Christmas Eve

[Tidus Shuyin]

I'm sitting lonely at my house
And watching behind my heart
Trying to regain the same smile
I had years ago, full with happiness

Bright shining Christmas Tree
Helps me get up and get
A glimpse onto magical stars
Which may be the answer to my wish

A wish, full of heart
A wish, full of movements
A wish of you, wanting you
Beside me, smiling

Then I realize: How hard it is
After Christmas's illusion
Stars disappear
With my wish, holding it tight..

[Yoyocool]

I like your christmas poem. It's very heart touching and brings up a lot of memories. Though i must admit, memories probably unrelated to what you were going for but i digress.

Your poem is very thought provoking and beautifully worded overall. Though i must admit my mind couldn't wrap around the poem structure you were going for. Or, how good does it really sound coming off the off the tongue. Atm, i'm merely content in reading it and in my mind vocally sounding it out. I bet it would sound really good if i speak your poem out loud but i digress.

Again, i love the poem and i must say good job. 5/5