My Song

[Yellow Flash]

I don't know why I wrote this....But I was going to sleep one night, and I just sung thing......and I need to get it out, it doesn't have any music, just a tune I made up, it is supposed to be sung slow and in a deep voice.....please enjoy

First Sight

(First verse)
I was walking down the street, through the dust and dreary rain
Just try-ing to forget all of my pain
But, then I looked and saw your reddish-golden hair
And sudd-en-ly I knew, it was you right there

(Second verse)
You looked at me, I looked at you,
And then sudd-en-ly I just knew
But then, you were swept away
And I still haven’t, found you to this day.

(Chorus)
I looked at you, you looked at me
And sudd-en-ly I knew, it was certainly meant to be
Your golden eyes, they pierced right through my heart
And I just knew, you saw my every part.

(Third Verse)
So now I look, everywhere for you
I don’t why, I just need to
You stole my heart, that fateful day
Now I need you, in everyway

(Spoken)
So Now I sing
Why? Why? Why? Why? Why?
Why? O Why? O Why?
Why? Why? Why? Why? Why?
Why? O Why? O Why?

(Chorus)
I looked at you, you looked at me
And sudd-en-ly I knew, it was certainly meant to be
Your golden eyes, they pierced right through my heart
And I just knew, you saw my every part.

Solo

(Chorus)
I looked at you, you looked at me
And sudd-en-ly I knew, it was certainly meant to be
Your golden eyes, they pierced right through my heart
And I just knew, you saw my every part.

(Spoken)
So Now I sing
Why? Why? Why? Why? Why?
Why? O Why? O Why?
Why? Why? Why? Why? Why?
Why? O Why? O Why?
(Spoken)
So Now I sing
Why? Why? Why? Why? Why?
Why? O Why? O Why?
Why? Why? Why? Why? Why?
Why? O Why? O Why?

(Chorus, starting to fade….)
I looked at you, you looked at me
And sudd-en-ly I knew, it was certainly meant to be
Your golden eyes, they pierced right through my heart
And I just knew, you saw my every part.

So Now I sing
(Fade off too end.)
Why? Why? Why? Why? Why?
Why? O Why? O Why?
Why? Why? Why? Why? Why?
Why? O Why? O Why?

[Miss Lockheart]

That's cool Yellow, would love to see how it would fit to a tune :)

[Yellow Flash]

Thanks Sam...I would sing it, cept I don't have any recording stuff on my computer.....

[Sam Greenlet]

Plus you can't sing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL

Nah I'm just kidding I love it and by the way I think thats one of those songs you can sing anyway you like but it'll still sound cool

LOVE it please tell me you got more

From your mate SAM I AM

[Yellow Flash]

I might......soon.........I just need to feel it....like I did this one

[Twilightspain]

Woot! I luvs it, betterz than I could do byz a longshot!

[Yellow Flash]

thanks for that........it just came to me

[Yellow Flash]

Here is the newest song I wrote......

Train going Nowhere



First Verse
I get on this train
I think it is my usual
That feeling passes, as I look around
These sunken faces, I don’t know anyone
I think this is, the wrong train for me

Chorus
Train, train, train, trainity, train, going nowhere
Train, train, train, trainity, train, going nowhere
Train, train, train, trainity, train, going nowhere
Train, train, train, trainity, train, going nowhere

Second Verse
I get up, from my seat on the bench
I think I know, what this train, is
It is a place, for all, those people who have
Given up in life, or don’t bother anymore
I am just another passing through
But still I……pity them

Chorus

Train, train, train, trainity, train, going nowhere
Train, train, train, trainity, train, going nowhere
Train, train, train, trainity, train, going nowhere
Train, train, train, trainity, train, going nowhere

Third verse
The train stops, but no-one gets out
I stand up, it is my stop;
I’m not one of them. The faceless ones
I walk out, and don’t look back,
Although I think of them
They left me thinking, of times lost to men

Chorus

Train, train, train, trainity, train, going nowhere
Train, train, train, trainity, train, going nowhere
Train, train, train, trainity, train, going nowhere
Train, train, train, trainity, train, going nowhere

Solo
Fourth verse
Ever since that ride, I have helped people
Get out of that rut, before it kills you
It is a horrible thing……
Juts doing nothing, in you life at all

Chorus

Train, train, train, trainity, train, going nowhere
Train, train, train, trainity, train, going nowhere
Train, train, train, trainity, train, going nowhere
Chorus
(Fades off)
Train, train, train, trainity, train, going nowhere
Train, train, train, trainity, train, going nowhere
Train, train, train, trainity, train, going nowhere

[Miss Lockheart]

Oooh that's not bad YF, you're getting good at this :D

[Misuzu]

hehe trainty train....meh like :)

[Yellow Flash]

Thanks guys.......I think I might be a song writer

[Yellow Flash]

Here is my newest song.........It's supposed to be a bit upbeat........here it is
Plain and Simple


First Verse
Do you know why the world is so complicated?
Do you know why it is so confusing?
Do you know why they care so much?
About things, that makes no sense?

8 bar Solo

Chorus
Plain and Simple, that’s the way I like it
Plain and Simple, not to over complicated
Plain and Simple, it makes sense
Plain and Simple, not any, of this confusing stuff


Second Verse
Do you know why the world is obsessed with money?
Do you know why it cares so much?
Do you know why people are poor?
Do you know any of these confusing things?

8 bar Solo

Chorus
Plain and Simple, that’s the way I like it
Plain and Simple, not to over complicated
Plain and Simple, it makes sense
Plain and Simple, not any, of this confusing stuff


Third Verse
Do you know why the world is so analytical?
Do you know why the world is so selfish?
Do you know why people are mean?
Do you know any of these things?

Chorus
Plain and Simple, that’s the way I like it
Plain and Simple, not to over complicated
Plain and Simple, it makes sense
Plain and Simple, not any, of this confusing stuff

(Music fades to background)
(Spoken)
Come on everyone….sing!

(Sung)
4 bar Solo

Plain and Simple!!!

4 bar Solo

Plain and Simple!!!!

4 bar Solo

Plain and Simple!!!

4 bar Solo

Plain and Simple!!!!

YEAH!!!!

Chorus
Plain and Simple, that’s the way I like it
Plain and Simple, not to over complicated
Plain and Simple, it makes sense
Plain and Simple, not any, of this confusing stuff

Fourth verse
I feel the weirdness of the world
I feel the complication
I feel the confusion of everyone
Why can’t it be PLAIN AND SIMPLE?

Chorus
Plain and Simple, that’s the way I like it
Plain and Simple, not to over complicated
Plain and Simple, it makes sense
Plain and Simple, not any, of this confusing stuff

8 bar solo

Chorus (Fades to end)
Plain and Simple, that’s the way I like it
Plain and Simple, not to over complicated
Plain and Simple, it makes sense
Plain and Simple, not any, of this confusing stuff

[Kairi1]

=3 Lovely :D Be back kk

[Yellow Flash]

Thanks.........I will be gone from 6:00 cause off a party

[Miss Lockheart]

Ooooh coolies another good one :D

[Yellow Flash]

Thanks Sam, I might have a new one up in a few days

[Yellow Flash]

This is my newest song.... It is not about me, nor anybody else.......It's just a song a wrote for everyone heartbroken......here it is....
It is supposed to be sung a lot faster then my other songs......and with an angry tone, except for one bit, in the middle......(also.......true love isn't fickle.........It's just a song about a heartbroken kid)


Fickleness

Intro (spoken)
Girl: Oh come on…..we both know it was fake….
Guy: you…maybe…… I can’t talk about it……..but there is something I can sing…..
Girl: What???

Intro (Music)

Verse 1:
Do you know how it feels when your heart is ripped out?
Do you now how it feels, when you always need to pout?
Do you know what you did to me that day?
Now there’s only one thing to say……


Chorus:
Love is a fickle thing! Love is a fickle thing!
Happiness and hate, it can both bring
Do you know what you did?
Do you know what you’ve done?
Love is a……..fickle thing


Verse 2:
You ripped out my heart, and bounced it as a ball
You pounded on my love, like it was nothing at all
You showed everyone, how little you cared
Now there’s only one thing to say…..

Chorus:
Love is a fickle thing! Love is a fickle thing!
Happiness and hate, it can both bring
Do you know what you did?
Do you know what you’ve done?
Love is a……..fickle thing

Verse 3 (change in tune)
You might have done…..all of these things….
You might have broken….. My heart beyond repair
But still, I love you……now that’s not fair
Only one thing I can say….

Chorus: (original tune)
Love is a fickle thing! Love is a fickle thing!
Happiness and hate, it can both bring
Do you know what you did?
Do you know what you’ve done?
Love is a……..fickle thing

Solo

Verse 4:
Walk away if you want….
Just know one thing….
I still will love you…..
Now this is what I sing…….


Chorus:
Love is a fickle thing! Love is a fickle thing!
Happiness and hate, it can both bring
Do you know what you did?
Do you know what you’ve done?
Love is a……..fickle thing

Chorus:
Love is a fickle thing! Love is a fickle thing!
Happiness and hate, it can both bring
Do you know what you did?
Do you know what you’ve done?
Love is a……..fickle thing

[Miss Lockheart]

Cool YF, I like the quirky imagery in this one ^^

[Yellow Flash]

You do??? wow thanks.......I just wrote the things that made the most sense to the song part of by brain......hmmmmm.....maybe I should get my friend to help with me a few tunes.......

[Kryptik]

I think you should really put it to a tune and turn it into mp3 format and post it in here.
That's how good I think you are.

[Yellow Flash]

Wow.....really....thanks......I can sing it to a tune in my head, but I have written it down.....(I can remember the tune though......)

[Kryptik]

Wow.....really....thanks......I can sing it to a tune in my head, but I have written it down.....(I can remember the tune though......)

The most important part is remembering the lyrics without the paper and to get it into an mp3 format. It'll be awesome whatever rhythm/beat you choose and what instruments!. You are quite welcome and I look forward to more lyrics or mp3 formats of your songs. ^^

[Yellow Flash]

Yep........I just need to record it now......maybe after my exams

[Kryptik]

Yep........I just need to record it now......maybe after my exams

Alright then, and good luck with your exams!..

[Yellow Flash]

Ok.....thank you.......

[Kryptik]

No prob that's what friends are for!.

[Yellow Flash]

Newest song........I'll properly stop for a while, until I can change the song into an mp3 format......then you can see how the songs are to a tune (and my voice.....lol)

This song come around, from me thinking of the slang term of Brudda.....(or brother....) and I just made a song from it.....the main thing in this song is it's beat....anyway here
Brudda…

Intro

First Verse
I know, what you’re going, through
And I’m here, here for you….
If you need, a friend to lean on
I’m here brudda, so come on sing along.


Chorus
Cause
I feel you brudda, and I’m here to stay
I feel you brudda, and I’m not leaving, no way
I feel you brudda, and I’m here, here for you
I feel you brudda, and I know what you gotta do.

4 beat solo

Second Verse
Don’t tell me to leave, cause I won’t
Don’t tell me that bull, cause I don’t
Believe that stuff, for one little second
You need me here brudda, for ever


Chorus
Cause
I feel you brudda, and I’m here to stay
I feel you brudda, and I’m not leaving no way
I feel you brudda, and I’m here, here for you
I feel you brudda, and I know what you gotta do.


4 beat solo

Third Verse
I know, your going through some tough times
I know, you properly don’t want my help
But I know, you need it anyway
And that’s why, I here for you brudda

Chorus
Cause
I feel you brudda, and I’m here to stay
I feel you brudda, and I’m not leaving no way
I feel you brudda, and I’m here, here for you
I feel you brudda, and I know what you gotta do.

Solo

Fourth verse
And when, your troubles have passed
I still will be here, until you breathe your last
Cause that’s what, bruddas are for
And I will be here, for ever more

Chorus
Cause
I feel you brudda, and I’m here to stay
I feel you brudda, and I’m not leaving no way
I feel you brudda, and I’m here, here for you
I feel you brudda, and I know what you gotta do.

4 beat solo

Chorus
Cause
I feel you brudda, and I’m here to stay
I feel you brudda, and I’m not leaving no way
I feel you brudda, and I’m here, here for you
I feel you brudda, and I know what you gotta do.

[Kryptik]

OMFGBBQSAUCE!.. That's another awesome song!... Keep going!..

[Yellow Flash]

Wow thanks.......maybe when I have made ten or 12..........and put them to music, I might sell them

[Miss Lockheart]

Coolies YF ^^

[Yellow Flash]

Thankies........I like this one the best.......

[Kryptik]

Thankies........I like this one the best.......

(I know this is off topic and random...But I was curious to what your real name was.)

[Yellow Flash]

(Oh.......why???.......) I'll PM it to you, if you really want to know

[Kryptik]

(Oh.......why???.......) I'll PM it to you, if you really want to know

(Yes please do PM me it. Thanks...Just because I've been talking to you for a while and it would be nice to know the person you are talking to.)

Anyways keep up the awesome work!

[Yellow Flash]

(Ok......I'll do it now........)
Thanks

[Kryptik]

Cool, np..

[Yellow Flash]

How do like the words for this song so far.......I'm stuck on the third verse:
But this is what I have so far
Untouchable

Intro

First Verse:
He will walk through the fire and flame
He was take every challenge in his name
But still, he will remain
Cause he’s untouchable… untouchable

Chorus
He’s untouchable, untouchable he cannot die
He’s untouchable, untouchable I do not lie
He’s untouchable, untouchable but he feels our pain
He’s untouchable, untouchable and will remain

Interlude

Second Verse:
When we are faced with troubles
He will come and smash to rubble
All the mountains that obscure our way
Cause he’s untouchable… untouchable

Chorus
He’s untouchable, untouchable he cannot die
He’s untouchable, untouchable I do not lie
He’s untouchable, untouchable but he feels our pain
He’s untouchable, untouchable and will remain

Interlude

Third Verse
..............

[Miss Lockheart]

I really like this one :D

Only thing is the first line- it's too obvious that you've kinda taken it from DragonForce. Shouldn't be a prob though, it just makes me want to burst into DF song :P

[Yellow Flash]

Yeah.......that was one of the problems.......(I really like that band....too much influence.....i need another line......and to figure out the third verse....)
Thanks.......I think it has promise

[Kryptik]

That's really interesting, but yeah I also wanna dive into Dragon Force.. xD..

[Yellow Flash]

Big lol.........any suggestions for the third verse???

[Kryptik]

How do like the words for this song so far.......I'm stuck on the third verse:
But this is what I have so far
Untouchable

Intro

First Verse:
He will walk through the fire and flame
He was take every challenge in his name
But still, he will remain
Cause he’s untouchable… untouchable

Chorus
He’s untouchable, untouchable he cannot die
He’s untouchable, untouchable I do not lie
He’s untouchable, untouchable but he feels our pain
He’s untouchable, untouchable and will remain

Interlude

Second Verse:
When we are faced with troubles
He will come and smash to rubble
All the mountains that obscure our way
Cause he’s untouchable… untouchable

Chorus
He’s untouchable, untouchable he cannot die
He’s untouchable, untouchable I do not lie
He’s untouchable, untouchable but he feels our pain
He’s untouchable, untouchable and will remain

Interlude

Third Verse
..............


We're untouchable because we do not fear
We're untouchable because we're unbeatable
The reason why is so clear here.


(Something like that, just remember I'm not very good at this kind of thing so I'll just throw things out..)

[musicmc]

nicee. What genre r u thinking of incorporating it into? Or u should do a passion remix with those lyrics xP

[Kryptik]

How do like the words for this song so far.......I'm stuck on the third verse:
But this is what I have so far
Untouchable

Intro

First Verse:
He will walk through the fire and flame
He was take every challenge in his name
But still, he will remain
Cause he’s untouchable… untouchable

Chorus
He’s untouchable, untouchable he cannot die
He’s untouchable, untouchable I do not lie
He’s untouchable, untouchable but he feels our pain
He’s untouchable, untouchable and will remain

Interlude

Second Verse:
When we are faced with troubles
He will come and smash to rubble
All the mountains that obscure our way
Cause he’s untouchable… untouchable

Chorus
He’s untouchable, untouchable he cannot die
He’s untouchable, untouchable I do not lie
He’s untouchable, untouchable but he feels our pain
He’s untouchable, untouchable and will remain

Interlude

Third Verse
..............


We're untouchable because we do not fear
We're untouchable because we're unbeatable
The reason why is so clear here.


(Something like that, just remember I'm not very good at this kind of thing so I'll just throw things out..)

[Yellow Flash]

good idea........thanks mate, I got an idea for the third verse...... and you just helped me with the fourth verse......


(genre for this song is religious.....or praise and worship......for my other songs
First Sight: Love song
Train Going Nowhere: General?
Plain and Simple: Rap....or rock
Fickleness: Break Up song
Brudda: Rap or rock
Untouchable: praise and worship.....

Ok here is the completed song

(It's about God if your wondering......and Jesus.....the 4th verse, which Kryptik helped me with is about how chirstians are untouchable with him....enjoy)

Untouchable

Intro

First Verse:
He will walk through the fire and flame
He was take every challenge in his name
But still, he will remain
Cause he’s untouchable… untouchable

Chorus
He’s untouchable, untouchable he cannot die
He’s untouchable, untouchable I do not lie
He’s untouchable, untouchable but he feels our pain
He’s untouchable, untouchable he will remain

Interlude

Second Verse:
When we are faced with troubles
He will come and smash to rubble
All the mountains that obscure our way
Cause he’s untouchable… untouchable

Chorus
He’s untouchable, untouchable he cannot die
He’s untouchable, untouchable I do not lie
He’s untouchable, untouchable but he feels our pain
He’s untouchable, untouchable he will remain

Interlude

Third Verse
He is, the epitome of good
He reigns, just like he should
We worship him, for ever
Cause he’s untouchable… untouchable

Chorus
He’s untouchable, untouchable he cannot die
He’s untouchable, untouchable I do not lie
He’s untouchable, untouchable but he feels our pain
He’s untouchable, untouchable he will remain

Solo

(Change of tune)
Fourth Verse:
We’re untouchable we do not fear
We’re untouchable, we hold him near
We’re untouchable and the reasons clear
Cause he’s untouchable and we hold him dear.

(Tune back to normal)
Chorus
He’s untouchable, untouchable he cannot die
He’s untouchable, untouchable I do not lie
He’s untouchable, untouchable but he feels our pain
He’s untouchable, untouchable he will remain

Interlude

(Fades off)
Chorus
He’s untouchable, untouchable he cannot die
He’s untouchable, untouchable I do not lie
He’s untouchable, untouchable but he feels our pain
He’s untouchable, untouchable he will remain

[Kryptik]

Awesome work!... Glad I could help you!.. That song should be "Praise Worship rock" just cause it's that awesome.. ^^..

[Yellow Flash]

Thank you very much..........I'm going to try and write down the music for this one first......

[Blak boy playin wit a key]

i dont noe why but while im reading ur music, something from the Beattles rings in my mind... Doubt their music would fit into ur tune but its bugging me now lol.

NICE SONGS FLASH!!!! keep on writin'

[Yellow Flash]

Thanks......lol Beattles........(Thinks of songs) nope I don't think it would....:D

[Yellow Flash]

Sorry bout the double post.........but does anyone know about any software I can use to put music to my songs........like I sing into the computer and then it puts instruments to it???

[wesonewee]

That's pretty good, it's hard writing an actualy song too. I've treid and failed, good work.

[Yellow Flash]

Thanks........

[Kryptik]

Sorry bout the double post.........but does anyone know about any software I can use to put music to my songs........like I sing into the computer and then it puts instruments to it???

What OS system do you have?...

[Yellow Flash]

OS?...Office System?

[Kryptik]

Operating System... What kind of computer do you have...

[Yellow Flash]

Oh right.......
A Toshiba Notebook

[Kryptik]

Oh right.......
A Toshiba Notebook

You could try looking on downloads.com to see if there's anything useful there.

[Yellow Flash]

Thanks......I'll see what I can find..........

[Kryptik]

Sure thing, and good luck!

[Yellow Flash]

I might be getting music for this soon......I have a lot of musical friends.......I am also working on another song.......just wait

[Kryptik]

Alright! I look forward to it.

[Yellow Flash]

So do I........

[Yellow Flash]

Here is a new one......it is a tribuite to the hot summers of Australia......

HeatWave


Intro

Verse 1
I’m walking cross the desert; through the hot Australian Sun
I’m walking cross the desert; and it ain’t much fun
I feel the hot sun burning up my skin
And this hot sun just makes me want to sing.

Chorus
Heatwave, heatwave, its beating on my back
Heatwave, heatwave, I think it’s making me crack
Heatwave, heatwave, I can see, no life
Heatwave, heatwave, you can cut it with a knife

Verse 2
Can’t you feel the heat it’s everywhere
Can’t you feel the heat they call this fair
I can feel my feet, burning on the ground
And I know this heat is deep and profound

Chorus
Heatwave, heatwave, its beating on my back
Heatwave, heatwave, I think it’s making me crack
Heatwave, heatwave, I can see, no life
Heatwave, heatwave, you can cut it with a knife

Solo

Verse 3
And this heat which is everywhere
Makes me, want to rip out my hair
Cause this heat it is so bad
And this heat it’s making me mad

Chorus
Heatwave, heatwave, its beating on my back
Heatwave, heatwave, I think it’s making me crack
Heatwave, heatwave, I can see, no life
Heatwave, heatwave, you can cut it with a knife

Chorus/Outro
Heatwave, heatwave, its beating on my back
Heatwave, heatwave, I think it’s making me crack
Heatwave, heatwave, I can see, no life
Heatwave, heatwave, you can cut it with a knife

[_Axel_]

I don't know why I wrote this....But I was going to sleep one night, and I just sung thing......and I need to get it out, it doesn't have any music, just a tune I made up, it is supposed to be sung slow and in a deep voice.....please enjoy

First Sight

(First verse)
I was walking down the street, through the dust and dreary rain
Just try-ing to forget all of my pain
But, then I looked and saw your reddish-golden hair
And sudd-en-ly I knew, it was you right there

(Second verse)
You looked at me, I looked at you,
And then sudd-en-ly I just knew
But then, you were swept away
And I still haven’t, found you to this day.

(Chorus)
I looked at you, you looked at me
And sudd-en-ly I knew, it was certainly meant to be
Your golden eyes, they pierced right through my heart
And I just knew, you saw my every part.

(Third Verse)
So now I look, everywhere for you
I don’t why, I just need to
You stole my heart, that fateful day
Now I need you, in everyway

(Spoken)
So Now I sing
Why? Why? Why? Why? Why?
Why? O Why? O Why?
Why? Why? Why? Why? Why?
Why? O Why? O Why?

(Chorus)
I looked at you, you looked at me
And sudd-en-ly I knew, it was certainly meant to be
Your golden eyes, they pierced right through my heart
And I just knew, you saw my every part.

Solo

(Chorus)
I looked at you, you looked at me
And sudd-en-ly I knew, it was certainly meant to be
Your golden eyes, they pierced right through my heart
And I just knew, you saw my every part.

(Spoken)
So Now I sing
Why? Why? Why? Why? Why?
Why? O Why? O Why?
Why? Why? Why? Why? Why?
Why? O Why? O Why?
(Spoken)
So Now I sing
Why? Why? Why? Why? Why?
Why? O Why? O Why?
Why? Why? Why? Why? Why?
Why? O Why? O Why?

(Chorus, starting to fade….)
I looked at you, you looked at me
And sudd-en-ly I knew, it was certainly meant to be
Your golden eyes, they pierced right through my heart
And I just knew, you saw my every part.

So Now I sing
(Fade off too end.)
Why? Why? Why? Why? Why?
Why? O Why? O Why?
Why? Why? Why? Why? Why?
Why? O Why? O Why?


Dude can you play? Because it'd be sweet to hear/see a recording of this.

[Yellow Flash]

I can play piano........But I need to go over some notes and stuff with my friend...I can sing it and I have the tune in my head......but it wouldn't work with out the music

[Kryptik]

I can play piano........But I need to go over some notes and stuff with my friend...I can sing it and I have the tune in my head......but it wouldn't work with out the music

True, but glad to hear that you're following through with this. ^^.

[Yellow Flash]

Yeah I am........How did you like the new song???

[Viper]

cool :) keep up the good work my friend. :D

[Yellow Flash]

cool :) keep up the good work my friend. :D

Thanks.......(no acctually hot......lol)

[KeyBladeMaster100]

your songs are really good Yellow flash

[Yellow Flash]

your songs are really good Yellow flash

Thanks

[Kryptik]

Yeah I am........How did you like the new song???

I loved it and the rest of them!.

[Yellow Flash]

I loved it and the rest of them!.

cool......thanks

[Yellow Flash]

Hey People.....although I haven't been posting here for a while, I have written a new song last night...Here it is:

Without Her...(Tribute to a girl....)

First Verse
I'm feeling like a have nothing to give
I'm feeling like and emtpy shell
The heart has nothing to give when broken
All that's left are scars

Second Verse
What's to Say?
What's to think?
I don't have no more
tears to give....

I'm alone and sad and lost
Without her

Chorus:
Without her: What do I have?
Without her: What do I give?
Without her: WHere is my heart...
Without her, without her

Third Verse:
I don't get no respect
I don't feel any love
I'm feeling to sad
I'm pinning, for lost love

Fourth Verse
Nothing to say
Nothing to think
There are no more
tears to give

It's a lonely world
without her

Chorus

Bridge
I need--I need
To find--To find
Someone--Someone
To ease--To ease
The pain
(Repeat x2)

Chorus:

I need her: To know what I have
I need her: To know what to give
I need her: To find my hear
Without her, without her
(Repeat)

Fade out Chorus

[Kryptik]

Sounds like It'll be one interesting song if you ever get to mp3 format. Nice job though.

[Yellow Flash]

Sounds like It'll be one interesting song if you ever get to mp3 format. Nice job though.

Thanks......I need to start writing the music.....

[KeyBladeMaster100]

sounds good yellow flash

[Yellow Flash]

sounds good yellow flash

Thanks mate

[Kryptik]

Thanks......I need to start writing the music.....

But you've already written so many. Guess you have a lot of inspiration surrounding you.

[mysteryRoxas]

That was beautiful :(

I almost started crying, because I know exactly how you feel

[Yellow Flash]

Thanks Tev....I really need to get music to this one....