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sora78
08-06-2007, 10:12 PM
(VS1.girl i cannot sleep at night thinkin bout you its like ansomniation every little minute im thinkin bout you girl my hearts been broken into a million little pieces ever since broke up with me.VS2. you crushed my heart every time i see you my spirits drop since you been gone i aint been my self.VS3. I cant possibly live without you cause im broken into a million little pieces i done stopped believin in myself cause im broken yeah!!!)
i wrote that myself

Guitar Expert
08-08-2007, 09:01 PM
Sounds cool to me.

Helix: The True Hero
08-10-2007, 05:29 AM
Well we can't really judge how good a song is just by looking at the lyrics. Beat and melody....and sound are useful too.