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kingdomheartsjunkie
05-31-2007, 08:12 AM
Hey peoples this is gonna be a thread where i am just gonna post all my songs that i have written they will all have backstories

this is my first one it is just a chorus
my friends where saying my problems werent that big and that they have way worse when really they do not know what is going on at home at the moment

What If my brothers dieng
What if my Mothers Crying
What if I've been lieing
Putting on a show
Nobody Knows How I feel
SomeTimes They Pain is Too real
What if it is all true
And it comes crashing down on me

namine the nobody
05-31-2007, 02:23 PM
um..... i think it's ok

Helix: The True Hero
05-31-2007, 02:29 PM
lol....just a little bit short.

K H P
05-31-2007, 06:43 PM
I wish I knew how like it's suppose to go...but it is alright :D

Helix: The True Hero
05-31-2007, 06:50 PM
I wish I knew how like it's suppose to go...but it is alright :D

You mean melody? durr durrr durrr

K H P
05-31-2007, 06:59 PM
Helix...just shhh...

Helix: The True Hero
05-31-2007, 07:03 PM
Helix...just shhh...

*Just shhh's*

Darkwatch
05-31-2007, 08:11 PM
<I>[QUOTE]
What If my brothers dieng
What if my Mothers Crying

<I>What if I've been lieing

kingdomheartsjunkie
06-01-2007, 06:58 AM
yeah it is only short because it is only a chorus
and what do you mean darky?

[EDIT]
Easily Broken

My friends push me around the say i can take it (take it)
It just one word one push one line
I say and scream i cant handle that
they go on saying i'm strong

[chorus]
everybody thinks i am strong
but i am weak as a twig
easily broken
but so hard to fix

i cry alone at night reading a fairytale
wondering why my life is like this
i dream of a better life
a one were everything perfect
and they dont think

[chorus]

my friends they say it just one more fight
i can take the punches and live to tell the tale
they dont know how weak and frail i am in side

[chorus]x2

Darkwatch
06-02-2007, 06:49 PM
Sorry about that post. I wrote out an ENTIRE review for your songs....

But it didn't appear.... >_> *grunt*

kingdomheartsjunkie
07-15-2007, 12:56 AM
ok that aint good i got another bit of a song
Me and my friend wrote this

Unnamed

You Loved
I lost
You Were Afraid
I loved
You Too
But Boy Was I Betrayed
Love Came
To me
But I Just Pushed It Away

Because Love It Broke Me Down
And It Didnt Put Me Back
You Cant Fix What I Have Found
Because My Life I Way Off Track