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TwilightKeeper
06-23-2007, 03:06 AM
I do not know if this is a poem but anyways.....

"To reach across the heavens and touch one's innermost desires.... Can such a thing be done? Even thought we all share the same world, somehow we make our own world through what we experience. Time, truth, happiness, bad, good, evil, wrong, and rigth are all different for each person. To say that the world is "not fair" is something I do not like. To me, the world is plenty "fair". And it is only as "not fair" as I let it be......"

I think it's ok if I post this here.......

Door To Light
06-23-2007, 04:50 AM
Wow, that is really good TK, i mean its from the Heart, i like it:)

Shadow of Light
06-23-2007, 04:52 AM
It truly from the heart the TK. It better than the letter that Kairi wrote to Sora.

Mara
06-23-2007, 06:42 AM
Hey that was good! Nice work!

N@m!n3
06-23-2007, 07:58 AM
Very fluid, I like it, and no poems don't need to rhyme all the time.