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sora3333
11-18-2009, 10:23 PM
By Josiah,T kayden The Island part1 chapter1
One time yn the USA the govment in ww2 wand to expanded ther forces so thery did. Some time after ww2 55 years to more exact the USA want to do the same thing but didn’t know where to start then at that same time a sailer was at stnge0island it was not on the map he truned back and markng it down ol his map the sailer tolled the CIA that a new island was found so the USA sent air craft to the island finding out he was telling was tell truth thery sent a crusrser out to explorer it.
Chapter2
The cruser put its ancrer down and sent a helicopters out to land men after that was done a cartographer land marking the side of the island then after going on for about5 miles or more miles theydspoted midevilcasle filled whit men one of our troopers said “what the-“ they rn up to the casle not poitinw at any of them when a airroçhit one of them in the head blood flymng ever where the body droped dead blood in puddle now the guywas now K.I.A. (killed in action) the cartogrper run for his life he got hit whit one in the head t(e map flying in the air one of the men picked it up looking at incomplete map not even half done the mel got behind a bloder when a 4rooper called!in for air sport a helicopter comeing in for a stsike on them ofeof the casle men got a cross bow out it was liku atnmatic mgun it hit the pilots windo the cross bow hit the wido ton of time 20 times relly but0lgoked more than that but any way the pilot got shot down by arrows the men shot down one by one the bloder knly can fit one so he shot down te last cross bower dhe private ran for his life he made it to a clIft then he said chraly 6 do you read me over ye we read yoe good send in air sport am the last one standing over sorry tell me your name rank and serial number mver private David McKay seral 324-965-548 vgr McKay frendy a)r craftçinbound to you charly 6 out the the helicopter was almost ther at the clift cut then airows hit McKay in the chest 3x the helicopter fired back at them!kill$them all OcKay was still alive bone of the men said(Hurry get him!to the helicopter the helicopter takeing off whit McKay in it 2 days later th%UN tolled the USA to pull out so they did so.
Chapter3
UN tolled the USA cruser to pull out they did now the mission was`above top scerit fow on the island the people on found somme strange thingq like gun grands a mar est the king sai` it war rubsh but others said it other wise rome of the people stole it from the king and got a trooper to try some of the stuff out he liked it he even knows how toshot the gun this got the kings men wondering if it was magic that powered it but of cords phllosers wher g%ssing this so the kings men sent trooper up to the casle to see the king the king said why disobey your king he said why not wonder0about the things in life`good point but 7hy because I don’t want to live the same way my whole life I sme we will m`ke more of this and give all forces this new weapons.






plz edit some one i need a edit for this and part to is come if you post