Fighting Thread for Asphorune's School

[Asphorune]

Okay. Here's where the fighting classes will take place.

[Leon]

You don't mean fighting as in spamming do you?

[Aros-figure it out]

Aaron-Okay Ill try first.

Kesh- Walks into a room were he meets a big bulky guy with a battle axe. Being Nerves he feels the sweat runing off his face. He readies his dirk, stationed himself to strike.

Aaron-Now I am lost. What do I do without his reaction in it? Also I have to go soon.

[Asphorune]

No. I mean constructive roleplay fights. Not a bad post. Allow me to chop it up a bit...



~ Kesh darted into the room, his feet pounding against the cold dirt floor. The room was lit by an oval opening in the ceiling which allowed the sunlight to enter. His gaze fell upon a broad shadow and he followed it to the source. A giant of a man with broad shoulders and barrel-chest. He was awesome.

His heart fluttered in anticipation and fear. Nervous beads of sweat traversed his brow and he felt a lump grow in his throat. But these reserved feelings passed as the adrenaline pumped through his veins. He began to feel cocky.

A smile spread across his face as he reached to his left side, right above the buttocks. It came out in a flash and a glint of light. He held it coyly in his hand, poised to strike with rapid sucession. But he did not attack. He held himself ready for the incoming fight.~

Now, to understand, the first poster always has control of the setting. The second has the right to start the fight. If they don't on their post, the third post which belongs to the original poster does.

As well usually the first posts involve a detailed description of one's character. Or it has some details in it and the rest come through the roleplay.

I know you're not ready to attempt something like that, but as you can see, you can expand phenominally.

[Tyas]

K! im here!
nice example.

[Asphorune]

Huzzah! Another student. Alright, refresh my memory so far as your name goes.

[Tyas]

The names Angela.
Hey umm for the RPG thingy do I have to make a character? or is what I wrote earlier it lol!

[Velosir]

Out of curiosity, Should we jump right in or will it be a more structured course?

[Tyas]

I would like to know the answer to that as well

[Velosir]

While we're on the subject of questions, will we be doing different types of fighting styles?
(IE: Close Quarters, Hand-to-Hand, Ranged, Magical, Mixed)

[Kize]

k, the sight was having technical difficulties, I'm here, a fighter!

[ShikaX]

hmmmmmmm I can think of things right away but anyways I'm here!

[Velosir]

I hope we don't overrun our 'Mentor' with all the threads that have been created. If any help is needed though I don't mind lending a hand.:D

[Tyas]

Yeah, I wonder if he will be able to get to us.lol!:rolleyes: :D

[Asphorune]

... -Sigh- How I wish Edmund was here... Or Devin! Even that old crankard Thorn, by God, I miss. Oh well, all in the past. Well... Lets seee... what next...


Yes. I will eventually break down different fighting styles. Jump in now. I need to see how advanced some of you are. So lets assume this... Instead of parring you against each other right off..

~With a coy wave of his hand the room was filled with an eerie chill. Out of the sprawling shadows cast astrew by the sunlight several heartless of moderate size and portion appeared. They bore various weaponry and many were armored in what was similar to leathers. Few wore dark breast plates and ornate armors but all the same they were there. The weapons varied terribly from simple blow-guns to mammoth scythes and sickle-ending kusari- gama.~

Alright. You're all being issued a simple character for your use. You may write your IC-selves as you want but if I don't think them proper for this evaulation [ Meaning you rely too heavily on over-powering and not on personal skill ] I will ask you to change. Now please start. Just a few posts, thats all I ask.

[Velosir]

Once again, while I am enrolled to learn, I have RP'd many times before with others, if you wish for a helping hand, I'll be glad to lend one. (I'm taking the classes to explore different nuances of the subject in general.)

One note I must throw out though, I'll help as much as I can when I'm logged on. I do not know though WHEN I'll be logged on.

[Asphorune]

I'd be very appreciative if you would. I should contact some of the Moderators. Maybe make this official.

[Velosir]

(One can only hope ;))
IC:No keyblade in his possession Velosir withdrew the two swords he had on him. The creatures descended upon him, overestimating their chances with no keyblade in sight. Left, Right, Above, three strikes Vel made to the crowd. A soldier, Two Shadows, and a Rhapsody lie disappearing. They are taken aback by the sudden movements, Vel takes the opportunity to charge forward, hoping the momentum he started the battle with will last its entirety.

OOC:I'm going to need some help, feel free to jump in whenever fellow students...

[Asphorune]

Very good so far. You've got definition, thats for sure, but description lacks. Lets see what else folks can do... If they've not left because of their short attention spans...

[ShikaX]

Maroque slowly woke up and saw thathe was surounded by different veriaties of heartless. "Here we go again!" He exclaimed as hislong silver katana appeared in his small hand.

Maroque began fighting, dancing with power and sought outthe biggest heartless. "so your their leader huh?" he said then jumpedup and began spinning sidewaysand his sword hit the enemy three time on the head.

The enemy then strongly punched Maroque and he skiddered along the floor. He got backup his skin scraped a little but didn't worry about that.

Maroque jumped up and stabbed his katana strait into the enemy's head and then enemy dissolved in darkness and apink heartfloated up.




Ok....that was the bestI could do, is it any good?

[Asphorune]

Yes, I can see that you tried hard. It's very good for a first real attempt. You have to work on the Grammar some and like Alex your description but it will come in time, trust me. Lets see if anyone else is still alive...

[Velosir]

I applaud you for your effort! Something that I have seen help other players that have 'Grammatical Issues,' if you pull up your computer's writing program (Word etc.), and copy and past your post into the program, you will be able to avoid the more glaring errors that happen normally. I try and do this on a regular basis (I forget often though), it does help with how you are viewed by others when you post a 'Flawless' section.

[ShikaX]

well my spacebar button is kinda messing up >.< so that dosn't help much.

[Asphorune]

Heh. That sparks a memory. My own tutor Edmund Gordon once had to spend three months roleplaying without spaces. He still rocked.

[ShikaX]

It's just sooo anoying though

[Darkness Falls]

I'd like to join this thread. If I may here is a bio on my character. I made it right now so its still a bit rusty...

Some time ago in the world of Arios their lived a boy, Jake and his sister. His mother had passed away. His dad was a scientist that studied the local wolves and searched for the mystical pheonix. He had bonded with the wolves and fead them so his dad could observe them from closer.The day of the Abyss as it was called was the day calamity struck. The evil in the world had grown it outbalanced the good. The Pheonix appeared brewing up tornadoes stirring the ground from its eternal slumber. Jake's dad had fallen down a hole made by an earthquake his sister raptured by bandits. Now Jake was only 10 when this happened so he took it hard. The wolves nursed Jake teaching him how to fight hunt and live on his own. Now Jake was 20 and the wolves set him free because they knew his sister was lost and he had to find her. He only has a vague memory of her and his locket with a family picture. He searched in town for her."Excuse me sir, have you seen this lady"Jake said showing him the locket. "No, sorry"said the man. He kept asking all over the town, the townspeople had all similar answers. Dissapointed he wandered the desert in search for another town. The desert's extreme heat slowed him down to the point he couldnt walk. A man neared him. "This must be a mirrage" said Jake hallucinating. "No, Jake rise , you are about to embark on a journey far away from this world. Your sister is being held captive now go my friend and may the gods bless you." he said. He was falling down deeper and deeper never touching the ground. A mysterious voice echoed in his mind. "Did you feel it too?, the breath of the pheonix"the voice said. A gunblade as red as the pheonix itself. It was inscribed Golden eye. He grabbed admiring its beauty."Amazing" whispered Jake. "Did you here it?, the howl of wolf.."repeated the voice. Another gunblade appeared silver like the coat of the wolves that brought him up. It was inscribed Silver Fang. Jake was marveled."Now"said the voice. "You shall no longer be called Jake, you shall wander the worlds with the surname Lone Wolf. Go friend, the wolves and the Pheonix itself has blessed you.

[Asphorune]

Yes, it can be. But all the same very good try, my friend! And yes, it's fine, thank you but you don't need it right now. In the future you can use it. But as of the moment simply use a human character, nothing special, simply a uniform weapon [ NO KEYBLADE] and fight the few heartless in the room with the others. Just show me what you can do.

[Darkness Falls]

ooc//Great, thanks.:D
BIC//Could you give a brief description of the scene?

[Velosir]

~With a coy wave of his hand the room was filled with an eerie chill. Out of the sprawling shadows cast astrew by the sunlight several heartless of moderate size and portion appeared. They bore various weaponry and many were armored in what was similar to leathers. Few wore dark breast plates and ornate armors but all the same they were there. The weapons varied terribly from simple blow-guns to mammoth scythes and sickle-ending kusari- gama.~

Alright. You're all being issued a simple character for your use. You may write your IC-selves as you want but if I don't think them proper for this evaulation [ Meaning you rely too heavily on over-powering and not on personal skill ] I will ask you to change. Now please start. Just a few posts, thats all I ask.

Here you go, try not to show off for the crowd too much...

[Tyas]

Alright Im going to make a character for this even if I dont have to, cause Im a bit confused.
name: Thias
Gender: female
Age :17
Outfit: white T-shirt riped up blue jeans tennie shoes
Hair: brown long in layers put up with her bangs showing
Eyes:green
weapon: large sword( duh! lol)
skin color: light but not pale(also duh lol)
This is probably not nessesery so whatever I didnt know. I'll put in my fight in, in a sec.

[Velosir]

For simplification, describe how your character would fight heatless with a weapon that is BEFORE they get their keyblade...

[ShikaX]

hey dude you should post a help section for evil rping, ALOT of people need some help on it. If you do I would love to help.

Now if only there was a new scene...

[kingdomkeys]

Erin raced into a dark room filled with stange creatures, know as heartless. She unsheath her two inch sword the a ray of light hit the upturned part of her blade, shineing up makeing a glare across her face. Her light hazel eyes watching everything around her not letting any if the creatures get behind her. She twisted the dark crinsom blade in her hands letting it fall down around her waist. Erin stun rapidly holding out her blade slicing though countless numbers of the heartless. When her spining seised there were very few of the heartless left, but there was an erie silence that cut straight through her. She moved quickly through the reamaining heartless cuting down the ones that steped into her path. Something huge was coming she could feel it draning her energy calling her to face it. But she new better that to face a enemy that was fatal and foolish to go after. She left the dark room passing statues that seemed to follow her every move.


OOC:: Sorry it's kinda short and I know I misspelled some of the words but It's late and I have to hit the hay,,LoL Night,, Tell me what you think and I'll read them tomarrow

[Velosir]

(The Following Is Directed To Those That Have already Posted Their Battle Scene, If you have yet to post yours ignore this, POST, then come back and read it)

While waiting for others to join and help progress to the next scene, try and imagine settings that you mights see in the future.

How would you react to a seige scene? Arrows raining down at intervals with foes climbing ladders up to meet you...

Or, being ambushed in a forest, their brawlers rushing you while archers snipe from the trees...

Try and come up with strategies that will help for future encouters...

[Asphorune]

Thanks, Vel. I'm really tired... lol. Yeah, Erin, that was brilliant. I couldn't of done better myself. -Grins wryly at her.-

[ShikaX]

....hey I'm just wondering, this isn't a real fight scene but I think itwouldbest be put in this section.

Xors saw a young boy in a darkalley. He walked up to the boy acting friendly, then the boy walked up to him. Lion's Death appeared on his hands and he pushed the boy up against a wall with the teeth from Lion's Death sinking into his shoulders. Then his cloack started flipping and a spirit Lion head appeared out of chest and went into the kids chest visiously ripping outthekids soul and swallowing it.Then the head went back in and the kid lay on the ground expressionless.
___________

that was just something from another rp,I know it could be better.

[kingdomkeys]

Thanks, Vel. I'm really tired... lol. Yeah, Erin, that was brilliant. I couldn't of done better myself. -Grins wryly at her.-

You thought it was good?? It was just something I threw together,, Lol:D

[Asphorune]

Yes, it's good. I've seen much worse in my time. Even in a catatonically[?] tired state I can see you've got talent... -Begins to doze off.-

[ShikaX]

dude.....try to get some sleep.

[Velosir]

To Play Devil's Advocate:
Your spelling and grammar DO need fixing, there were many times where I was forced to reread a line to understand what it actually meant.

Even so, behind the errors I agree with Asphorune in that you have talent. (I suggest you all sleep well before posting in the forums and this will likely fix itself.)

[Asphorune]

I normally try not too but in this case I think I will follow your advice. Good night. See you all on the morrow, hopefully.

[ShikaX]

Yeah I'm gonna continue reading Peter and the Starcatchers see ya tommorow

[Velosir]

Well it's tommorow... So we going to make it a daily event basis?

[soraandrikuking12]

can i join?

[Velosir]

There is little exclusitivity here, feel free to join!

[Asphorune]

Yep-yep. Just show us what you can do. Just your best. Theres a room filled with heartless. Just thrash a few.

[kingdomkeys]

What do we do after the heartless thing?????