Leon
04-20-2007, 06:39 PM
This is a story that I wrote. It's not finished.
Blitztown, a city world filled with towering skyscrapers, a boy named Kaz was getting off work from his delivery job. The sky was filled with clouds and was starting to rain a little. The streets were rather crowded at this today from people hurrying home trying not to get wet. Kaz was in no hurry to get home. He didn’t mind getting wet. In fact he kind of liked it. It was calming to him, and he needed the calmness. He had been having dreams of his world and friends being swallowed by a living darkness. He didn’t know what they meant, and he hadn’t told anyone about them. Not even his sister, Averia. He was close to his sister.
He could see his village now; it was out and away from the city. He could see Buck and Marr sparring on the hill. They were always practicing with their training weapons. He could hear Sukko yelling at her little brother Rai, and then there was Rayva. She was the oldest of them all, wild, funny, and beautiful. She was shooting a gun at a target she had set up. “Hey Kaz” Buck yelled “Come over here. Think you can take us both on?” Buck said. Marr had a grin on his face. He didn’t smile much and was usually very quiet. “Sure” Kaz replied with confidence. “Oh you do huh? We’ll see” Buck said. Kaz picked up his training sword. The other had all gathered around to watch the battle. Marr was quick and agile. Buck was big and strong. Buck came running at him, but Kaz quickly moved to the side only to barely miss Marr’s training sword. Kaz was very athletic. He flipped into the air and landed behind Buck. Kaz swung hard, but Buck ducked under it. Marr came at him with fast blows from left to right. Kaz parried them all. Out of the corner of his eye he saw buck coming at him. Kaz rolled to the side and came right up on Buck. Kaz faked to the right then swung left and struck Buck right on the side of the head. “Ouch!” Buck yelled. Kaz heard Rayva laughing in the crowd. Marr swung for Kaz’s legs, but he jumped up just in time. Kaz stabbed high and low then swung to the right. Marr blocked it easily, butthen slipped in the mud. Kaz was holding his sword to his throat by the time Marr opened his eyes. It was raining hard now. “Good fight huh?” Kaz said. “Yeah” Marr replied. The others were chearing for Kas now. “Your pretty good with a sword.” Rayva said. She was muscular yet feminine. The other all looked up to her. “Thanks” Kaz said. “I’m going in. I’m getting all wet.” Sukko said. She was practicing her magic if she wasn’t fighting with her little brother Rai. “Yeah, I’m getting hungry” Rai complained. “Well I’ll see everybody tomorrow” Buck said. “See you tomorrow” Kaz said as he walked to his house.
Kaz arrived at his house and walked in. Averia, Kaz’s sister, was cooking dinner. She had been cooking ever since she was little. She also had to because their parents worked late.”Look at you. You’re covered in mud” Averia yelled. “Go clean yourself up” Averia said. “I will after dinner” Kaz said. Averia had fixed her famous stew. It was much better than it looked. Kaz had cleaned up and was laying in his bed looking out the window. The sky seemed different tonight. It was darker than normal. Kaz then drifted off to sleep. His sister then woke him up by shaking him. “Kaz, quick come out side” Averia said with a scarred voice. Kaz put on his good close and ran out side. Their friends were gathered outside on the hill. Kaz and Averia ran quickly over their. Then he saw it. There was a thick darkness in the sky. It was so black he wouldn’t be able to see if it weren’t for the lights in the city. Then a giant hand reached out of the sky. It was almost as big as some of the buildings. It grabbed on to one of the buildings and pulled itself out of the sky. A huge black creature stood as tall as the buildings in the middle of the city. “What is it” Rai said. “I don’t know” Sukko replied. “Mom and Dad are over their” Averia yelled. This is exatly what Kaz’s dreams had been like. “Alright who is coming with me?” Kaz asked. “I’am” they all replied.
Soon they had all gathered there weapons and were heading into the city.. Kaz and Rayva were the fastest runners. They arrived at the city quickly. Then ant like beings emerged from the ground. Kaz’s sword started to shake, and then a bright light blinded him. Now in his hand he held a large key. One of the shadows jumped at him. He swung the key at it. The shadow was struck and completely vanished. He saw that his sister also held a key in her hand. “What is it?” Kaz asked. “I don’t know” Averia answered. “Come on lets keep moving Marr said. It was strange. The town seemed completely empty. They turned a corner to see a man lying on the ground. He looked lifeless as if his soul had been taken from him, and there was one of the shadows standing over him looking as if it had achieved a great victory in destroying the poor man. Befor KAz could even step forward to attack it a loud bang rang through his ears. He turned to see Rayva holding her gun. The creature was lying on the ground, and then turned into a black pool then vanished. “ I’ve got your back” Rayva said. “Thanks” Kaz replied. After what seemed like hours of fighting the dark creatures and through the city they arrived at the center of the town greeted by a giant black being. Kaz couldn't help but notice a man standing on the shoulder of the monster. He had long black hair and was wearing a blue robe with large black boots. In his hand was a doublebladed sword. Kaz couldn't understand why they monster was letting him stand their, or even my the man wasn't fighting the beast. Kaz and the others ran to with in a few meters of the great monster when the keys appeared in Kaz and Averia's hands. The man jumped off the monster and came floating down to land in front of them. "so these are the keyblades chosen wielders" the man chuckeld. The man appeared to be in his early thirtys. He also had a scar across his left eye. "Who are you and what are you talking about" Averia said. " I am Braylor, and you mean to tell me you don't know what those are." Braylor said. "Pathetic" Braylor barked. He then rose in the air again, and landed on the giant creatures head that was now crouched down. "My heartless. Destroy them so that we may cover this world in darkness" Braylor yelled. " I don't know who you think you are not doing anything to our world" Buck screamed. The great beast, or heartless as Braylor called it, rose into the air. It grabbed a huge chunk out of the building and threw it at them.
Then Kaz and Axeria's keyblades shot out beams of light that destroyed the building and blew right through the heartless' arm. In shock Kaz and Averia ran at the heartless followed by the others. Rai threw his throwing stars at the left foot of the heartsles while Buck and Marr hacked away at the right. Sukko helped her brother out by using a fire spell. Rayva fired at braylor standing on the heartless' head, but the heartless put it's giant hand in front of him and absorbed it. "I have an idea. Follow me Averia" Kaz said. "Trust me on this" Kaz said. Then the heartless picked them up with it's right hand, since the left one had been blown off. "Shoot at Braylor" Kaz yelled. Rayva aimed her gun and fired. The heartless raised it's hand to block. The same hand Kaz and Averia were in. Kaz swung the keyblade and struck Braylor in the chest. Averia stabbed her keyblade into the hand of the heartless, and it released it's grip. They fell and landed on the head next to Braylor. Before Braylor could swing his sword Kaz shoved his keyblade in the head og the heartless. It stumbled and fell. The ground had turned black and a ball of darkness stood behind Braylor.
"Kaz. Averia" it was the voices of there parents. They were running out of there office building toward them. Before Kaz could say anything Braylor flew by sweeping up his parents. Braylor stopped in front of the dark ball. "This will fuel your anger, and once your a heartless no one will be able to stop me" Braylor said as he few into the dark ball. Kaz and the others ran into the portal after him.
They awoke in a different world . They then met a wizzard named Sal who explained what the heartless and the keyblades are.
"So in order to stop Braylor you must find and lock the keyholes in seven worlds to reveal the door of darkness. Then you must shut the door." Sal explained. "You can take my gummi ship to travel between worlds" Sal said. "It sure is to help us like this" Sukko said. "Anything for the keyblade wielders" Sal said. "Well what are we waiting here for?" Buck asked. "Lets go" Averia said. "I'll get you back mom and dad. I promise.
Blitztown, a city world filled with towering skyscrapers, a boy named Kaz was getting off work from his delivery job. The sky was filled with clouds and was starting to rain a little. The streets were rather crowded at this today from people hurrying home trying not to get wet. Kaz was in no hurry to get home. He didn’t mind getting wet. In fact he kind of liked it. It was calming to him, and he needed the calmness. He had been having dreams of his world and friends being swallowed by a living darkness. He didn’t know what they meant, and he hadn’t told anyone about them. Not even his sister, Averia. He was close to his sister.
He could see his village now; it was out and away from the city. He could see Buck and Marr sparring on the hill. They were always practicing with their training weapons. He could hear Sukko yelling at her little brother Rai, and then there was Rayva. She was the oldest of them all, wild, funny, and beautiful. She was shooting a gun at a target she had set up. “Hey Kaz” Buck yelled “Come over here. Think you can take us both on?” Buck said. Marr had a grin on his face. He didn’t smile much and was usually very quiet. “Sure” Kaz replied with confidence. “Oh you do huh? We’ll see” Buck said. Kaz picked up his training sword. The other had all gathered around to watch the battle. Marr was quick and agile. Buck was big and strong. Buck came running at him, but Kaz quickly moved to the side only to barely miss Marr’s training sword. Kaz was very athletic. He flipped into the air and landed behind Buck. Kaz swung hard, but Buck ducked under it. Marr came at him with fast blows from left to right. Kaz parried them all. Out of the corner of his eye he saw buck coming at him. Kaz rolled to the side and came right up on Buck. Kaz faked to the right then swung left and struck Buck right on the side of the head. “Ouch!” Buck yelled. Kaz heard Rayva laughing in the crowd. Marr swung for Kaz’s legs, but he jumped up just in time. Kaz stabbed high and low then swung to the right. Marr blocked it easily, butthen slipped in the mud. Kaz was holding his sword to his throat by the time Marr opened his eyes. It was raining hard now. “Good fight huh?” Kaz said. “Yeah” Marr replied. The others were chearing for Kas now. “Your pretty good with a sword.” Rayva said. She was muscular yet feminine. The other all looked up to her. “Thanks” Kaz said. “I’m going in. I’m getting all wet.” Sukko said. She was practicing her magic if she wasn’t fighting with her little brother Rai. “Yeah, I’m getting hungry” Rai complained. “Well I’ll see everybody tomorrow” Buck said. “See you tomorrow” Kaz said as he walked to his house.
Kaz arrived at his house and walked in. Averia, Kaz’s sister, was cooking dinner. She had been cooking ever since she was little. She also had to because their parents worked late.”Look at you. You’re covered in mud” Averia yelled. “Go clean yourself up” Averia said. “I will after dinner” Kaz said. Averia had fixed her famous stew. It was much better than it looked. Kaz had cleaned up and was laying in his bed looking out the window. The sky seemed different tonight. It was darker than normal. Kaz then drifted off to sleep. His sister then woke him up by shaking him. “Kaz, quick come out side” Averia said with a scarred voice. Kaz put on his good close and ran out side. Their friends were gathered outside on the hill. Kaz and Averia ran quickly over their. Then he saw it. There was a thick darkness in the sky. It was so black he wouldn’t be able to see if it weren’t for the lights in the city. Then a giant hand reached out of the sky. It was almost as big as some of the buildings. It grabbed on to one of the buildings and pulled itself out of the sky. A huge black creature stood as tall as the buildings in the middle of the city. “What is it” Rai said. “I don’t know” Sukko replied. “Mom and Dad are over their” Averia yelled. This is exatly what Kaz’s dreams had been like. “Alright who is coming with me?” Kaz asked. “I’am” they all replied.
Soon they had all gathered there weapons and were heading into the city.. Kaz and Rayva were the fastest runners. They arrived at the city quickly. Then ant like beings emerged from the ground. Kaz’s sword started to shake, and then a bright light blinded him. Now in his hand he held a large key. One of the shadows jumped at him. He swung the key at it. The shadow was struck and completely vanished. He saw that his sister also held a key in her hand. “What is it?” Kaz asked. “I don’t know” Averia answered. “Come on lets keep moving Marr said. It was strange. The town seemed completely empty. They turned a corner to see a man lying on the ground. He looked lifeless as if his soul had been taken from him, and there was one of the shadows standing over him looking as if it had achieved a great victory in destroying the poor man. Befor KAz could even step forward to attack it a loud bang rang through his ears. He turned to see Rayva holding her gun. The creature was lying on the ground, and then turned into a black pool then vanished. “ I’ve got your back” Rayva said. “Thanks” Kaz replied. After what seemed like hours of fighting the dark creatures and through the city they arrived at the center of the town greeted by a giant black being. Kaz couldn't help but notice a man standing on the shoulder of the monster. He had long black hair and was wearing a blue robe with large black boots. In his hand was a doublebladed sword. Kaz couldn't understand why they monster was letting him stand their, or even my the man wasn't fighting the beast. Kaz and the others ran to with in a few meters of the great monster when the keys appeared in Kaz and Averia's hands. The man jumped off the monster and came floating down to land in front of them. "so these are the keyblades chosen wielders" the man chuckeld. The man appeared to be in his early thirtys. He also had a scar across his left eye. "Who are you and what are you talking about" Averia said. " I am Braylor, and you mean to tell me you don't know what those are." Braylor said. "Pathetic" Braylor barked. He then rose in the air again, and landed on the giant creatures head that was now crouched down. "My heartless. Destroy them so that we may cover this world in darkness" Braylor yelled. " I don't know who you think you are not doing anything to our world" Buck screamed. The great beast, or heartless as Braylor called it, rose into the air. It grabbed a huge chunk out of the building and threw it at them.
Then Kaz and Axeria's keyblades shot out beams of light that destroyed the building and blew right through the heartless' arm. In shock Kaz and Averia ran at the heartless followed by the others. Rai threw his throwing stars at the left foot of the heartsles while Buck and Marr hacked away at the right. Sukko helped her brother out by using a fire spell. Rayva fired at braylor standing on the heartless' head, but the heartless put it's giant hand in front of him and absorbed it. "I have an idea. Follow me Averia" Kaz said. "Trust me on this" Kaz said. Then the heartless picked them up with it's right hand, since the left one had been blown off. "Shoot at Braylor" Kaz yelled. Rayva aimed her gun and fired. The heartless raised it's hand to block. The same hand Kaz and Averia were in. Kaz swung the keyblade and struck Braylor in the chest. Averia stabbed her keyblade into the hand of the heartless, and it released it's grip. They fell and landed on the head next to Braylor. Before Braylor could swing his sword Kaz shoved his keyblade in the head og the heartless. It stumbled and fell. The ground had turned black and a ball of darkness stood behind Braylor.
"Kaz. Averia" it was the voices of there parents. They were running out of there office building toward them. Before Kaz could say anything Braylor flew by sweeping up his parents. Braylor stopped in front of the dark ball. "This will fuel your anger, and once your a heartless no one will be able to stop me" Braylor said as he few into the dark ball. Kaz and the others ran into the portal after him.
They awoke in a different world . They then met a wizzard named Sal who explained what the heartless and the keyblades are.
"So in order to stop Braylor you must find and lock the keyholes in seven worlds to reveal the door of darkness. Then you must shut the door." Sal explained. "You can take my gummi ship to travel between worlds" Sal said. "It sure is to help us like this" Sukko said. "Anything for the keyblade wielders" Sal said. "Well what are we waiting here for?" Buck asked. "Lets go" Averia said. "I'll get you back mom and dad. I promise.