Deadeye
05-26-2008, 08:09 PM
That Sorrow Day
By Carl
As I walk into that church on this sorrow day as I see many faces filled with tears as memories ran through there minds of his life on earth as I see him lying there I cant stop my tears.
I hope you see the lord and prey with angels even though you're not here today we still love you and we always will. So please give us the strength to be with you and I hope you know we miss you.
As I walk into that church on this sorrow day as I see many faces filled with tears as memories ran through there minds of his life on earth as I see him lying there I cant stop my tears.
What made you make the choice to pull that trigger and leave the ones you love. Why did you take your last breath out of hate and not love did you want to.
Now I'm here on his grave on this memorial day and I place this poem on his stone and remembered all those years of his life and cried every step and told him we still love you and all ways will.
I need feed back on this, how i can improve it because im putting it on his grave next year
By Carl
As I walk into that church on this sorrow day as I see many faces filled with tears as memories ran through there minds of his life on earth as I see him lying there I cant stop my tears.
I hope you see the lord and prey with angels even though you're not here today we still love you and we always will. So please give us the strength to be with you and I hope you know we miss you.
As I walk into that church on this sorrow day as I see many faces filled with tears as memories ran through there minds of his life on earth as I see him lying there I cant stop my tears.
What made you make the choice to pull that trigger and leave the ones you love. Why did you take your last breath out of hate and not love did you want to.
Now I'm here on his grave on this memorial day and I place this poem on his stone and remembered all those years of his life and cried every step and told him we still love you and all ways will.
I need feed back on this, how i can improve it because im putting it on his grave next year