clothes
i want something real proper yo


my bro has a rap group at his college that he's in. ima see if he can help me record this, but ima work on the second and third verses for now

[GSWarriors]

Pretty good bro, I like how you added a beat to it as well.