WANTED: Review Writers

[Alex]

KingdomHearts3.net is looking for those who can review atleast one of the Kingdom Hearts games to a high level of detail and professionalism.

This is a voluntary position and will be open for at most 3 people, depending on said persons capabilities.

What you need:

- Some experience of writing reviews.
- An example of your work. At least 500 words. This can be saved as an attachment in a .txt file.
- A description of why you want to write for KH3.
- Genuine interest in websites and Kingdom Hearts.
- The ability to produce a literate and well-worded review of atleast 500 words.

If you meet the above criteria, you may reply to this post detailing how you meet our terms. We will then decide if you have the job or not. Plagiarism is NOT acceptable.

[Riku]

I wrote a massive review for Gamespot at one point, but it got deleted because I stupidly pressed backspace when not in a text box. I've played both games to the full but I don't really have any "experience", so up to you if you want me to.

- The ability to produce a literate and well-worded review of atleast 500 words.

What an incredibly hypocritical sentence lol (it's 'at least')

[Phoenix]

Not meany people back talk to there boss....so I would give you the job:D

[Riku]

Not meany people back talk to there boss....so I would give you the job:D

:cool: ;) lol

[Darth_syphonix]

im prety much in same boat as Riku in that i have little exp. (he he) in writing reviews but i am in the process of wrting a small book and i am an exelent writer. if you dont care for either of us maby beetween the two of us we could count as 2 people andreview the game. i have played through both games ( though not 100% on the second one). I have little proof right now but i will try to show you some as soon as possible. like i said completely up to you but i would still like to try to do it.

[Alex]

Anyone is free to submit an article for review :). Riku, don't even go there with grammar/spelling/punctuation, I can be mean when I get going :D

Wont mention anything about compound structure!

Kidding :)

X

[Riku]

lol Ok, I'll see what I can do :) Might write one if I have the time.

[Darth_syphonix]

i cant have you outdoing me so ill write a review on a game. tell me the paticulars alex on what owrd limit or min you want and ill see what i can do. finals are up in the next week for me tho so you will have to wait a little bit.

[Saix]

I wish I could do some reviwing but...I got my hands tied with girls and school and all sorts of things. Darn if only I had the time. But whence upon that time coming I will be able to do all that I possibly can if anyone needs it.

[Snags]

Hmm, depending on how many spots have been filled I could temporarily work on this. I say this because I do have GCSEs scattered around for the next 5 months or so.

Edit: I'll submit something tomorrow. As I said, I'll wait to see.

[Scruffy]

I wrote a few reviews on games
But they got deleted for no reason
I have no experience but I can write pretty well and am enthusiastic.
I am also willing to write reviews.
PS is this job still available?
Thanks
~Scruffy

[Axizol]

I'm writing a walkthrough of the whole game, is that what you're talking about?

it might take some time though

[Riku]

A review including what the game's basically about and opinions on the good and bad aspects. That sort of thing I'm guessing, but definitely not a walkthrough.

[Axizol]

oh well...i 'm still doing a walkthrough

[Xykru]

If the job is still available, I could try for it. In any of the games, I have gone through every little thing possable. I have written a few reviews in the past. Most on square enix games too, lol. As for a sample of them... That I will have to write later...

[Axel_Fire_Wheel]

here's a story i wrote: http://www.rpgfan.com/fanfics/kh/darkness1.html

[sam_robinson]

i have been a fan of kingdom hearts since it came out im also very good in english! iive have completed both the games so its up to you to decide!:)

[Clouds Buster]

I am interested. I would be more servicable reviewing KHII, honestly... Kingdom Hearts 1 seems ages ago... I can provide you with a sample of my writing. It is, regrettably, not in "game review" format though. But, this is certainly within my boundaries and sounds fun. Just let me know.

[Alex]

here's a story i wrote: http://www.rpgfan.com/fanfics/kh/darkness1.html

That's pretty good. If you're interested, please PM me a review of KH1 and I will review that :)

Thanks

[Biggest Fan]

Is This Position Open?
If It Is Please Write Back.

[DragoonKain]

You might be better off emailing Alex for now.

[kaderstrout342]

I do because i can write and I write stuff that people like a lot. And i am capable of writing 1500 instead of 500

[sora in the dark]

I do because i can write and I write stuff that people like a lot. And i am capable of writing 1500 instead of 500

so to make a new thread you have to tyep atleast 500 words into the thread/very first post of the thread

[Tidus]

The least you can have is 10 charactars.

[Riku]

We're not talking about threads, we're talking about reviews.

The review is supposed to be emailed or PMed to Alex and must be at least 500 words, so you don't have to post it.

[skidderz]

tell me what game you want a review on and i will see what i can do for ya

-skidd

[Axel_Fire_Wheel]

after all this time alex only complemented me? wow

[Riku]

After all this time, Alex has still not been online.

[Soul Of Destiny]

I do because i can write and I write stuff that people like a lot. And i am capable of writing 1500 instead of 500

People who suck up or try to brown nose the mods have no point here. Just so ya' know.

[Riku]

Proving it would be the better option lol.

[Soul Of Destiny]

My point exactly 'Mod Master'. That sounds like you own an army of robots.

[DragoonKain]

My point exactly 'Mod Master'. That sounds like you own an army of robots.

My... my god... THAT was his plan all along! How could I be so blind!??

[Aerith]

*Aerith quietly slips the Aliens back into her pocket hoping he doesn't notice*

[Helix: The True Hero]

*Aerith quietly slips the Aliens back into her pocket hoping he doesn't notice*

Hah!
I saw that...
*Helix keeps a close, yet quiet watch over Aerith.*

[Orginization XIV]

Did someone say review I could just send me whatever I will review it.:)

[Riku]

Alex is looking for a 500 word review of Kingdom Hearts.

[skidderz]

here's a story i wrote: http://www.rpgfan.com/fanfics/kh/darkness1.html

ok i know this totally off topic but nice story dude!!

-skidd

[Soul Of Destiny]

Yes! Riku has put mind-controlling letters in each of his post's, the more you read them, the more you become one. Kain, I think you should make an army of your own to battle his. :P

[Axizol]

i might write a review, even though i'm not good with words, i'll try

[pinoy_balla101]

i dont have experience but i am very knolagable when it comes to kingdom hearts

[Riku-Sora]

Yall are really not helping out saying "I might write a review" or "I have wrote articles before." Not really helping the staff, members, or forum anyway.

[Axel_Fire_Wheel]

So i'm the only one that has a chance? sweet! By the way, i gave Alex the review, so it's just a matter of time

[soraandrikuking12]

hey can i submit something and what does it have to be on?!

[Time]

Question, the writing sample, what does it have to be about? I have plenty of writing that's over 500 words, but I'm not sure if it is what you want.

[Darkwatch]

Well, Time, the review has to be over 500 words.

It has to be a review. He wants that to show how well you can write a review. lol

[final fantasy 12]

i just got done writing in the dstp i think i need a weeks break

[Riku]

It has to preferably be a 500 word review on Kingdom Hearts. If you have other examples, feel free to submit them for consideration on whether you'd be a good review writer. Bear in mind that you'll need to dedicate some time to doing this if you apply.

[Xehan]

And for what reason is this for again? If it's good, I may write a review.

[Axel_Fire_Wheel]

can I just pm one of the mods the review I gave alex so that I can have the job?

[TigerEyes]

Some experience of writing reviews.
- An example of your work. At least 500 words. This can be saved as an attachment in a .txt file.
- A description of why you want to write for KH3.
- Genuine interest in websites and Kingdom Hearts.
- The ability to produce a literate and well-worded review of atleast 500 words.


I am a writer of sorts, and find it an amazing way to spend my free time. I've written a lot of things, reviews are included among the piles of papers floating around my desk.

I love video games and Disney, when Kingdom Hearts was released it seemed to good to be true. I played the game and beat it with little sleep. I was captured by the adventure of Kingdom Hearts, and of course the integration of my beloved Disney Characters didn't turn me off. Playing alongside Aladin was great, so was playing with Cloud, Tidus, and all the other classic FF characters. But a far greater thrill was that I was playing with both my favorite Disney characters and Final Fantasy characters in the same lavishly detailed adventure. I am a moderaor on multiple boards across the internet, mostly dealing with gaming, and have experience in dealing with websites to a minor degree. Writing is always something I've done for fun and for others when it is called for, this seems like a great opportunity to have some fun doing what I love... just writing.

Well, I hope I can write a literate review, and whether it is well worded will be your desicion I suppose. But, I attached it. It wasn't clear what you were looking for, at least to me, so I did my best to try and shoot for the moon, let's hope I land in the stars.

[Riku-Sora]

This is the best I heard from all the other, not to be rude to other members, worthless post I have read on this thread.

Finally someone with an example. Cant wait for this to draw the attention of Riku and Kain.

I would like to read more of your work and hope you stay active here. Hope you enjoy the place.

[Kaito]

First off Tiger's that was a very good review..

Now for mine.
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I like writing assignments and the normal stuff for school, but when it comes to writing for fun I love it.. A few reasons.. When I write something I can picture it in my head when I sleep, and if it has to deal with Kingdom Hearts then I would love it.

I would like to write for Kh3 because it'd be a challenge I'd be looking for.. Writing let's me express myself the best I as a human-being can.

I find Kingdom Hearts intresting.. Simply because it has to do with faith..When you know something is going to happen and you put your absolute biggest attempt at it.. Even if you don't succeed your heart is still stronger than it ever was..

I don't have any experience of writing reviews, but I can gurantee I'll put my absolute best into it..

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Kingdom Hearts 2 Villains

Kingdom Hearts 2 has a good number of villains, be it from Disney movies like “The Lion King”, or how about villains from another game? Square-Enix and Disney put their heads together to make a wide selection of villains. Pete for instance from “Steamboat Willie” that aired in 1928 was put into play and played a big role in this game as a villain but later along with Maleficent from “Sleeping Beauty” feels regret to the heartless and decide to take on hundreds of them.

Oogie Boogie from the popular “The Nightmare before Christmas” was put into both Kingdom Hearts 1 and 2 and he played a big role; while Shan Yu from “Mulan” played a little role. It may be that Square-Enix puts the role of the villain on how well the movie sold, or how popular it was. It may just be the plot. Kingdom Hearts 2 also creates a few villains for the game. Like Organization XIII, a group of nobodies who’s goal is to find the mysteries that lie within the heart and use the power of Kingdom Hearts to become complete humans. They feel no guilt for their actions. While most members mask their true nature by pretending to have emotions, deceiving both themselves and the ones they meet. Their leader Xemnas who is the nobody of Xehanort is the main villain, but he also play in Kingdom Hearts 1 Final Mix as an extra boss battle. Xigbar the “Freeshooter” is Organization member II. You meet him early in the game in Hollow Bastion where he taunts Sora. Then he transforms a Dragon in Land of Dragons a world based on “Mulan” into a heartless. You later beat him in The World That Never Was.

Ursula, a cecaelia sea witch who played in “The Little Mermaid” has been in both Kingdom Hearts 1 and 2. Although in Kingdom Hearts 2 they put a different plot into this story. Instead of fighting Ursula you battle her with a different weapon, rhythm. Jafar from the Disney film “Aladdin” comes back as a Genie. Being let out of his lamp by a street merchant he threatens Agrabah and later gets put back into his lamp.
Sephiroth from a popular video game called “Final Fantasy VII” plays in both video games at Cloud’s enemy and rival. Scar who stared in “The Lion King” made his first entry into Kingdom Hearts 2 as a tyrant king. Later on in the game after Simba killed him Scar’s ghost haunts the Pride Lands. Simba realizes he has too show his courage and scares the ghosts away.

Hades who is the Greek god of the underworld stared in “Hercules” plays in both Kingdom Hearts 1 and 2, tricks Sora in unlocking the lock that Zeus put on the Underdrome, and holds his own games. Hector Barbossa, Captain of the Black Pearl. Played in the movie “Pirates of the Caribbean” hunts down all of the cursed Aztec gold they stole. He partners up with Pete to try and kill Sora and his friends. Captain Barbossa also calls on a Gecko like heartless called The Illuminator.

Square-Enix and Disney blended their villains perfectly together as the game showed it. While some people call fighting just “Button mashing” others like to think of the story that’s behind the battle. The Villains played a big roll in Kingdom Hearts 2 simply because if there were no villains the game would not exist. The villains are the base in which this game rotates. Making it a goal for you to knock him down or stop him from doing that. Square-Enix and Disney deserve a pat on the back for this stunning plot line of villains.


Kota

[Alex]

Thanks TigerEyes and Kota; both really interesting articles, and both have been added to the site at:

http://www.kingdomhearts3.net/kingdom-hearts/review/ (Review) http://www.kingdomhearts3.net/kingdom-hearts-2/villains/ (Villains)

Thanks very much guys -- if you'd like to write more, just PM me and we can discuss either setting up a user account, or how to proceed further. Thanks!

[Riku-Sora]

If they keep on doing more then we might finally have staff review writers.

Would show even more how this site and forum is growing.

[Alex]

Yea, we're not doing too bad :D

[icy14]

how do i become a staff i can not find out. pleasr tell me somebody who knows this site like riku or anybody eles

[H Leaf]

With only 11 posts? not sure you might !! there are people on this forum with over 3,000 and still have a member title lolz

[icy14]

so am i suppose to write 500 words now or can i do it day bu day well am am going to keppup doing 500 words until somebody tells me not to or i get the job

where do i write my post or to get ont the review team for writing

well am good for the job i think i can talk or don't talk what ever you want or my boss whant

me o thanks full i want the job for revier i can do it 15 7 for free

am a very good writer i wrote 4 books already but havn't them published yet there being mailed soon to publishers i have good exp as reviewr for other web sites if you think am not qualifie then look at myspace

ok i will try that out doing reviews for free sounds nice i havn'e wrote much

i can write tons of game reviews well only on ps2 ps3 wii and any other games maybe a couple on xbox 360 games

cool. i hope to read it and see what your all about ...... riku

well i really want the position so here it is.
Age:13
why i think am good for the job: well am a big fan about graphic since ps1. am good at drawing too. i take or stared a japaneese school in makin georgia where i do art.
exp:none unlees you count making some for friends and that is just drawing then downloading it to internet

[Kaito]

Alright guys, I got this.. Icy, make your review of something about the game.. Send it too Alex. Since you don't know how to attach files.. If you make it I'll help you out.. I'm a review writer as-well.. Hope you make it!

Kota..

[Reiyyan]

well i am an english 1st language student doing gcse, i get a in english so i could help if it is needed. English pretty much my first language

[Soul Of Destiny]

I'd love the chance to do this, may I try?

[Kaito]

Go for it!
I'm a review writer :)

If you need any help pm me.

[Soul Of Destiny]

So, a 500 word or more review on ANY Kingdom Hearts game? I'm getting on this right now, expect something from me within the next couple of days guys.

[Tidus dude]

Even though I doubt Alex cares anymore, I want to give a wack at this! I have a perfect Ideas about Main Characters...

[Yoto]

OMFG
This thread was SOOOOO dead!
^^
I would sign up but these hands are meant for destroying, not creating.

[Kaito]

I think we have them covered.

Although, some info may be used on TKH.

Interested?

[Yoto]

I am. Although all I know it to write 500 words about Kingdom Hearts. But what about it? The Main characters? The whole story? The ending?

[Kaito]

Alright.

Write a review over anything to do with Kingdom Hearts.

The worlds, the characters, Gummi Ships, anything.

Pm it to me when your done and I'll see what I can do.

[Yoto]

Done.

[Twilight Sora]

Well, we could do a review section, and it would contain tons of reviews of all different games done by members. We could make a team. But not a big one. Like a 5 or 6 man team.

[Kaito]

?

This is for the two main sites TS.

[Twilight Sora]

?

This is for the two main sites TS.

Well, I feel like an idiot. Nevermind that post. -___-

[Kaito]

LOL.

=) No problem.

[Tidus dude]

Dakota, I will send it to you either today or tommorow kay?

[Kingdom Hearts Freak]

Wow!

TKH is slowly growing!
By the time the Jump Festa comences(Dec. 22-23) That site will be big!

Let's keep this up!

[Reiyyan]

hmm i think i wanna give it a shot, i send the stuff to you kota???

500 words review yea

[Kingdom Hearts Freak]

Thank you for contributing Rei!


Oh and please PM me, I have a question.

[Dark Knight]

I will be contrinuiting as well with you guys, expect a PM soon.

[Reiyyan]

PM to who???

[Kingdom Hearts Freak]

To Kota Rei. I'm only but a News Updator and so is Kairi.


Thank you very much DK! I expect a lot from you!

[Dark Knight]

To Kota Rei. I'm only but a News Updator and so is Kairi.


Thank you very much DK! I expect a lot from you!

I am making my review now.

[Reiyyan]

OK, will do, send to kota. review on KH cheese, but i can only send it on me weekends i believe

[Kingdom Hearts Freak]

Again I say, Thank you!

Oh and guys ya might want to include some pictures.

I beg your pardon! KH Cheese!?!

[Reiyyan]

hmm thanks for da tipz

[Kingdom Hearts Freak]

Uhh Rei, what's KH Cheese?

[Yoto]

*sigh*


I wrote that summary..
*sigh*
It probaly sucked.

[Kingdom Hearts Freak]

Okay guys if you're done PM it to me, or Kota... Whoever's online so it can be put up on TKH.
Oh and DK very good job! It's already put up!
If you are still doing it tell us what you are doing it on.

[Dark Knight]

Okay guys if you're done PM it to me, or Kota... Whoever's online so it can be put up on TKH.
Oh and DK very good job! It's already put up!
If you are still doing it tell us what you are doing it on.

I had talk to Kota, no problem guys.

[Kingdom Hearts Freak]

I had talk to Kota, no problem guys.
Whaaa?
Lolz!

[Dark Knight]

Whaaa?
Lolz!

I was thinking of joining you guys.

[Kingdom Hearts Freak]

Ohhh! Cool!
What position?
What did Kota say?

[Tidus dude]

OMG!? I have it done!

[Kaito]

Well.

I've been thinking, as many review writers as we can get will help.

Although for the first few weeks just send it to me and I'll post. Once you put in enough content your apart of the team.

As long as you meet the requirements.

Same as Alex's first post.

[Tidus dude]

Dakota, it's in your PM Box...

[Kingdom Hearts Freak]

Well.

I've been thinking, as many review writers as we can get will help.

Although for the first few weeks just send it to me and I'll post. Once you put in enough content your apart of the team.

As long as you meet the requirements.

Same as Alex's first post.
Yes, what he said.
Kota are you on MSN?

[khfan12345]

Yes he is.

[Tidus dude]

Dakota is almost alwayson MSN...

[Kingdom Hearts Freak]

Dakota is almost alwayson MSN...
I know.
I'm talking to him right now.

[Kingdom Hearts Freak]

Sorry for double posting but errr what now?

[Xykru]

Are the positions filled? If not, I shall submit an entry when I have the time... let me know!