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Yoto
07-02-2007, 04:06 PM
Okay:
Ive been making comics for a long time and Im making a new one and I want people to see if they like this or not.
It's a preview of: YOTO

The story from a world not so distant from ours..........
A long time ago, there was a war over the Inue, a mystical sword that had the most ultimate power in the world. Many fought over this, but none have lived. The war still rages on to this day, but none succeed.....
A sorcerrer named Yoto looked forward this. He trained and trained until one day his life was ruined.
Someone managed to get the Inue. This person was a swordsman looking for the power of darkness. He raided Yoto's town, for he wanted the world to end. Yoto, the last surviver, vowed that he would find this swordsman and finish him off for what he had done to his home and family. Now he has gained allies to defeat the swordsman and finally restore peace to the shattered world.
NOw.... was the time of a new risen hero.....

G3no
07-02-2007, 11:33 PM
Try your best not to ever use He, his, they, she, her, it. Instead use their formal names, especially in the cases of the protagonist antagonist and important items like the Inue, always refer to the "Inue" by stating the name "Inue".