Clan Challenge - Writing (Rap)

[The King of KH]

The Keyblade Lords - Omar (me)

Vs.

Hearts Entertwined - Cody (4thkeybladeholder)

Good luck noob..........

[VenFan]

Cody! Cody! Cody! Come on! Whup 'im! Do it for Hearts Entertwined!!

[The King of KH]

The Keyblade Lords vs. Hearts Entertwined. We got the man of the summer
That'll be me.I'm known for makin every member a runner.
Flow is eerie. You wouldnt wanna be near me. You my friend, are effete
I efface any member in Hearts Entertwined. And thats something i can bet
Rhymes come as winning. Known for being under pressure and in a position
Your raps are just regular and simple. Mine come as decent and special edition
Rap is how i express my feelings towards wrecks. Make em less
Whos the best? Omar is. Im about The Keyblade Lords and our success
Ya'll better fasten your seatbelts because we gonna cruise
TKL going for the title. If im on a clan, we can never lose
Walkin out without a bruise. Going through the jungle without shoes.
I survive any task. Im a true MC. You're crying, "He will embarass me"
Im sorry but i will. Theres no way you can elude, im coming carelessly
No one dare me to do something powerful. Cuz i can leave em flushed
Me winnin is something you can trust. HE's dreams are going to be crushed
And not by the loser clans. Its gonna be the clan wars winners, Us
Impale any imbecile. Me and you are imbalanced. I baptize
Imbalanced when we size. You stay on the ground and me, i rise
Killed Cristo. Now you're on my agenda and my Christmas list
You miss when you try to ruin my bliss. I come back with a diss
Havoc on these foes.Even my girl knows, i go where the gold goes
Come on bro, I bring the beef to ya front door like Dominoes.
TKL too classy. Hearts Entertwined is nasty. Rhymes too flashy
Its hard to blast me. No one on any of the clans can match me
You're gonna feel guilty for this day, the day that you battled me
This is Mortal Kombat cuz you got killed with a fatality

[~Hysterian]

that's it.
they win.

[The King of KH]

that's it.
they win.

who?....

[dahomieak]

yea,
TKL's got this in the bag

good job omarsito

[~Hysterian]

yea,
TKL's got this in the bag

good job omarsito

what he said.

[Miss Lockheart]

I'm not a member of HE, but Cody's my buddy, so I'm rooting for him ^^

[4thkeybladeholder]

You try to diss any of these members,
I’ll give you something that everyone remembers.
When you’re raps’ died down into embers,
Your rhymes blew out like they were in a cold December.

We’re both true MC’s; that much I can agree.
But against me, you’re no higher than my knee.
You’re just a small weed; I’m a tall tree.
I’m a free MC, better than he or she, I hold the key,
You’re going to lose right here I can guarantee,
So go home now and cry to ma,
“Cody beat me up and everyone said hurrah”
You’ve picked up a battle that you can’t handle,
Your rap is basically just a scandal.

You stutter and fumble, my words make you crumble cause they rumble.
Such is the story of every one who’s even tried to mumble,
I made them tumble before, during, and after, yet I still stayed humble.

You’re not going to win King Of The Hill,
It’s just too high of a place for you to fulfill.
I’m a pro; at the moment I’m going slow.
If you want to win go head down to the dog show.

Is that all you got, right there in that spot?
You kind of just said you were good a lot.
After I’m done you’ll admit what I got,
Better skills than you I’ll leave you distraught.
You all know I don’t lie when I rap,
I mean it when I say people are going to clap.

Yeah, I know what of you rises.
Your ego, you’re full of surprises.
It’ll be your demise; it’s time for your views to revise,
I advise that you lose now, which I can easily vow.
I know it’ll happen; your lyrics are just too misshapen.

You do know Cristo took me on before you?
I was to good of a rapper for him to pursue,
So he had to go on to someone like you,
Even he could see the difference between us two.

Wait, you want me on your Christmas list?
Sorry, my arrow doesn’t quite have that twist.
Even if it’s just cause you want my skills,
I don’t think you can take what it spills,
The best rhymes on the entire forum,
The emotions in it leave you all numb.
It doesn’t matter now if you’re my chum,
I’ll make everyone who challenges me succumb.

Ha, your calling that rap a diss?
It was pretty weak, all of this.
I admit though, you have skill in this.
Just to bad, next to me it doesn’t exist.

You’re right; I might feel guilty, for exposing your own true frailty.

[The King of KH]

Damn, i wont be surprised if u beat me. That was sick (cuz it was longer >.>)....

[4thkeybladeholder]

Yeah. =/

Will said vote for the best.

Go ahead then, I guess.

[The King of KH]

Alright get them votes in peoplez.........

If only we could get a poll. I might ask a damn mod.

[Miss Lockheart]

I'll do that for ya ^^

Cody gets my vote, sure it's longer but it's also the best work I've seen from him. You still did good though King :)

[cbchick]

Go Omar yay! lol

yours was good too 4th. you've improved a lot dood. good job! :]

[The King of KH]

Miss Lockheart...

I'm not a member of HE, but Cody's my buddy, so I'm rooting for him ^^
lol. Well Good luck Cody.

[UltimaxWeapon]

Don't just vote for someone if the're your buddy/pal/friend. Vote for them beause they were the better one.

[videogame714]

Cody FTW

[VenFan]

See, Omar? I told you Cody would murder you, and he did! :D

[The King of KH]

See, Omar? I told you Cody would murder you, and he did! :D

:D ......Ur acting like its over. Its far from over........

[Sora Keyblade Master]

U guys should continue the rapbattle, 'cause the one that goes after the one that starts has an advantage, put some rules.

[The King of KH]

I think this thread should have 3 rounds. We each get 2 more raps. What do u think?......

[Helix: The True Hero]

I think this thread should have 3 rounds. We each get 2 more raps. What do u think?......

But people have already casted their votes. If you guys make raps that sway their decisions, (like mine) then they wouldn't be able to change it.

[The King of KH]

But people have already casted their votes. If you guys make raps that sway their decisions, (like mine) then they wouldn't be able to change it.

I know but still......

[Helix: The True Hero]

*Sigh*

[The King of KH]

*Sigh*

lol i still think we should have 2 more raps each. I dont care if im losing. I just wanna do it for fun. It can have 3 rounds. Im up for it. I dont know about Cody.

[Sora Keyblade Master]

Forget about the people who voted, continue the rapbattle. lol

[The King of KH]

Yeah, im up for it.....

[Miss Lockheart]

I have no beefs about it, but better ask one of the organizers just in case.

[The King of KH]

I have no beefs about it, but better ask one of the organizers just in case.

lol, we're good.

I think we get 2 more raps each. 34 lines each.......

[4thkeybladeholder]

...
I meant for this to be my last rap battle. =/

Maybe.
But, I have my own guidelines I want to enact for it, IF I decide to do this.

[dahomieak]

ya its good if you have a set number of lines.

you should have a time limit too, cause omar freestyles, while 4th writes, so 4th wont have that big of an advantage

im not gonna vote till its over

[4thkeybladeholder]

...
Haha.
I freestyle when I'm in a battle, dude. Same as in real life. =/

Me and Omar should set our own rules by ourselves, without you guys putting in your comments about it. You vote for who you think should win, say who you voted for and why if you want, then that's pretty much all.

I don't want any arguments. It would be really, really annoying.

[dahomieak]

ok, i didnt mean to sound like a know it all.
you guys do whatever you want

[The King of KH]

Im up for anything.

My rules: 20 lines.

We get 2 more raps each.

Thats me. Idk bout you.

[4thkeybladeholder]

PMed you my rules. Up for accepting, do so. If not, I'm not doing it.

[NicoleChristine]

;Voted.;

[The King of KH]

;Voted.;

Who did u vote for. I need to kno....

....lol

[NicoleChristine]

Who did u vote for. I need to kno....

....lol

Nope.
Confidential, sorry Omar. :3

[The King of KH]

Nope.
Confidential, sorry Omar. :3

i knew lol.....

Im not stupid :)

[NicoleChristine]

i knew lol.....

Im not stupid :)

If you say so. ;]

[cbchick]

If you say so. ;]

lmfao

[The King of KH]

.....

[cbchick]

.....

i love you too.

[4thkeybladeholder]

Haha.

Wow... This many pages. >.<

[ForgottenMemory]

YESSSSS.
Go 4th! Representing that writers can rap, and use full good literature. :]

[The King of KH]

I change my rap length to 24 lines cuz when its long, no one reads it.........

so its 24 lines for me

[4thkeybladeholder]

But it's still up to the 32 maximum, right?

[The King of KH]

But it's still up to the 32 maximum, right?

Sure...

[4thkeybladeholder]

Meh, I don't care. I'll keep it the same length as you I guess.

[The King of KH]

Meh, I don't care. I'll keep it the same length as you I guess.

Kk.....Imma do mine today.

[4thkeybladeholder]

I'll start mine today or tomorrow. I don't have time right now.