Naruto Shippuden:new

[sorakeychain]

Ok, i was a little bored so i touth on making an rpg thread, and it has to be of Naruto of course:D

Characters:
Naruto, Gaara,Temari, Uzukya: Me
Sasuke: Riku22
Sakura: Namine
Takal: Takal the XIV
Shikamaru, Itachi: kingdom hearts
Ino, Ten Ten: Larxene
Chouji:
Kiba & Akamaru, Koru: Shikamaruxxx
Hinata: Kairi*
Shino: Jecht
Neiji, Edward Uchiha, Kabuto: Lonbilly
Rock Lee: Dark Knight
Sai, kai: Roxas1
Tsunade, Kakashi-sensei, Yaname(Yaname is from akatsuki): Chiasa
Asuma-sensei:
Kurenai-sensei:
Jiraya, Gai-sensei:: MasterBlade99
Orochimaru, Kankuro: Frogs557
Deidara:V. Valentine
Kisame:
Tobi:
Zetsu:
Sasori, Saru: chaser3

Ps.U can chose 3 characters or made up them
Character template
Username:
Characters name:
Age:
Aperance(put a pic if u want):
Weapons:
Abilities:
Clan:
Rank:
Bio(example:hiperactive..):

Charcter template
User name:Roxas1
name:kai
age: 17
sex:male
skills:speed,
elememt:fire
hair color:white
eye color:red
clothes:neji when hes 16 or 17
weapon:sliver kuni never let them go
Chunnin

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Username:Lonbilly
Characters name: Edward Uchiha
Age: 16
Aperance: http://tbn0.google.com/images?q=tbn:...ges/edward.gif
Weapons: Kunai, shurikans
Abilities: Sharingan
Clan: Uchiha
Rank: Jounnin
Bio: Lived once with all the Uchiha's, but one day his mom decided they needed to move, they did, 1 week after they did, is when Itachi killed all the Uchihas except Sasuke. then a year later, Ed's mother died, so he moved back into the Hidden Leaf Village, years past, he graduated from the Academy early, became a Chunnin early, now he is a Jonin, and has made friends over the past 2 years. Naruto, Sasuke, Sakura, and Shikamaru, and his uncle Kakashi

Username:shikamaruxxx
Characters name:Koru
Age: 14
Aperance: ok.......he wears a green jacket that is never zipped up.(different from Shikamaru's jacket) He wears a black under shirt under the jacket.
Weapons:windmill shuriken, shuriken, kunai.
Abilities:is practasing on summoning cats(lions, tigers ect.) can use shuriken in a number of ways. Is also very good at thinking of stradegies. Of course, shadow hold and neck bind.
Clan:Nara
Rank:Jounnin
Bio: lazy...

Username:Takal the XIV
Characters name:Takal
Age: 17
Aperance: long shorts, a zipped up sleeveless vest(grey) with a red open one of that. with a giant sword on the back(like zabuza). slightly longer than shoulder length gray hair. mist grey eyes, 6ft.
Abilities: make multiples of his giant sword, other assorted giant sword techniques, and control of fire and wind
Clan:Koho'ten
Rank:Jounnin
Bio:quiet

Username: Chiasa
Characters name: Yaname Irano (yay she can live now!)
Age:15
Aperance: Go to artwork : artwork that ain't art thread
Weapons: none special; some kunais ans shurikens, she uses her hands the most
Abilities: she's a specialist in genjutsu and "mind reading", she can be very tricky
Clan: none
Rank: Chuunin
Bio: She's kind of introvert, she loves being alone with no one to bother her. She thinks friendship and love aren't really important thing and that the only thing we can took for granted is hate and fear.
Her philosophy of living is to always put your pride and values upon all others. We can only count on ourselves to keep living.
The only smile she reminds was....well she doesn't.


Character template
Username: chaser3
Characters name: Saru
Age:16
Aperance(put a pic if u want): spiked hair with a ninja cloak on with the picture of his clan on the back
Weapons:shurikan
Abilities: rasengan and the clan power and jutsu
Clan: Yima clan
Rank: Chunnin
Bio(example:hiperactive..): somtimes hiperactrive



Character template
Username: sorakeychain
Characters name: Uzukya
Age: 16
Aperance:
Weapons: magic bow and arrow
Abilities: ninjutsu, taijutsu
Clan: Yima clan
Rank: Chunnin
Bio: ( like Sasuke's)

[Namine]

Can I be Sakura?

[sorakeychain]

Alredy are:p

[Namine]

Thanks!!:)

[Riku22]

I'm Sasuke.

[Twilight Sora]

oooh ooooh i want to be sasuke :D
dang it riku 22 you beat me
well then let me be garra

[sorakeychain]

Ok, fight! Just kiding:p Im gonna give sasuke to Riku22 because he post first:confused:

[Dark Knight]

be rock lee...wooooohoiooooo

[sorakeychain]

be rock lee...wooooohoiooooo

lol,you´re in :D

[Takal the XIV]

im shikamaru

[sorakeychain]

Shikamaru that is, lol:p

[lonbilly]

Neji...........

[sorakeychain]

Edited...:p

[lonbilly]

Edited...:p

Why are we talking like this........

[sorakeychain]

Like this, how?

[lonbilly]

Like this, how?

Heh?
:confused:

[sorakeychain]

:confused: U said "why are we talking like this?"

[lonbilly]

oh................

[sorakeychain]

Ok, lets forget... Hey can i join in your The 7 Keybladers: Kingdom Hearts rpg thread?

[lonbilly]

Ya, who you wanna be, lets take it over to that thread so we dont get off-topic.

[Namine]

Heh?
:confused:

lol, you're making me confused...:p

[lonbilly]

lol, you're making me confused...:p

NAMI!!!!!!!!!!!!!:D :D

[ShikaX]

I'll be................(oh and the person that took Shika is in for it)............Kiba and Akamru!!!(akamaru's BIG in shippuden)

[lonbilly]

I'll be................(oh and the person that took Shika is in for it)............Kiba and Akamru!!!(akamaru's BIG in shippuden)

you can't denie your fate, Shikamaru...

[Takal the XIV]

sorry shika, i thought bout asuma, but ive read the manga. it not too nice to him.

[sorakeychain]

lol, a fight for Shikamaru:p (jk)

[ShikaX]

It ok......(in head self like sakura's just a boy: WHY I OUGHTA!!!!(jking))........yeah...but Kiba and Akamaru is soo cool!!

[sorakeychain]

They sure are:D They´re like.. my second favorite

[ShikaX]

They're tied in second for me with*drumroll* KANKURO!!!!! oh and by the way can we be more than one character?

[sorakeychain]

Yeah, i think its better because we´re few... Chose another shikamaruxxx:D

[Namine]

NAMI!!!!!!!!!!!!!:D :D

LONBILLY!!!!!!:D lol

[ShikaX]

Kankuro the puppet master, now he has three puppets XD!!!

[sorakeychain]

LONBILLY!!!!!!:D lol

lol:D Namine chose anoter character or made up one okay?

[ShikaX]

Oh....nevermind I'm not gonna be Kankouro I'm gonna make up a char!!

[Roxas1]

occ:can i be sai

[lonbilly]

Hmmmmm, another Character..........

*grins evily*

[sorakeychain]

Oh....nevermind I'm not gonna be Kankouro I'm gonna make up a char!!

Cool, imagination up:D

[Roxas1]

i want sai

[ShikaX]

hmmmm

Name:koru
Clan:Naja (I thinks that the clan shikamaru is in)
rank: Chunin
weapons:Windmill shuriken, shuriken, kuni.
ummmmm occupation: older borther of shikamaru, by one year.

[sorakeychain]

i want sai

Whos tha :S?

[Roxas1]

sai is naruto and sakura freind that goes on they team when sasuke goes to get power

[sorakeychain]

hmmmm

Name:koru
Clan:Naja (I thinks that the clan shikamaru is in)
rank: Chunin
weapons:Windmill shuriken, shuriken, kuni.
ummmmm occupation: older borther of shikamaru, by one year.

Sorry , Shikamaruxxx im gonna put the character template in the first page ok?

[ShikaX]

OH!! that one dude in the very first Naruto Shippuden episode!!

okays...

[lonbilly]

Name: Edward Uchiha
Clan: Uchiha
rank: Jonin
Age: 16
weapons: shuriken, kuni
occupation: none

[sorakeychain]

You´re in Roxas1, but i gotta chose another character or made up one okay?

[Takal the XIV]

uhm, arent the uchiha dead, minus itachi and sasuke.(not tryin to rag on u or anything)

[sorakeychain]

uhm, arent the uchiha dead, minus itachi and sasuke.(not tryin to rag on u or anything)

Hya Takal:D Plese read the first post of all(mine)

[Roxas1]

Charcter template
User name:Roxas1
name:kai
age: 17
sex:male
skills:speed,
elememt:fire
hair color:white
eye color:red
clothes:neji when hes 16 or 17
weapon:sliver kuni never let them go
Cunin

[lonbilly]

Character template
Username:Lonbilly
Characters name: Edward Uchiha
Age: 16
Aperance: http://tbn0.google.com/images?q=tbn:f3CgK89cBCkXDM:http://www.geocities.com/mugenoutlaw/images/edward.gif
Weapons: Kunia, shurikans
Abilities: Sharingan
Clan: Uchiha
Rank: Jonin
Bio: Lived once with all the Uchiha's, but one day his mom decided they needed to move, they did, 1 week after they did, is when Itachi killed all the Uchihas except Sasuke. then a year later, Ed's mother died, so he moved back into the Hidden Leaf Village, years past, he graduated from the Academy early, became a Chunnin early, now he is a Jonin, and has made friends over the past 2 years. Naruto, Sasuke, Sakura, and Shikamaru, and his uncle Kakashi

[ShikaX]

Username:shikamaruxxx
Characters name:Koru
Age:one year older than Shikamaru..(I have no clue what age Shikamaru is)
Aperance(put a pic if u want): ok.......he wears a green jacket that is never zipped up.(different from Shikamaru's jacket) He wears a black under shirt under the jacket.
Weapons:windmill shuriken, shuriken, kuni.
Abilities:is practasing on summoning cats(lions, tigers ect.) can use shuriken in a number of ways. Is also very good at thinking of stradegies. Of course, shadow hold and neck bind.
Clan:Nara
Rank:Cunin
Bio(example:hiperactive..):....(everyone in his clan is this) lazy...

[Takal the XIV]

yeah, my bad.

Username:Takal the XIV
Characters name:Takal
Age: 17
Aperance(put a pic if u want): long shorts, a zipped up sleeveless vest(grey) with a red open one of that. with a giant sword on the back(like zabuza). slightly longer than shoulder length gray hair. mist grey eyes, 6ft.
Abilities: make multiples of his giant sword, other assorted giant sword techniques, and control of fire and wind
Clan:Koho'ten
Rank:Jounin
Bio(example:hiperactive..):quiet

[sorakeychain]

Ok, you´re all in the first page:D

[kingdom hearts]

can i be shino?

[sorakeychain]

Sure, but chose another person or made up one okay?

[Roxas1]

i walk into the woods looking for fights

[Roxas1]

kai runs to a dead nija

[sorakeychain]

Wait roxas1, we need more people to start! Be pacient ok?

[Chiasa]

Ok sis, I'm Kakashi-sensei
and


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Username: Chiasa
Characters name: Yaname Irano (yay she can live now!)
Age:15
Aperance(put a pic if u want): Go to artwork : artwork that ain't art thread
Weapons: none special; some kunais ans shurikens, she uses her hands the most
Abilities: she's a specialist in genjutsu and "mind reading", she can be very tricky
Clan: none
Rank: Chuunin
Bio(example:hiperactive..): She's kind of introvert, she loves being alone with no one to bother her. She thinks friendship and love aren't really important thing and that the only thing we can took for granted is hate and fear.
Her philosophy of living is to always put your pride and values upon all others. We can only count on ourselves to keep living.
The only smile she reminds was....well she doesn't.

[sorakeychain]

ok ur in siss:D

[Kairi*]

can i be Hinata?

[Larxene]

Can I be Ino. Pwease?

[Roxas1]

My bad sorry:(

[sorakeychain]

can i be Hinata?

Sure. And Larxene u can be Ino but u 2 chose another character ok?

[Roxas1]

Hi wats up

[sorakeychain]

hya, nothing of onteresting:p What bout u?

[Roxas1]

not alot waiting for more people

[sorakeychain]

o, i think we can start now... Is anione on?

[Takal the XIV]

"hyuu, this is so bothersome."

[sorakeychain]

Gash.. im bored and there's nowone on....

[Chiasa]

I'm on, Come on sis let's get this on !!

*Somewhere in Konoha's village forest, during train*
Kakashi was trying to calm down Naruto. He was like usual too hyperactive.
"Hey Naruto, calm down a bit will ya?"

[sorakeychain]

" No way! I gotta train till i die"

[Chiasa]

Kakashi:
"Oh well...You know that trainning is actually to make your skills grow...if you die they'll stop growing, won't they?"

[sorakeychain]

" Very funny Kakashi-sensei..." *continues training*

[Chiasa]

Kakashi:

"Then I should lay down myself. When you die your body can't just stay here, it will be needed someone to carry it back to Konoha."
*Sits under a tree and starts reading Ichi Ichi Paradise*

[sorakeychain]

" Okay,okay i'm done..."

[Chiasa]

Kakashi:

"Very well then. Do you want to go eat some ramen?"

[sorakeychain]

" Youshi! Lets go!!" *starts runing*

[Takal the XIV]

"Heyuu, Save me some" Takal calls as he walks over to the ramen stand.

[sorakeychain]

" Hy Takal! I just get back from the train, join us:D"

[Takal the XIV]

"arigato. I just got back from a level A mission. blah blah blah excetera, you know. eh kakashi. anyways. hows the training going naruto?"

[Chiasa]

Kakashi:

"Hi there Takal. Hey Naruto, did you bring your wallet?"

[sorakeychain]

":eek: Well....i..forgot... But i can go get it... going home!" *starts runing away*

[Chiasa]

Kakashi:

"Well then........I need to go to the bathroom."

*runs away and leaves Takal alone :D *

[sorakeychain]

" Uph.. I did it! At this time Kakashi's probably still waiting for me:D"

[Roxas1]

*sai go's on a tree and looks at the sky *
Im so online in this world no family no freinds

[sorakeychain]

Naruto was passing by and notice that someon's in a tree. " Kange Bushin No Jutsu" he said

[Chiasa]

kakashi *after the incident in the ramen shop kakashi decided to go look for Naruto and when he found him...*
Kakashi decided to stay back and see where that situation was leading.
"Naruto when are you going to learn to think before acting..."

[Takal the XIV]

"Hyuu," Takal says standing right above him (in the tree) "hey Sai are u ever going to get clothes for a dude?."

[sorakeychain]

ooc. Hey Takal did u pay our meal:p joking...

[lonbilly]

kakashi *after the incident in the ramen shop kakashi decided to go look for Naruto and when he found him...*
Kakashi decided to stay back and see where that situation was leading.
"Naruto when are you going to learn to think before acting..."

Ed then walked in on Kakashi's and Naruto's conversation. "Hey Uncle Kakashi! Hows life?" Ed asked sarcasticly

[Kairi*]

Hinata-*training*

[sorakeychain]

Naruto- " Um..." * looks at the sky* " It's alredy night... im goin home"

[Takal the XIV]

takal walks out to the forest, and starts to train with shikamaru. "since its night , your shadowbind should be very powerful, did you ever think of that one shikamaru"

"hmpf, of course. lets start!" Shikamaru uses his shadowbind technique on Takal. and the fight begins.

[MasterBlade99]

can i be the pervy sage

[ShikaX]

koru wached the two fight. "i remember when I was their age." he said to himself. he sat in the tree and closed his eyes.

[sorakeychain]

can i be the pervy sage

Ur talking bout Jiraya right??

[MasterBlade99]

Ur talking bout Jiraya right??

yeah him!!! lol

[sorakeychain]

yeah him!!! lol

lol, kay ur in:D Just chose another one okay?

[MasterBlade99]

gai sensesai is that ok

[sorakeychain]

gai sensesai is that ok

ooc. lol sure, Gai sensei is really cool:p

[MasterBlade99]

:D and there are no spaves in my name!!!!!:mad:

pervy sage: hey naurto can u do that jutsu that i love so much

[sorakeychain]

:D and there are no spaves in my name!!!!!:mad:

pervy sage: hey naurto can u do that jutsu that i love so much

" What's up Hero-senin... Im going home now, bed time you know..."

[MasterBlade99]

" What's up Hero-senin... Im going home now, bed time you know..."

pervy sage: ahhh wait are u talking to me???

Gai: ok rock lee do 1000000000000000000 push ups

[sorakeychain]

pervy sage: ahhh wait are u talking to me???

Gai: ok rock lee do 1000000000000000000 push ups

(( yeah, i mean HERO-SENIN is what Naruto call Jiraya))

[MasterBlade99]

HERO: huh i dont go to bed i need to watch out for my froggy!!

[sorakeychain]

HERO: huh i dont go to bed i need to watch out for my froggy!!

" Kay whatever im going home see ya around Hero-Senin" * Naruto walks home*

[MasterBlade99]

hero: wait u still need training !!!!

[sorakeychain]

hero: wait u still need training !!!!

" But Hero-Senin!! It's too late for that!"

[MasterBlade99]

"i dont care u need to lern how to contrik ur chakria"

[sorakeychain]

"i dont care u need to lern how to contrik ur chakria"

" Then.. U have to pay me the lunch tomorrow:D!! Deal??"

[MasterBlade99]

"i'll buy u all the ramen u can eat"

[sorakeychain]

"i'll buy u all the ramen u can eat"

"Then we have a deal!! Lets go, training time!"

[MasterBlade99]

can u hang upside down yet??

[sorakeychain]

" Ey Hero-Senin can i just do the Rasengan and then go home? Sleep?!"

[MasterBlade99]

no either walk on water or go hang up side down standing up

[sorakeychain]

Naruto walks to the river " Let's make it quick" *starts walking on water

[MasterBlade99]

ok go to bed and get me a pillow

[sorakeychain]

ok go to bed and get me a pillow

"Finaly!! A pillow?! Why do u want a pillow, Hero-Senin?"

[MasterBlade99]

hey i wana be comfortalable on ur floor cause thats where i'm sleeping

[sorakeychain]

"What?!!!! No way Hero-Senin!!!"

[MasterBlade99]

hey i have no where to sleep and guess wat my froggy friend is coming too

[sorakeychain]

" Not fair!..... At lest ur gonna pay me some ramen tomorrow!:D"

[MasterBlade99]

yeah i am but u have to pay for me MMMWWWWUUUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

[sorakeychain]

" What!! You're a liar Hero-Senin!!"

[MasterBlade99]

no i said i would pay for u but i never said u arent paying for me hehehehehehehe

[sorakeychain]

" That's it! Our deal is over! Kange Bushin no Jutsu!"

[MasterBlade99]

i'm still sleping here

[sorakeychain]

Naruto heard a sound coming from the bushes and all his replications disapeard

[MasterBlade99]

((gtg i got a lacroosse game wish me luck))

[sorakeychain]

(( lol alredy did:D Bya))

[Takal the XIV]

Takal-hmm. your getting better shikamaru. you still lack motivation. thats why you will always lose.
shikamaru- damnit, he's right "whatever, fighting is too bothersome. ill just plan out the fight, so it all goes my way. make them move how i want them too.
Takal- "hyuu, lets go get some ramen. im starving. I need to get some food before my next A-mission.

[Kairi*]

Hinata hears Takal,and watches him

[MasterBlade99]

pervy sage: ahh good morning everyone

[Kairi*]

Hinata sees pervy sage"im fine"she replyed

[MasterBlade99]

i'm going to the bar if anyone wants me

[sorakeychain]

" hey, what about my lunch, Ero-Senin?"

[ShikaX]

Koru wached Shikamaru and Takal leave. Then he noticed something soaring ion the sky. a message bird...perhaps? he thought then went and followed the bird.

[Takal the XIV]

"ay, Koru, its a message bird alright. Hokage-sama told me that she had an old friend personally requesting an ops mission."

[lonbilly]

Ed then saw all of them, and said "Whats up guys, oh hey Ero-Senin."

[sorakeychain]

"Hy Ed, u know the usual nothing interesting... But lets just stop talking and go eat some ramen!:D"

[Takal the XIV]

"aysch! all you think about it ramen! anyways i need to be going. A-missions dont do themselves yeh know"

[ShikaX]

"Actually, I've been chose to choose the team, a team of five will do." said Koru as he sat in the tree and thought about who to pick.

[sorakeychain]

" Hey pick me, Koru!" Naruto said while jumping around

[Takal the XIV]

"aye, naruto calm down. oye koru is this the mission that we saw fly in?"

[ShikaX]

"Yes, anyways. Shikamaru your gonna go at the end of the line. Takal you'll go in the middle." Koru began but was interupted by "BARK!" barked Akamaru. "Kiba and akamau will go in the front and." he said then let out a sigh. "Naruto, you'r gonna go infront of Shikamaru."

[sorakeychain]

"Al right! so what's this mission about?"

[ShikaX]

"It's about Gaara, the Hazekage of the sand. He's been kidnapped." Koru said closing his eyes letting out a sigh. "That little wimp!" said Kiba, "Why should we care about him!?" Then Koru ansered. "Because he is a Hazekage."

[sorakeychain]

"Gaara, kidnaped?! Hir opponent must be really strong...."

[ShikaX]

"Gaara, kidnaped?! Her opponen must be really strong...."

OOC:A his, not a her.

It was one of, (the people with read clouds on black robes lol forgot their names)." Koru said. "And Naruto, you must promise not to get too agressive."

[sorakeychain]

ooc. oops...my mistake.. Oh and the name is Akatsuki

bic." Calm down, i promise... unless i need it.."

[ShikaX]

ooc. oops...my mistake.. Oh and the name is Akatsuki

bic." Calm down, i promise... unless i need it.."

"And if you even try me and Shikamaru will stop you." Koru said looking at Naruto.

[sorakeychain]

" Alright but... Wasnt Akatsuki after me too?.." he said " Oh well, lets go dont wanna waste time u know.."

[Takal the XIV]

"hmpf, no use wasting air, or time for that matter. let us be going."

shikamaru "lets gather up our stuff and head out. meet at the village gate"

[sorakeychain]

" ok, see ya all there, bye" Naruto said going home

[MasterBlade99]

"BYYAAHHHH no Naruto we have to go" said hero sage

[sorakeychain]

" Not now Ero-senin, dont u heard what Koru said?!! When we came back, i can continue with the training ok? " Naruto said closing the door in Ero-senin's face

[ShikaX]

"well, he needs to get ready for the mission." Koru said walking up to hero sage.

[sorakeychain]

Naruto packed some kunais, shurikens , scrolls and smoke bombs then he head outside " I'm ready! Meet u in the vilage gate Koru" he said runing

[Frogs557]

Is Orochimaru taken?

[sorakeychain]

Is Orochimaru taken?

ooc.No, you're in:D But chose another or make up one wahever..

[Frogs557]

It was me, Orochimaru who kidnapped Garaa!!! *disapears in a puff of smoke before anyone can get him.*

[sorakeychain]

ooc. no Frogs557, we said that Akatsuki as kidnaped him...

[Takal the XIV]

ooc "heh, stupid orochimaru, thinking that he is still in akatsuki."

"oye, im all ready. so. ill take a nap. since i got time."

shikamaru "hmpf, whatever" *walks over and leans against the gate*

[Frogs557]

*Orochimaru appears in a tree*

I guess you've seen through my deception. I guess the only thing left to do now is kill you all!!!!

*Pulls out kunai and lunges at Shikamaru*

[ShikaX]

"Not so fast snake breath." Koru said as he shadow holded Orochimaru right before he got to Shikamaru. "You may as well give up." he laughed.

[Frogs557]

"you wish!!!!" Orochimaru laughs as he appears behind Koru, the Clone who Koru Shadow Held dissappears. Orochimaru Laughs again and begins forming seals with his hands.
"Darkness elemental Jutsu!" He screams as Koru's own shadow turns on him, "Shadow betrayal!!!"

[ShikaX]

Koru's shadow then dissapeared. He ran at Orochimaru's neck, Kunai at the ready.

[Frogs557]

Orochimaru sidestepped nimbly and formed another seal. Fireball Jutsu!!!! He screamed as a ball of flame shot toward Koru.

[ShikaX]

Koru's sholder got burnt. He jumped into the air and did along length of seals, leaving him up for any attack.

[Frogs557]

Hahahahahaha Orochimaru laughed manically. I will crush you! If you can dodge my Jutsu, I bet you can't dodge me!!!!
Orochimaru Throws himself at Koru, wielding a long sword.

[Takal the XIV]

takal whips outs four kunai and throws two of them at orochimaru, then throws the other two opposite of where the last two where thown. then shouts "Inferno Jutsu," the flame travels along the chakra wires that now appear and orochimaru is engulfed in flames.
pulling out his katana he says "tajuu kage bunshin no jutsu(thousands shadow clone technique) "koen kenkakku no jutsu(flame swordsman technique)"
"get out of that, Orochimaru!"

[ShikaX]

Koru jumped on Orochimaru's blade then he kicked his chin.

[Takal the XIV]

takal and his 9 other clones all lunge in "10 swords of eternal flame!" they shout stabbing through orochimaru's body. grinning "heh, try coming back from this one. RELEASE" they all shout in unison as they slash their swords out in every which direction. releasing the fire from the swords into orochimaru's body.

[sorakeychain]

ooc. hey! kange bushin is my technique!!!

[Takal the XIV]

ooc: i know, i stole it from you when i saw you do your training with ero-senin

[sorakeychain]

ooc. ha! damn u....

[lonbilly]

ooc: hey guys, what I miss

[ShikaX]

OOC:well Orochimaru appeared, Koru started a team on a mission and now we're fighting Orochimaru.

[lonbilly]

ooc: where are you tho, firest, desert, ?

[ShikaX]

OOC:we're at the Konoha gate.

[lonbilly]

OOC:we're at the Konoha gate.

ooc: oh, well, should I come in?

[ShikaX]

OOC:No, I'm waiting for Orochimaru to do something.......

[lonbilly]

OOC:No, I'm waiting for Orochimaru to do something.......

ooc: to do what?

[sorakeychain]

ooc. lets just end with Orochimaru's fight.... i mean it's Orochimaru u cant beat him easelly... well we need to start the rescue Gaara mission fast....

[Frogs557]

Orochimaru suddenly burst out of the ground and bit Koru on the shoulder then disappeared.

[Takal the XIV]

ooc: thats funny cuz if you see the last move i did to orochimaru. he kinda ka-splodid.

[Frogs557]

Orochimaru uses shadow clones a lot. You never know if the one you killed was the original.

[ShikaX]

"Auugghhh!!" Koru fell to the round on his knees and clenched his sholder.

[Frogs557]

Koru Heard a voice whisper in his ear, even though no one was there "I will be seeing you again soon." The voice faded out with a ominous cackling.

[ShikaX]

Koru could tell exactly who whispeared. He shakily got up.

[Frogs557]

Can I be Jiraia?

[Kairi*]

Hinata saw Koru,and watched"what is he doing?"she thought

[Frogs557]

((just letting you know, Koru got bitten by Orochimaru, so he has a curse mark now.))

[ShikaX]

"Hi-hinata" Koru struggled to say. "you...c-can come o-out n-n-now" His shoulder was bleeding.

[Kairi*]

Hinata walked over to him"what happend?"she asked looking at the blood

[ShikaX]

"N-nothing." Koru said and took a step then fell onto the ground.

[Kairi*]

Hinata helped him up"it dosnt look like nothing"she said"why are you bleeding?"She asked

[ShikaX]

"I t-told you, i-i-its nothing." Koru said and closed his eyes as the seal of shadows appeared under his shirt on his shoulder.

[Frogs557]

Orochimaru watched through a water eye jutsu and laughed. "Soon you will join me, Koru" he laughed again and Koru thought he could hear a faint laughing in his ear.

[Kairi*]

"please Koru,tell me"said Hinata"i just know somethings wrong"she said

[ShikaX]

"It's nothing!" Koru said in a slight shout of anger.

[Kairi*]

Hinata stood there looking at him"yes"she said"im sorry if i got you mad"she said,then seat him on the ground and walked over to a far lake,and sat down next to it

[Frogs557]

Now, Now.... Koru heard a voice in his ear. You be nice, Koru. I have something for you. come see me at the valley of the end or else that mark will kill you. Oh, and come alone or you'll die anyway.

[ShikaX]

Damnit! Get out of my head! Koru slammed a fist in the wall. "I'm leaving Jiraia in charge of this mission, I have to do something." He said and then slowly walked away.

[Kairi*]

Hinata splashed water on her face"something is wrong with Koru,i just know it"she said,then jumped into the trees and quietly followed Koru

[ShikaX]

"Hinata, leave, I'll be okay." Koru said and made his way into the forest.

[Kairi*]

Hinata jumped down from the tree"how did he hear me?"she thought,then she followed him,quietly

[Frogs557]

Orochimaru sat in the valley and waited paiently for Koru.

[ShikaX]

Hinata jumped down from the tree"how did he hear me?"she thought,then she followed him,quietly

"Hinata, I told you, I'll be alright. Go be with Naruto and them." Koru said begining to get annoyed.

[Kairi*]

Hinata watched him walk away"but i dont know where they are"she wispered to herself,and watched him walk

[ShikaX]

Koru made his way to the valley of the end alone.

[Kairi*]

Hinata slowly followed Koru,and saw a valley,and hid behind a tree at the end of the forest"what is this place?"she asked herself

[ShikaX]

Before Koru entered the valley he looked back. Then did a shadowhold jutsu on Hinata. "I told you, don't follow me!" he said annoyed.

[Kairi*]

"well i didnt want anything to happend to you"she said"ill stay right here,i wont go into the vally"she said

[ShikaX]

"No, you'll go right back with the others." Koru said walking tworads her.

[Frogs557]

Suddenly Orochimaru dropped down from the sky and spin kicked Hinata into the lake. "now that we're alone," Orochimaru turned to Koru, "I think it's time I gave you a lesson."
Suddenly Koru's Curse mark began glowing red and firey pain shot through his body.

[Kairi*]

Suddenly Orochimaru dropped down from the sky and spin kicked Hinata into the lake. "now that we're alone," Orochimaru turned to Koru, "I think it's time I gave you a lesson."
Suddenly Koru's Curse mark began glowing red and firey pain shot through his body.
Hinata was knockedout underwater

[ShikaX]

"AAUUGGHH!!!!"Koru said and fell to his knees.

[Frogs557]

Orochimaru lifted his hand and Koru was covered with curse marks. Koru tried to fight it but found he couldn't move.

[ShikaX]

Koru was still on his knees.

[Kairi*]

Hinata opend her eyes,and swam up,once her head was out of the water she breathed,and jumped out of the water"leave him alone!"she yelled and threw a Katana at him

[Frogs557]

Orochimaru laughed and caught the katana in mid air. "You're nothing!" He laughed as he lifted his hand and Hinata flew back into the water.

[Kairi*]

Hinata swam up"who is this guy?"she thought

[Frogs557]

Orochimaru lifted his hand again and Hinata plunged back under water.

[ShikaX]

((what to post what to post...))

[Kairi*]

Hinata strugled to swim back up"this guy is going to kill me"she thought trying to swim back up

[Frogs557]

Orochimaru laughs and Koru is flung into the air, still unable to move.

[ShikaX]

((okay))

Koru landed with a thud still on his knees. Still in pain.

((thi is a very weird picture lol))

[Frogs557]

"Now have you felt the pain?" Orochimaru yelled. He lifted his hand and Korus pain got worse. "If you will ever be as strong as me, You must feel the pain of the curse mark."

[Kairi*]

Hinata swam up"what am i going to do?"she asked herself,then jumped out of the water and hit him in his arm

[ShikaX]

"GGAAUUGGHH!!" Koru screamed coughing up blood.

[Frogs557]

"Now you are ready." Orochimaru said, "You are ready."

[ShikaX]

Koru had a stream of blood coming from his mouth, not wanting to speak, even if he could.

[Frogs557]

Orochimaru jumped onto the valley wall, "Remember this, you will be my follower."
Orochimaru disappeared and Koru had to endure the pain for three more hours before the curse mark went back to his shoulder.

[ShikaX]

((owy, you can tell Hinata won't let him go you know.))

Koru sat there in pain on the grass.

[Frogs557]

A whisper went in Korus ear, "You will be my follower."

[Kairi*]

Hinata jumped out of the water,and looked around,and saw them,and walked over to them"Koru dont listen to him!''she yelled

[ShikaX]

After that whisper Koru was well uncosious.

((that's just my thing.))

[Frogs557]

((Um, just saying, Orochimaru disappeared and has been gone 3 hours by the time Hinata woke up. Also, the whisper was in his ear so Hinata couldn't hear it.))

[ShikaX]

Soon the curse mark slowly went back to Koru's shoulder.

[Frogs557]

Koru still felt the aftershock of the curse mark as he limped back to Konoha

[ShikaX]

Koru leaned on the gate and told the gaurds to go get naruto and the others.

[Roxas1]

sai looks at koru and than goes home alon in the dark

[sorakeychain]

Naruto runned straight to Koru " What apened??" he ask

[Frogs557]

((Hey, I was wondering if I could be that guy who works with Gaara, He has the scarecrow but his name escapes me))

[sorakeychain]

(( that works with Gaara... is it a guy that has a pupet??))

[Frogs557]

((Yes, He calls it a scarecrow. Can I be him? And above all, can you tell me his name?))

[sorakeychain]

(( lol, if he works with Gaara and has a pupet, then the name is Kankuro he's Gaara's brother:D And yeah u can be him))

[Frogs557]

((Thanx!))
Kankuro ran up to Naruto, "What's wrong?"

[sorakeychain]

" Hi Kankurou, u alredy know dont u?...." Naruto asked