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xaldin's_my_nobody
07-03-2007, 06:36 PM
-in disney castle-

-a boy wakes up in the royal chambers-

boy: where am i

king mickey: good your awake

boy: where am i, who r u, where is my sister

km: settle down michael

michael: where is my little sister!!!???

km: well i found u outside of my castle with a note on your face it said 'take care of him he is one of the reancarnations -your old friend riku

michael: o yah that riku guy beat me up in my world he told me to stop the three main copies of me, he said i must destroy my heartless my nobody and my chaser

km: michael come i will help u with ur task

-they go to a secret chamber-

km: -goes into a secret room and comes out with somthing long and rapped in cloth- here u can use this to help u on your quest

michael: -unraps it and in it is a long silver battle staff with a handle just like the keyblade that belongs to sora- wht is this

km: that is the kingdom staff

michael: wht do i do with it

km: fight your self here take this -pulls a curtain and there is a gummi_cycle-

michael: -gets on the g.c.- can u explane to me wht i have to do

km: -sigh- fine -clears throat- when u were back in your own world ur sister got her heart stolen, then u tried to help her by sacrificing urself and that is when u gave your heart to your sister and your heartless and nobody came to be,u r made up of your heart body and soul, when ur heart left your body and soul they became a nobody and ur heart became ur heartless, ur heartless is called clawer, because it has long claws plus it looks just like u exapt pure shadow, now ur nobody is called leachmixand and has 2 battle staves one that is good* and one that is evil*, then once u defeat your nobody he will die and u will then have to fight your chaser who comes to being when u kill your nobody, ur chaser is your soul that becomes a new version of you with a key blade that represents the element of the nobody, ur nobody's element is wind so keep that in mind

michael: ok and now im off



*authors note the weapons of good and evil that leachmix has r the oblivion and oathkeeper


does any one like this because i will keep writing

Chaser's Apprentice
07-03-2007, 08:51 PM
I WOULD grade this and give tips like I am everyone else's short stories, but this isn't in story format.
<GO DEMYX, LUXORD, AND HAPPY FEET>

Wzrdto25
07-04-2007, 12:02 AM
your sig is way to big
and lolz
the story sounds like an rpg

xaldin's_my_nobody
07-04-2007, 12:54 AM
i was bored so i just started typing until my hands started to hurt so then i just finished it