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Sora Strife2?
12-12-2008, 07:00 AM
Ok well Fran had got me some ideas and I had my own ideas and now they're all going crazy so I'll write it as it coming. lol Anyways, here it goes:

Place and time: Unknown, at 6:45 PM
"My name is Edward Swiss," he said, " and how I got here?... Might take a while but seeing how it all is... we have plenty of time." He began to ramble on how he was in the army for two years then retired, saying with a sign of relief. As he talked, a teen with a bewildered and scared face listens with some sort of caution. "Now here's the beginning of the end for everyone...."

The tention between the US and Russia finally snaped and the Russians released new biological weapons on the US aiming at the major cities. As retaliation, the US had nuked every major city in Russia and sending forces to Russia. Yet what they didn't know was they had bombed several of there bio-labs realeasing it into the population and I was one of those selected to be shipped to Russia. Yet we never expected what we saw and fought In Russia.

At the time, World War III was now declared and the floor was set for a dominoe effect for the world. As the polititians prepared the speechs, the people hide for fear, and the soldiers began to fight, there were killers on the lose... spreading.

I was in an outpost somewhere south of the remains of Moscow when we first saw them. Yet, we were too focused on holding our position and suppressing fire to take any notice, but we noticed once their firing began to shoot elsewhere. We first were confused on what was happening, but once we noticed that Private Allen was missing, we worried. We had a search squad of three as two other squads provided cover from an enemy that already stopped firing, but we didn't know that they were now dead. Unfortunaly, I was with the search squad and we had began to follow a trail of blood into a dark musty storage unit outside and making matters worse, it was at 9 and misty. Once we walked in... we smelled death in the air, and there was the body... half eaten. We were so shocked and scared, we tried to find our way out before it came out and ran toward us with flesh still hanging out of it's mouth and hands. One shot fired as it's head shattered and was blowen everywhere but it just awakened the beasts hiding in the dark reamains of Moscow.

We ran back and locked any opening in out building we were posted at and told our platton what we saw as we called for a pickup and escorts. No call but the crackling of the radio, but there was something else... somethings circling us in the dark as if a mob. Once I heard their distinct breathing and hissing and I yelled "To you positions!!! Tangos around the perimeter!". Then it came out from the Russian's postion in the building ahead.... but with blood-thirsty friends, and of them running toward us, as more came out....


I'll make more of it so I just wanted to see what they thought of it before I put it somewhere else like Fan-Fiction.

Sora Strife2?
12-13-2008, 09:12 PM
Can Someone delete this thread or something?
And sorry for double posting.

Helix: The True Hero
12-13-2008, 09:47 PM
Why would you want it deleted? Don't you wish to continue your FanFic?

VenFan
12-13-2008, 09:48 PM
You just posted it yesterday. You can't expect for there to be a parade of posts in this thread in a short amount of time.

Oh, and by the way, you're allowed to double-post here, since it's your fanfic.

Sora Strife2?
12-14-2008, 06:14 AM
I know I just made another somewhere else so I just wanted one instead of two.
And really? I didn't know that.