Song Lyrics...

[tam_107]

Its called "Away"

Im slipping away
Everythings falling,i just cant make is stay
You turn away
More and more you tear everything away

Just tell me what i was
I cant explain what all this pain does

You ripped everything from the inside
I just want to take it all away
Tired of trying to smile on the outside
Now i feel like im starting to decay

What was i???
What was i???

Just take whats left away
Left with no reason
You come and go like a season
Yet im the one left to pay

You ripped everything from the inside
God i just want to take it all away
Tired of trying to smile on the outside
Now i feel like im starting to decay

Away,away,away,away.
I just want to die today
Go ahead take it all away
Take it all away
Take it all away


Any constructive critism is welcomed or anything like that.I might also post other songs later.

[Aniu, Lover of Riku]

it looks great but i need to hear it to be sure.

[tam_107]

Here is this other song i wrote

Its called "Change"

You like to push me down
All the way to the ground
I wish i could go
But you tell me not to leave
Tell me do u love me?
Now your the reason i hate
Yet i couldnt see
Till it was to late

Do you want me to stay or go?
Wish i stay
Or blow me away
Watch me leave
Now do you believe
I hate you?

I guess we couldnt get through
All the promblems we create
Can you be the reason i love,
Instead of the reason i hate?

Now i cant see
How i fell for you
Do you feel free,
away from me?

Your the one that pushed me down
All the way to the ground
You tell me not to leave
But i wish i could go
Now that your the reason i hate
Hate me???

I fell for all the traps
That you set infront of me

Will you miss me,when im gone???
I stayed to watch the change in you
Something told me to runaway
Still i couldnt get out of my own way
I watched the change in you

Will you miss me?
Will you miss me?
I miss you
Will you will miss me?
The change in you
Blow me away