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N@m!n3
06-06-2007, 05:58 AM
A list of poems I wrote in my free time:

Uncurtained
~~~~~~~~
A time when lights could not be shut off
even with their cords pulled from the wall
Harsh and bright and made of nameless stuff
The hidden face of my every wish and fear
shining for friends and enemies alike to see

A time when every word spoken low and softly
rang amplified a thousand times and more
Shouted from rooftops to silent streets
My every thought a known thing, naked
No secret too submerged for common view

A time of weariness and wariness combined
Close to madness, yet not so well defined
Transparency of soul if soul I even have
Where's the madness to be seen through glass
A life better lived with uncurtained windows

Honesty
~~~~~~
I look into your face, and wonder what you want with me, cuz everyone wants something, no one hangs around for free.
Your eyes are so sincere, and in your lovely smile I bask, as I wonder all the while, what's behind your pretty mask?
What underneath do you conceal?
Devil? demon? angel? sprite?
are you needy, angry, viscious, lost?
Apathetic? filled with fright?
There's so many ways to suffer now, and life is so confused, it's no wonder that the bulk of us, are sure we've been abused.
So why don't you just spit it out
and lay it on the line?
take off the guise that hides the truth, be honest just one time.
But the world revolves on bullsh**, we all balance on the fence, to risk a fall with honesty I guess just makes no sense.

The girl with cat like looks
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
cat-like looks, she thinks
shadows & eyeliner, too much'she knows
hidden glances, realizing ... realizing
raised in a rape-cultured world
she doesn't know.
brand-new curves, she thinks
stitches & denim, too tight'she knows
secret grooves, moving ... moving
guided to a new moon-rhythm
she doesn't know.
weird-wonderful games, she thinks
halts & hesitations, too soon'she knows
hidden bodies, breathing ... breathing
allied in a strange pain-dance
she doesn't know.
morning-after blues, she thinks
prayers & intuitions, too late'she knows
secret senses, forming ... forming
married to a girl-mom identity
she doesn't know.

Virgin State of Mind
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
There's a chair in my head, on which I used to sit
took a pencil and I wrote the following on it
now there's a key where my wonderful mouth used to be
dig it up, throw it at me
where can i run to? where can i hide?
who will i turn to? now im in a virgin state of mind
got a knife to disengage the voids that i can't bear
to cut out words that i've got written on my chair
like do u think i'm sexy? do u think i really care?
virgin state of mind

The old lady
~~~~~~~~
I sit alone at my windowsill,
trees crackle, sunshine blares,
and children laugh like death.
their sharp hapiness is a knife in me,
a jealous snake on a windowsill.
they will be here, trees and sun, and children with pruney skin,
when i am just a memory,
a laugh in the trees of time.
i sit alone and try to love them,
i sit alone, a snake.
i sit alone and try to love them,
i sit alone and laugh.

The girl without face
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Her emotion
spoken through words and actions
a smile is her mask
slowly the mask cracks and crumbles
out comes the most beautiful goddess anyone has seen
anger is her power
crying is her cleansing
she passes by only leaving destruction and sorrow
in the end no one knows her
she's but a memory
faded
hurt
shady
in the end.......she doesn't give a fuc*
all she can do is do what she does best.....make the heart beat

Break me
~~~~~~~
Break me
need me
go ahead and teaze me
cause' all that you do in the end I be alright
too complicated
no time to be alright
an answer
no time to find it
too buisy?
well make some time cause'....
you broke me
needed me
in the end you'll bleed for me
forgetting?
not simple.....
oops......I forgot what I was forgetting....

fallenxangel
06-06-2007, 07:22 AM
those are really good!

Darkness Falls
06-06-2007, 01:59 PM
I like though I always like to put a rhyme in my poems...
but Overall its Great:D

N@m!n3
06-23-2007, 08:06 AM
I don't feel like making another thread so I just post another poem here...only one person has read it and thought it was good, so I decided to post it.

cat-like looks, she thinks
shadows & eyeliner, too much'she knows
hidden glances, realizing ... realizing
raised in a rape-cultured world
she doesn't know.
brand-new curves, she thinks
stitches & denim, too tight'she knows
secret grooves, moving ... moving
guided to a new moon-rhythm
she doesn't know.
weird-wonderful games, she thinks
halts & hesitations, too soon'she knows
hidden bodies, breathing ... breathing
allied in a strange pain-dance
she doesn't know.
morning-after blues, she thinks
prayers & intuitions, too late'she knows
secret senses, forming ... forming
married to a girl-mom identity
she doesn't know.

Shadow Knights
06-23-2007, 08:21 AM
wow..

*snaps..* :D

nice..

Door To Light
06-23-2007, 08:22 AM
Wow, those are some great poems N@m!n3, Nice Job:D *Thumbs up*

N@m!n3
06-24-2007, 04:33 AM
k I edited my first post and listed all the poems I wrote, I'm going to keep on adding to the list, and everyone can check them out by clicking the link in my siggy.....

Requiem4ADream
06-24-2007, 06:33 AM
they're beautiful...im honored and priveleged to say that ur with me.

K H P
06-24-2007, 01:00 PM
Lol, you guys go out, sheez n@m! is pimpin the whole forum ;)

badass poems, snap snap indeed.

Skye Wielder of Heaven
06-24-2007, 01:13 PM
Yeah, poems deep, so hardcore. I think she's on invisible mode but I'm not sure if she's on.

N@m!n3
06-24-2007, 08:01 PM
Lol, you guys go out, sheez n@m! is pimpin the whole forum ;)

badass poems, snap snap indeed.

lol.....but I'm not with him....

K H P
06-24-2007, 10:23 PM
oh, *cough* I never said that, what are you talking about? *whistles* good poems *runs away*

N@m!n3
06-28-2007, 02:58 AM
Another one. not really a poem, more like an excerpt or a long haiku. lol

Break me
~~~~~~~
Break me
need me
go ahead and teaze me
cause' all that you do in the end I be alright
too complicated
no time to be alright
an answer
no time to find it
too buisy?
well make some time cause'....
you broke me
needed me
in the end you'll bleed for me
forgetting?
not simple.....
oops......I forgot what I was forgetting....

Aros-figure it out
06-28-2007, 03:30 AM
"Hidden Hearts"
By: Aaron G.

When I see you,
My heart starts to yurn.
My palms start to sweat.
And my brain starts to turn.

My mind starts to run,
With thoughts of you,
and me.
But it can't be true.

We'll never be together.
You and I.
Even though being without you,
I feel like I am about to die.

You look like an Angel.
You sound like one aswell.
You are perfect ,to me, in every way.
You have me under a spell.

But when you come up to me.
I hide how I feel,
And give you a lie.
Knowing my heart will never heal.

In the end.
It is something I'll never do.
Is admit,
"I love you."

N@m!n3
06-28-2007, 03:34 AM
lol I like your poem more :D.

Door To Light
06-28-2007, 03:35 AM
Wow guys, those are some really good impressive poems, nice job *Thumbs up*

Demon_Yuki_Roxas
06-28-2007, 04:55 AM
here one of my old poems

In the glistering starry night,
The moon full and brightly shining,
Three kids’ stood waiting quietly,
One girl happy as others come by,
The other two family to each other,
The road quiet as a mouse as time past by,
The boy grew wheezy from the dream the night before,
They all grew frighten as a cry was heard in the distance,
There was no one there standing in the road,
No footsteps were heard when they started playing,
The boy decided to go back in the cold and dark house.

Skye Wielder of Heaven
06-28-2007, 05:16 AM
Nice poem.......

Demon_Yuki_Roxas
06-28-2007, 05:23 AM
Thanks..........

BirthBySleep
06-30-2007, 10:23 AM
Yo make some of those into songs, they're pretty dece.

Namine
06-30-2007, 01:50 PM
Great poems!!^_^

ShadowFire
08-20-2007, 12:14 PM
heaps good