RXS
03-26-2007, 03:04 AM
Chapter One
Struggle in the Woods
Long ago, before the time of Keyblades, there was a terrible war raging between the countless worlds in the X- Universe. The World's all wanted power. The power to control all of the beings in all of the worlds. Some of the worlds controlled powerful Heartless, creatures made from dark hearts who attack relentlessly. Others controlled Nobodies, soul-less creatures who attack on strategy instead of instinct. And other worlds, called the In-Betweens, controlled neither Heartless nor Nobodies. They controlled the FinEls. FinEls were powerful creatures that were made when a Heartless AND a Nobody are made, and they were peaceful creatures. Unless. Unless they witnessed too much violence around them. Attack Sensors inside of their skulls went off, and what happened next, was inevitable.
The war ended when a large group of FinEls gathered with the leaders of their worlds in the Twilight WasteLand. The Nobody worlds and the Heartless worlds fought and fought. Suddenly, a figure appeared above the battlefield. It was covered in Navy Blue armor, and had strange machine in it's hands. None of the people below noticed what happened, because of the fight. Except the FinEls. The Thing above seemed to be chanting something, and the battle below seemed to be growing more violent.
The Nobodies were winning. The Heartless' hearts were flowing in bunches up to the sky. Except, they didn't disappear. They were sucked into the Thing's Machine. The FinEl's Attack Sensors were going crazy because of the senseless fighting. They're sensors went off. They shook they're masters free and ran to the fight. Then, the FinEls formed a tight group in the center of the fight. They performed their most deadly move. Doomsday. The FinEls, the Heartless, and the Nobodies were gone, destroyed in the enormous explosion. Even the world's leaders were gone. The only living things left, were the actual WasteLand, and the Thing. His machine was going crazy. He smiled as he threw it upward.
"KINGDOM HEARTS! COME TO ME!"
But before the machine could perform its job, one last FinEl, the only one whose sensors didn't go off, jumped up at him. The sensors now went off. Doomsday wiped out the machine, before Kingdom Hearts could be summoned.
From the FinEL, seven bright obejects erupted from it after Doomsday. The creature took its last breath and said it's last words.
"The Seven Stars of Elfin"
PRESENT TIME:
Seven teenagers are walking through their high school. Several of them are talking about class and people they liked. Their names are Eden, A.J., Cole, Spencer, Emilie, Jake, and Zoey.
It was after school hours and they were walking through the halls to the other side of the buliding so they could go home. After they were out of the school, they decided to the woods, where they had hung out since they were kids.
After getting there, they Transformed into their true forms.
When they were fourteen, they found our that they were Guardians. The Guardians of X. They couldnt believe it at first, but since then, they had been traveling from world to world, ridding it of it's evil.
The war between the worlds has started again. But so far, no FinEls have shown up. And a greater threat has shown up. The Order of Elfin threatens the life on all the worlds. The Guardians main objective is to destroy the Order of Elfin.
As they stepped into the clearing. They started looking around for their gummi ship. They heard a rustling from the trees behind them and a small girl, around 5’ 2” stepped out. She said she was looking for some one.
“Please tell me as soon as you see him. Its kinda urgent that I find him.”
“ok, will do” Jake said.
Jake and A.J. had been fighting over girls ever since they were little. Recently, they both liked Emilie, but Jake decided not to go after her anymore, but instead go for Zoey. And Zoey seemed to like him back. But as soon as Jake started to show interest in her, A.J. seemed to start hitting on her too. But she never hit back, because her mind, was on Jake.
A figure stepped out from behind a large rock. He introduced himself as Xors and Destiny, the girl, ran up to him and gave him a hug.
“Xors! I finally found you!”
“Destiny!” Jake said, “How could you betray us like that!”
“But I haven’t done anything. Xors is the only family I have!”
“Tornado Torrent!” Jake yelled, and a huge blast of water shot at Xors.
“BAH! Please! FIRAGA!” The Torrent of water evaporate into nothing as the fire spell hit it.
“Let’s go Destiny, we’re leaving.”
“No!”
A strange looking boy jumped out of the woods and launched himself at Xors. Xors, who had lion like heads on his hands, used them to chomp down on one of the boys arms. The boy grimaced in pain.
“No! Leave him alone! WARP RIFT!” And as Jake said this, a small portal of converted time appeared around Xors and he was instantly transmogrified into a different location.
“That hurt a little bit,” The boy said, “my name is Trib. I’m the Guardian of Elementals.”
Everyone’s mouth dropped open in shock. No one knew or though that there were other guardians out there. Trib explained how the heartless had killed his parents. Jake asked him if he wanted to come with them. And he agreed.
“Hey, have you guys heard the legend about the War of the Worlds?” asked Trib.
“You mean the one that’s going on now, in the Universe of Mickey?” asked Zoey
“No, the one that went on, hundreds of years ago in Universe-X,” said Trib.
“No, but could you please tell us?!” Emilie insisted.
While Emilie and Zoey were asking him all these questions, Jake noticed that Cole, Spencer, and Eden were being very quite. He looked around, and realized that they weren’t there anymore. He decided to look for them later, he wanted to hear the legend.
“Well, the says that ‘
Long ago, before the time of Keyblades, there was a terrible war raging between the countless worlds in the X- Universe. The World's all wanted power. The power to control all of the beings in all of the worlds. Some of the worlds controlled powerful Heartless, creatures made from dark hearts who attack relentlessly. Others controlled Nobodies, soul-less creatures who attack on strategy instead of instinct. And other worlds, called the In-Betweens, controlled neither Heartless nor Nobodies. They controlled the FinEls. FinEls were powerful creatures that were made when a Heartless AND a Nobody are made, and they were peaceful creatures. Unless. Unless they witnessed too much violence around them. Attack Sensors inside of their skulls went off, and what happened next, was inevitable.
The war ended when a large group of FinEls gathered with the leaders of their worlds in the Twilight WasteLand. The Nobody worlds and the Heartless worlds fought and fought. Suddenly, a figure appeared above the battlefield. It was covered in Navy Blue armor, and had strange machine in it's hands. None of the people below noticed what happened, because of the fight. Except the FinEls. The Thing above seemed to be chanting something, and the battle below seemed to be growing more violent.
The Nobodies were winning. The Heartless' hearts were flowing in bunches up to the sky. Except, they didn't disappear. They were sucked into the Thing's Machine. The FinEl's Attack Sensors were going crazy because of the senseless fighting. They're sensors went off. They shook they're masters free and ran to the fight. Then, the FinEls formed a tight group in the center of the fight. They performed their most deadly move. Doomsday. The FinEls, the Heartless, and the Nobodies were gone, destroyed in the enormous explosion. Even the world's leaders were gone. The only living things left, were the actual WasteLand, and the Thing. His machine was going crazy. He smiled as he threw it upward.
"KINGDOM HEARTS! COME TO ME!"
But before the machine could perform its job, one last FinEl, the only one whose sensors didn't go off, jumped up at him. The sensors now went off. Doomsday wiped out the machine, before Kingdom Hearts could be summoned.
From the FinEL, seven bright obejects erupted from it after Doomsday. The creature took its last breath and said it's last words.
"The Seven Stars of Elfin" ‘
“What are the Seven Stars if Elfin, they have the same name as the Order of Elfin.” A.J. asked.
“That’s because Elfin, is actually El Fin. Which means The End. And that’s were the FinEls name comes from. El and Fin. The Seven Stars of Elfin are seven multi-colored stars that each have they’re own powers. If all of them are brought together, whoever controls them, is granted one wish. Any one, irreversible, Rule-Free wish. If no one wishes on them within 30 seconds of them being there, they automatically self destruct, destroying everything within a 100 light year radius. That’s how strong these things are. The Order of Elfin was created by 7 of the most powerful FinEls ever to try and find the stars, and wish themselves the rulers of all of the universes and worlds. The stars themselves are each hidden within a certain FinEl hidden in the core of several worlds in the X-Universe.”
“Woah! “ Said Jake, “I think I know our next destination, we need to find a way to get into the X-Universe and stop the Order before they find the Stars.”
“I agree, and on the way, we can try to find the heartless who killed my parents. Right?”
“Definitely!” Said Jake, “Come on guys, lets go!”
They all boarded they’re gummi ship and relaxed a little bit as it blasted off. They had no idea of the struggles they were about to face when they finally reached the X-Universe!
Chapter Two
Finding the Portal
TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK
theres more to come, as soon as i write it!
Struggle in the Woods
Long ago, before the time of Keyblades, there was a terrible war raging between the countless worlds in the X- Universe. The World's all wanted power. The power to control all of the beings in all of the worlds. Some of the worlds controlled powerful Heartless, creatures made from dark hearts who attack relentlessly. Others controlled Nobodies, soul-less creatures who attack on strategy instead of instinct. And other worlds, called the In-Betweens, controlled neither Heartless nor Nobodies. They controlled the FinEls. FinEls were powerful creatures that were made when a Heartless AND a Nobody are made, and they were peaceful creatures. Unless. Unless they witnessed too much violence around them. Attack Sensors inside of their skulls went off, and what happened next, was inevitable.
The war ended when a large group of FinEls gathered with the leaders of their worlds in the Twilight WasteLand. The Nobody worlds and the Heartless worlds fought and fought. Suddenly, a figure appeared above the battlefield. It was covered in Navy Blue armor, and had strange machine in it's hands. None of the people below noticed what happened, because of the fight. Except the FinEls. The Thing above seemed to be chanting something, and the battle below seemed to be growing more violent.
The Nobodies were winning. The Heartless' hearts were flowing in bunches up to the sky. Except, they didn't disappear. They were sucked into the Thing's Machine. The FinEl's Attack Sensors were going crazy because of the senseless fighting. They're sensors went off. They shook they're masters free and ran to the fight. Then, the FinEls formed a tight group in the center of the fight. They performed their most deadly move. Doomsday. The FinEls, the Heartless, and the Nobodies were gone, destroyed in the enormous explosion. Even the world's leaders were gone. The only living things left, were the actual WasteLand, and the Thing. His machine was going crazy. He smiled as he threw it upward.
"KINGDOM HEARTS! COME TO ME!"
But before the machine could perform its job, one last FinEl, the only one whose sensors didn't go off, jumped up at him. The sensors now went off. Doomsday wiped out the machine, before Kingdom Hearts could be summoned.
From the FinEL, seven bright obejects erupted from it after Doomsday. The creature took its last breath and said it's last words.
"The Seven Stars of Elfin"
PRESENT TIME:
Seven teenagers are walking through their high school. Several of them are talking about class and people they liked. Their names are Eden, A.J., Cole, Spencer, Emilie, Jake, and Zoey.
It was after school hours and they were walking through the halls to the other side of the buliding so they could go home. After they were out of the school, they decided to the woods, where they had hung out since they were kids.
After getting there, they Transformed into their true forms.
When they were fourteen, they found our that they were Guardians. The Guardians of X. They couldnt believe it at first, but since then, they had been traveling from world to world, ridding it of it's evil.
The war between the worlds has started again. But so far, no FinEls have shown up. And a greater threat has shown up. The Order of Elfin threatens the life on all the worlds. The Guardians main objective is to destroy the Order of Elfin.
As they stepped into the clearing. They started looking around for their gummi ship. They heard a rustling from the trees behind them and a small girl, around 5’ 2” stepped out. She said she was looking for some one.
“Please tell me as soon as you see him. Its kinda urgent that I find him.”
“ok, will do” Jake said.
Jake and A.J. had been fighting over girls ever since they were little. Recently, they both liked Emilie, but Jake decided not to go after her anymore, but instead go for Zoey. And Zoey seemed to like him back. But as soon as Jake started to show interest in her, A.J. seemed to start hitting on her too. But she never hit back, because her mind, was on Jake.
A figure stepped out from behind a large rock. He introduced himself as Xors and Destiny, the girl, ran up to him and gave him a hug.
“Xors! I finally found you!”
“Destiny!” Jake said, “How could you betray us like that!”
“But I haven’t done anything. Xors is the only family I have!”
“Tornado Torrent!” Jake yelled, and a huge blast of water shot at Xors.
“BAH! Please! FIRAGA!” The Torrent of water evaporate into nothing as the fire spell hit it.
“Let’s go Destiny, we’re leaving.”
“No!”
A strange looking boy jumped out of the woods and launched himself at Xors. Xors, who had lion like heads on his hands, used them to chomp down on one of the boys arms. The boy grimaced in pain.
“No! Leave him alone! WARP RIFT!” And as Jake said this, a small portal of converted time appeared around Xors and he was instantly transmogrified into a different location.
“That hurt a little bit,” The boy said, “my name is Trib. I’m the Guardian of Elementals.”
Everyone’s mouth dropped open in shock. No one knew or though that there were other guardians out there. Trib explained how the heartless had killed his parents. Jake asked him if he wanted to come with them. And he agreed.
“Hey, have you guys heard the legend about the War of the Worlds?” asked Trib.
“You mean the one that’s going on now, in the Universe of Mickey?” asked Zoey
“No, the one that went on, hundreds of years ago in Universe-X,” said Trib.
“No, but could you please tell us?!” Emilie insisted.
While Emilie and Zoey were asking him all these questions, Jake noticed that Cole, Spencer, and Eden were being very quite. He looked around, and realized that they weren’t there anymore. He decided to look for them later, he wanted to hear the legend.
“Well, the says that ‘
Long ago, before the time of Keyblades, there was a terrible war raging between the countless worlds in the X- Universe. The World's all wanted power. The power to control all of the beings in all of the worlds. Some of the worlds controlled powerful Heartless, creatures made from dark hearts who attack relentlessly. Others controlled Nobodies, soul-less creatures who attack on strategy instead of instinct. And other worlds, called the In-Betweens, controlled neither Heartless nor Nobodies. They controlled the FinEls. FinEls were powerful creatures that were made when a Heartless AND a Nobody are made, and they were peaceful creatures. Unless. Unless they witnessed too much violence around them. Attack Sensors inside of their skulls went off, and what happened next, was inevitable.
The war ended when a large group of FinEls gathered with the leaders of their worlds in the Twilight WasteLand. The Nobody worlds and the Heartless worlds fought and fought. Suddenly, a figure appeared above the battlefield. It was covered in Navy Blue armor, and had strange machine in it's hands. None of the people below noticed what happened, because of the fight. Except the FinEls. The Thing above seemed to be chanting something, and the battle below seemed to be growing more violent.
The Nobodies were winning. The Heartless' hearts were flowing in bunches up to the sky. Except, they didn't disappear. They were sucked into the Thing's Machine. The FinEl's Attack Sensors were going crazy because of the senseless fighting. They're sensors went off. They shook they're masters free and ran to the fight. Then, the FinEls formed a tight group in the center of the fight. They performed their most deadly move. Doomsday. The FinEls, the Heartless, and the Nobodies were gone, destroyed in the enormous explosion. Even the world's leaders were gone. The only living things left, were the actual WasteLand, and the Thing. His machine was going crazy. He smiled as he threw it upward.
"KINGDOM HEARTS! COME TO ME!"
But before the machine could perform its job, one last FinEl, the only one whose sensors didn't go off, jumped up at him. The sensors now went off. Doomsday wiped out the machine, before Kingdom Hearts could be summoned.
From the FinEL, seven bright obejects erupted from it after Doomsday. The creature took its last breath and said it's last words.
"The Seven Stars of Elfin" ‘
“What are the Seven Stars if Elfin, they have the same name as the Order of Elfin.” A.J. asked.
“That’s because Elfin, is actually El Fin. Which means The End. And that’s were the FinEls name comes from. El and Fin. The Seven Stars of Elfin are seven multi-colored stars that each have they’re own powers. If all of them are brought together, whoever controls them, is granted one wish. Any one, irreversible, Rule-Free wish. If no one wishes on them within 30 seconds of them being there, they automatically self destruct, destroying everything within a 100 light year radius. That’s how strong these things are. The Order of Elfin was created by 7 of the most powerful FinEls ever to try and find the stars, and wish themselves the rulers of all of the universes and worlds. The stars themselves are each hidden within a certain FinEl hidden in the core of several worlds in the X-Universe.”
“Woah! “ Said Jake, “I think I know our next destination, we need to find a way to get into the X-Universe and stop the Order before they find the Stars.”
“I agree, and on the way, we can try to find the heartless who killed my parents. Right?”
“Definitely!” Said Jake, “Come on guys, lets go!”
They all boarded they’re gummi ship and relaxed a little bit as it blasted off. They had no idea of the struggles they were about to face when they finally reached the X-Universe!
Chapter Two
Finding the Portal
TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK
theres more to come, as soon as i write it!