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Rex
06-13-2008, 08:51 PM
I just started writing this and now I want to know what it needs...I really need help with the following:

-Name
-What need to be improved





The planet earth, in the year 3020 the human race and many of the plant and animal life left this dieing planet for a new planet that found in a new universe. They called the planet Earth Alpha. With the new planet at there disposal the humans rebuilt their lives, but they made a new ruling. There new home will not be threatened with the many problems their old planet suffered. So they in trusted there survival on the scientist that where working on a new form of living with out taking away from the planet. Soon in the year 3023 the human race had found a new way to live with out taking away from the planet.

They called it zxpromethieus. With the new life style the humans then started to grow. Sadly all would not last soon new inventions had risen from the soil and now the humans had entered the 40th century. A century of flying cars, robots, and a new form of life called nekros. These new forms of life resembled half humans and half animals and where assigned to humans. More or less the Nekros where treated as slaves and would do most of the work until the scientists who created them stood up and created the human/Nekro treaty. This new law stated that now Nekro would be treated like slaves and would be able to have the same freedom as the humans. Still many Nekros stayed with there masters because they felt like they where part of a family.

Then in the year 3040 the humans sent there satellites to check up on their old planet. They where stunned to find an alien race was living on their old planet and soon the humans went back to take their planet back…there for the Planet Storm Wars was born. The alien race had power on their side. With the help of animals the alien race held back the humans attacked and the humans retreated.

Soon the humans where outraged that an alien race would live one their home planet. Such the second Planet Storm War had happen plunging the human’s new planet into a new wave of death. The humans soon dug under ground to escape the deadly sand storms, the creatures that now inhabited their planet. Under ground the humans reverted back to there root and now live in a western setting. Sadly with the western setting came the down fall.

In the year 3050 a man by the name of the Red Devil destroyed three towns and was considered a threat. Even though no one knew what he looked like…there were still bounty hunters out to get the bounty of 100,000,000, Dollars. With everyone in a panic, many people left the under ground cities to find a life on the surface. Sadly anyone who left the under ground cities never survived. Soon a bounty hunter found Red Devil but he before he could get the bounty Red Devil ran to the surface. Now the king of the Cities has asked bounty hunter to go and bring him back. Will the bounty hunters be able to bring Red Devil back….or will they die trying

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nekros Types:
Dog Nekro
Cat Nekro
Lizard Nekro
Snake Nekro
Wolf Nekro
Tiger Nekro
Bat Nekro
Bird Nekro
Bear Nekro
Spider Nekro
Bee Nekro
Lady Bug Nekro
Shark Nekro
Electric Eel Nekro
Fish Nekro
Cyber Nekro
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Username:
Name:
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Hobbies:
Bad Habits:
Greatest flaw:
Nekro or Human:
Human Partner: (Nekro's only) (if someone is a Nekro and you want them as your partner. please PM them first)
Nekro Partner: (Humans only) (if someone is a human and you want them as your partner. please PM them first)
Weapons:
Fighting Style:
Appearance:


If you dont have a picture for you character:
Height:
Weight:
Eye Color:
Hair Color:
Hair Style:
Glasses or contact lenses:
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Distinguishing features:
Tattoos/Piercings:
How does he/she dress:
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rules:
1.Keep this at a rating of PG13 or less.
2. Let everyone have their moment.
3. Your not allowed killing a character unless you’re premeted by the user of the character you wanna kill.
4. Respect other players.
5. No spamming
6.no god-modding
7. Have fun.