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Kingdom Knight Ark
04-21-2007, 01:54 AM
((hey this si my first KH fanfic...um ya lol, this si the beginning...there will be more!!!))

~Kingdom Hearts 3~
~Baptism of Flame~


Allen stood at the edge of a cliff, he looked down over the valley he called his kingdom; a warm wind brushed the silver grey hair out of his ashen grey eyes. He had felt a disturbance in his land, tremors of darkness in fields of light. He had ruled here for seventy years, had lived a rich full life as king, and had a son who with time could take his place. These things where his life, and now he felt as if everything he had known in his life balanced on the edge of a knife.

Allen learned of the threat to his land when a messenger, a funny fellow with big round ears like a mouse. Claimed he was a fellow king of a distant land, and that the darkness that had now spread to Allen’s kingdom was preparing for an attack. Allen was an experienced king, he had seen many battlefields, won many wars, and so he knew when a warning was given that he should wisely prepare for battle.

His army was ready in a matter of days; they hoped to hold the entrance to the valley. Brave knights all armed and ready for the attack, the short mouse king had even offered to stay and help in the battle. During a battalion’s briefing Allen’s son had come in and demanded that he join the fight, he was a young lad, a stable boy of seven-teen but not ready for something of this size or scale, and yet something the mouse king had said had made Allen come to this spot, to think, and to decide…if his son was destined for Battle. If he was something the Mouse had called…a ‘Keyblade’ wielder.

“Father? May I have an audience” Vincent said as he came up the path, he was wearing a full suit of armor, the chest plate was edgy, the gauntlets spiked, the whole suit made to resemble a Dragon ready for combat. He held his helm at his side and knelt at Allen’s feet, long Silver hair covered his face as he awaited his father’s permission to stand.

Allen turned and looked at his son. He had wished that the day his only son would wear the armor he himself had worn so many times would never come, but here he was, Vincent shinnied brightly in the fading light of Dusk. “You may stand my son, there is something…I must give you” he gripped something in his hand, the king said it would be the weapon that could give them a chance…it was a trinket, a Keychain of a star, tied together with blue string.

Vincent stood and approached his father he looked him in the eyes, they where the same, two sets of ashen grey pupils. Father and son on the cusp of war, with an enemy that was said to be made of the shadows themselves, stealers of hearts and devourers of the Light, monsters created from their own fears, doubts, insecurities of the heart. “I am ready father, I have spoken to the king ‘Mickey’ he has told me what I am destined to be,” Vincent could see the age in his fathers worn face, the scars of battle representing the blood spilled for their land.
“I have heard the king’s words my son,” Allen placed a well gauntleted hand on Vincent’s Shoulder, “that is why I have asked you here, to see if what the king suspects is true…here take this in your hand” Allen reached out his hand and dropped the Keychain into Vincent’s, for a moment Vincent saw his father and then…everything went black.

Roxas88
04-21-2007, 02:27 AM
very good start, i started to enjoy it until....well until you stopped it :D

Kingdom Knight Ark
04-21-2007, 03:24 AM
((didn't want to keep you waiting ^_^))

Chapter 1: Oathkeeper

Vincent felt himself falling, drifting in a darkness that seemed both familiar and different. As he fell thoughts came to him…like whispers he himself made before training, or when he was alone in bed, the darkness of night creeping around him. “Where am I? What’s happening? Falling….I’m so calm, am I dead?” with that last thought Vincent felt himself land on his feet.

He was standing on a circular platform; a light came from with it. He looked around and saw that it looked to be a very sturdy Stained glass; there was a picture of a boy, holding what looked like a Giant Key. “Where have I wandered into?” Vincent said. He was still holding his helm, a good sign. Vincent walked to the center of the Platform when a voice whispered in his ear; it was calm, soft and warm. “What path do you choose? The Way of the Sword, The Duty of the Defender, or The Intelligence of the Mage,” the words seemed to materialize a sword, a shield, and a Mage’s Wand in front of Vincent.

“I guess I should pick one up” Vincent said picking up the sword. It had a gold hilt, a blue handle and the mouse King’s crest on it. Had the king devised this test? Vincent banished the idea and held the Sword out, it was evenly balanced a good weapon, he had never been into Magic much and defense had always been a weak point in his studies. And so he looked around, turning he saw a door.

The door was white, about his height and made of a solid material he didn’t bother remembering. The voice whispered into his ear once more this time he thought for a moment it was his own voice, or that of his father’s. “You have chosen the way of the Sword, will you use this power to protect yourself, your family, your friends…your world? Will you fight the heartless, and be a wielder?” Vincent looked around the darkness. “ a wielder of what!” he shouted the sword in his hand feeling heavy.


~The Key to your Destiny Vincent~

Vincent looked at the door, fear gripped him, beyond this place, and this platform was the unknown. He felt that to accept this power that the voice was promising, he would be throwing away the life he knew. With a sigh Vincent would raise the Sword and point it at the door. “this is the way I have chosen, I will take the key to my destiny, I swear under my oath as a Knight!” with this he walked toward the door, it opened on his approach for a moment he was blinded, but then he was standing in front of Allen, the Sword had changed form, it was thin, silver and made of several interlacing blades, the handle was a pair of wings and the top of the blade was adorned with several spikes…the Voice came to him one last time…

~Vincent…take this…Your OathKeeper and unlock your destiny~

Roxas88
04-21-2007, 02:53 PM
like i said its pretty good, i really enjoyed reading it

Marluxia
04-21-2007, 03:26 PM
This is really good!!! Keep going!!

Kingdom Knight Ark
04-23-2007, 01:20 AM
Chapter 2: War of the Heart {part 1}

Allen stood and saw his son holding the Keyblade. This was their hope, their dreams, their destiny made real. Allen seeing his son holding the strange sword now knew what the mouse king Mickey had said was true…they had a chance, but it would lay on his son’s shoulders. “Vincent?” Allen would say looking into his eyes.

Vincent’s face was distant, and his eyes saw not his fathers face but the boy from that world beyond his own. The one he had seen in the Stained glass “So~ra…” before Vincent could say another word he collapsed the keyblade vanishing in a bright flash.

It was days later before Vincent opened his eyes. He felt a cold sweat run down his cheek, he was in his armor, in his quarters in his father’s castle, and yet something felt wrong. Standing he went to the window, it was dark, Night had descended on their land or…had it? Vincent went away from the window and looked about his room, where was the Keyblade? He began to panic, had he lost the blade, had he dropped it?!

Grabbing his helmet he dashed out of his room and looked down the corridor, the pale blue stone was comforting but it was at this moment that he realized what was wrong. The Castle was silent, not a single noise penetrated its walls. “what in the hell is going on” Vincent said in a whisper.

{chapter 2 part 1 end}