barrY !
07-03-2007, 04:19 PM
Hello, everybody! I always wanted to make a fanfic about KH, but never had time nor inspiration to make one, well, I had some ideas of a story I'd like to share with all of you... I'll post here the intro, as well as the cast of characters up to the "chapter" the story's on, as well as a quick summary. Your opinions (please, only constructive criticism) as well as your interest in the story is what will keep it moving on, so, if many of you think the story is uninteresting, tell me if I should try to improve it of, if it's THAT bad, tell a mod to close the thread ok? Well, let's begin then.
INTRODUCTION: Beau is a 17-year-old young man living in Radiant Gardens with his two best friends, March and Hammer. He LOVES science in all its aspects, and his "heroes" are all the scientists that made great discoveiries around the world; however, one "team of heroes" are the ones he admires the most: Ansem the Wise and his six apprendices - he even met them in person, and seldom went to their lab to see how things went, so that he could learn things with all of them - everyone of the apprendices liked him, as well as Ansem (the only exception was Xehanort, who ignored the poor guy). Everything was fine until... that day. Due to a failed experiment, Ansem and all of his six apprendices were missing. Since that day, Beau is searching for the team of heroes he most admired. As story unfolds, Beau discovers many things about his "heroes" as well as what happened and is happening to all worlds since that day, some things are happy ones and many are sad ones.
CAST OF CHARACTERS UNTIL NOW:
Beau: As said in the introduction, Beau is a science-lover and admires Ansem the Wise and his crew and the hero of this tale. He lived in Radiant Gardens since he was a baby, altough he has no memory of his family. The first memory of somebody he has is of March and Hammer, his two best friends, who share a similar fate. Since then, they live in a hideout they like to call Seventh Heaven. He's kinda stubborn sometimes, although he has a strong sense of justice. A lazy guy, he doesn't like to work, and all the money he gets is borrowing from Hammer. There are rumors his debt with Hammer is bigger than 50,000 munny.
NOTE: I'll try to post a drawing of Beau today of tommorow.
Hammer: A 17-year-old, just like Beau. Hammer is a born genius, and makes lots of inventions and sells them - that is, he's the one that receives money so that he can help Beau and March financially. A cool-headed guy, and pretty much a nice man over all. He's responsible, so he's more or less the "baby-sitter" of the group.
NOTE: Maybe I'll post a picture of him.
March: The only girl of the group. Her real name is Marcella, and she's 16-years-old. A kind-hearted lass, although she gets angry really easy (and when she does, oh boy). Beau holds the record for making her angry, since she does all the chores in the hideout and he does absolutely nothing. The only thing that he has to remind her of the family is a pendant, with a very old picture of her mother and father inside of it.
NOTE: I'll post a picture of her along with the story, if the tale is "successful".
Ansem the Wise and his six apprendices: Well you know about them... no need for me to introduce them... for more information, check the instruction booklet of KH2 or the Wikipedia ok? :D
So, for now, that's what I have. Tell me what you think and please do tell if it's the story (for now) seems good enough to continue it, ok? Thanks for your time, and sorry for the text-behemoth.
INTRODUCTION: Beau is a 17-year-old young man living in Radiant Gardens with his two best friends, March and Hammer. He LOVES science in all its aspects, and his "heroes" are all the scientists that made great discoveiries around the world; however, one "team of heroes" are the ones he admires the most: Ansem the Wise and his six apprendices - he even met them in person, and seldom went to their lab to see how things went, so that he could learn things with all of them - everyone of the apprendices liked him, as well as Ansem (the only exception was Xehanort, who ignored the poor guy). Everything was fine until... that day. Due to a failed experiment, Ansem and all of his six apprendices were missing. Since that day, Beau is searching for the team of heroes he most admired. As story unfolds, Beau discovers many things about his "heroes" as well as what happened and is happening to all worlds since that day, some things are happy ones and many are sad ones.
CAST OF CHARACTERS UNTIL NOW:
Beau: As said in the introduction, Beau is a science-lover and admires Ansem the Wise and his crew and the hero of this tale. He lived in Radiant Gardens since he was a baby, altough he has no memory of his family. The first memory of somebody he has is of March and Hammer, his two best friends, who share a similar fate. Since then, they live in a hideout they like to call Seventh Heaven. He's kinda stubborn sometimes, although he has a strong sense of justice. A lazy guy, he doesn't like to work, and all the money he gets is borrowing from Hammer. There are rumors his debt with Hammer is bigger than 50,000 munny.
NOTE: I'll try to post a drawing of Beau today of tommorow.
Hammer: A 17-year-old, just like Beau. Hammer is a born genius, and makes lots of inventions and sells them - that is, he's the one that receives money so that he can help Beau and March financially. A cool-headed guy, and pretty much a nice man over all. He's responsible, so he's more or less the "baby-sitter" of the group.
NOTE: Maybe I'll post a picture of him.
March: The only girl of the group. Her real name is Marcella, and she's 16-years-old. A kind-hearted lass, although she gets angry really easy (and when she does, oh boy). Beau holds the record for making her angry, since she does all the chores in the hideout and he does absolutely nothing. The only thing that he has to remind her of the family is a pendant, with a very old picture of her mother and father inside of it.
NOTE: I'll post a picture of her along with the story, if the tale is "successful".
Ansem the Wise and his six apprendices: Well you know about them... no need for me to introduce them... for more information, check the instruction booklet of KH2 or the Wikipedia ok? :D
So, for now, that's what I have. Tell me what you think and please do tell if it's the story (for now) seems good enough to continue it, ok? Thanks for your time, and sorry for the text-behemoth.