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Riku, the darkness
10-31-2008, 01:57 AM
well this is a song that i made a while back...and i forgot about it and then i found it so here


WITHOUT~YOU
V1: When I see you I think it’s a dream
When I think about you its all I
Can do.
I try to stay focus, but its driving
Me crazy
I cant believe that all this is real

Chorus: You’re the one that I want
You’re the one that I need
I never want to be without you
You’re the one that I hold so dearly in my
Arms
And I don’t know what I would do…
Without you

V2: I Don’t think that I’ve ever felt this
Way before
All these feelings are very new to me
And if I screw up, I just need some
Time
Because I don’t know how to be….

Chorus(x2)

V3: You need to tell me that you
Feel the same
You need to tell me that I’m
Doing everything
And the only reason why I’m doing
This….
Is that I never want to be without you

V3: And when you die,
there will be nothing for me.
My life will cease to exist,
And the agony of
Being with out you will be over…

Chorus(x2)

So when you get this, you’ll already know
That…
I…never want to be without……
you

umm here and if you like it Kudos...if you dont.....well critisize it so i can learn ok

Misuzu
10-31-2008, 02:22 AM
Wow, I loved the depth and passion you put into it...Very intriguing and great to read!

Sora's Shadow
10-31-2008, 02:24 AM
O.O

*is speechless*

Riku, the darkness
10-31-2008, 09:31 PM
thanks i put alot of thought into it